Liz Fielding's Little Book of Writing Romance
By Liz Fielding
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No matter where you are in your writing journey, multi-award winning romance author Liz Fielding’s straight-forward, no jargon guide to writing Bestselling Romance shows you what it takes to get there. She does not confuse with the science of writing, but shows clearly, using examples, how to use the first line to grab your reader, how to write great dialogue, how to create characters that readers will care about.
Liz Fielding’s Little Book of Writing Romance is laid out in ten,easy-to-understand chapters covering all the main points on the craft of romance writing, including how to—
Grab the Reader on the First Page
Create Great Characters
Use Conflict
Write Deep Emotion
Use Sexual Tension
Write Crisp Dialogue
Use Viewpoint
Construct a Four-Dimensional World
The Author
Liz Fielding is the author of sixty plus romances that have been translated in over twenty languages. She has been nominated seven times for the Romance Writers’ of America RITA® award, winning twice with The Best Man & the Bridesmaid and The Marriage Miracle. She has been nominated five times for the UK’s Romantic Novelists’ Association “Romance Prize”, winning with A Family of His Own.
She has also received a Lifetime Achievement Award from Romantic Times BOOKclub magazine.
Liz Fielding
Liz Fielding was born with itchy feet. She made it to Zambia before her twenty-first birthday and, gathering her own special hero and a couple of children on the way, lived in Botswana, Kenya and Bahrain. Eight of her titles were nominated for the Romance Writers' of America Rita® award and she won with The Best Man & the Bridesmaid and The Marriage Miracle. In 2019, the Romantic Novelists' Association honoured her with a Lifetime Achievement Award.
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Liz Fielding's Little Book of Writing Romance - Liz Fielding
LIZ FIELDING’S
LITTLE BOOK
OF
WRITING ROMANCE
Classic Romance Publishing
Published by Liz Fielding
Smashwords edition
Copyright 2012 Liz Fielding
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
Title Page
Copyright Page
Dedication
Liz Fielding
Writing Romance
Chapter One — Grab the reader on the first page
Chapter Two — Create characters your reader will care about
Chapter Three — Ensure the conflict is big enough to carry the story
Chapter Four — Dig deep for emotion
Chapter Five — Developing the romance; Sexual tension
Chapter Six — Write realistic dialogue
Chapter Seven — Viewpoint
Chapter Eight — Construct a four-dimensional world
Chapter Nine — Give the reader a satisfying ending
Chapter Ten — The basics
Some Further Reading
Some Writing Organisations
Some Romance Publishers’ Websites
More by Liz Fielding
The right of Liz Fielding to be identified as the author of this work has been asserted by her in accordance with the Copyright, Designs and Patent Act 1988
First published in 2011
All rights reserved.
No part of this book may be reproduced or distributed in any printed or electronic form or stored in an information retrieval system (other than for the purposes of review) without the express permission of the author given in writing.
Cover design by N J Allsopp
This book is dedicated to all the wonderful editors who have eased the path through my own personal writing journey with special thanks to Gillian Green, Ceri Davies, Emma Dunford and Bryony Green.
Thank you all for your encouragement, your patience and the Champagne.
Thanks too, to Donna Alward for her help and suggestions.
It is also dedicated to the Romantic Novelists’ Association and the dozens of fabulous romance authors from all over the world I’ve met and corresponded with during the last twenty years.
Thanks for the friendship, the fun, for just being there.
Finally, but most important of all, it is dedicated with all my heart to my endlessly
supportive husband and children, who ignored the dust, ate the takeaways
and cheered me every step of the way.
About Liz Fielding
Liz Fielding is the author of more than sixty romances and has been nominated seven times for the Romance Writers’ of America RITA® award, winning twice with The Best Man & the Bridesmaid and The Marriage Miracle. She has also been nominated three times for the UK’s Romantic Novelists’ Association Romance Prize
, winning with A Family of His Own.
She has also received a Lifetime Achievement Award recognition from
Romantic Times BOOKclub magazine
She gives talks and holds workshops on the craft of writing romance.
A full list of her books is available at
http://www.lizfielding.com
The first rule of writing is that there are no rules.
WRITING ROMANCE
This little book is a primer, an entry level aid for the writer who has a story to tell, but is struggling to get it out of her head and onto paper. To quote the theme song for the movie of Erich Segal’s bestselling book, Love Story, How do you begin…
I know how that feels, I’ve been there and I have written the book I wish I’d had when I was starting out.
My purpose is to explain, in the simplest terms — no jargon! — and using examples from my own work, how to make the transition from the story in your head to words on paper. How to write a compelling opening, deepen conflict, write honest emotion, hopefully with a touch of humour to leaven the mix. How to write crisp dialogue, develop the romance, add a little sizzle.
It will be useful to anyone who wants to write popular fiction but, before we get down to the nitty-gritty, I’d like to say a few words about romantic fiction in particular. Why readers love it and come back for more.
The primary purpose of a romance novel is to elicit a positive emotional experience for the reader. Make her smile, make her cry, make her sigh with pleasure. To put it in a nutshell, give her a good time.
To achieve that, you must give her characters she will root for, characters who are pursuing a heartfelt passion, a compelling goal, something that really matters.
It might be her career that is driving your heroine, or the protection of her family, or something as basic as survival, but it will be a goal that the reader understands, that she will empathise with, that she will care about.
You must give her characters with whom she’s happy to share hours of her precious time, characters who, no matter what their faults may be — and perfection is so dull — are likeable.
Give your reader a hero and heroine who had a life before your book begins, who are meant to be together — who don’t just fall in love because you put them together in a book — and who your reader can imagine having a life after the last line.
Real people, taking the journey of their lives.
CHAPTER ONE
GRAB THE READER ON THE FIRST PAGE
Begin your story at a moment of crisis, a point in time when your character’s life is about to change for ever.
— Mollie Blake’s Writing Workshop Notes from Secret Wedding by Liz Fielding
The first page of your book makes a promise to the reader. Come with me and I will entertain you, amuse you, warm you, bring a tear to your eye, a sigh of contentment to your heart.
You make that promise by—
Showing the reader your characters
Raising questions
Using dialogue, action, movement to engage the reader’s attention
The opening paragraph of any book is a make-or-break moment. It is the moment when you have to convince the reader to buy your book. Not the reader in the bookstore, but the very first and most important reader — the acquiring editor at the publishing house where your manuscript will be just one among the thousands sent to them every year.
It won’t have a glossy cover or teasing blurb written by a marketing department, skilled in selling fantasy, to tempt her. It will be a simple, unadorned manuscript, exactly like dozens of others that she will read every week and all you have to grab her attention are your words.
You will have two pages, or maybe three if she's feeling generous, to convince her that your book is worth more than a minute or two of her time.
A great opening to chapter four with a crisis of heart-rending proportions won't help you make a sale if she doesn't get that far.
The opening is important. Start at the moment of change, the crisis, the day when the clock strikes thirteen.
More, the opening must raise expectations in the reader, set the mood, the style of the book. Ask yourself —
Is it sharp and direct?
Is there