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Jeffrey Klassen
Professor Kanter
junior year of high school. I told this story from the perspective of one who was both
negatively effected and learned a lot from the consequences of this experience. The
underage drinking and the possible negative outcomes that could result from underage
right away, so I opened my speech by asking the audience, “How many of you have been
caught drinking?” This grabbed the audience’s attention right away. My speech matched
my MAP decisions. I feel that the speech portrayed my intended message. I believe that
through the account of the specific and not so glamorous details of this story, I was able
to make my audience aware of the darker and less appealing side of drinking. My speech
was effectively aimed at my Communications Skills class. The topic was one that
probably many of the audience members could relate to because it can be assumed that
most of them consume alcoholic beverages on a weekly basis. I also curtailed my diction
to my specific audience. I did this by using informal phrases such as “buzz” and “throw-
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up” in my speech. I feel that this story also entertained my target audience. I got this
feeling based on the periodic laughs that could be heard in the classroom.
In addition to appropriate content and organization, I believe that the speech was
delivered effectively. I came to the table with an engaging story. This provided me with a
good basis from which I could build my speech. From that point, I focused on telling the
story naturally. Telling the story naturally allowed me to use a varying tone of voice, hand
gestures, keep eye contact with audience members, and use interesting diction. My visual
aid helped drive my point home. By presenting to the class a shot glass that I looked at to
remind me of the mistake I made, I made it hit home that I was serious about my decision
to not drink.
“B” on this presentation. I deserve a “B” because I obeyed the project’s format and
organizational constraints, I used the correct visuals, and I had a very compelling and
interesting speech. There were some things I could have done better. These include
eliminating the word “um” from my speech, using entirely correct diction, and
maintaining better eye contact with my audience. In my next speech, I will work on better
eye contact with my audience and perfecting my diction. Because of this speech, I will be