Marking Scheme

Key Explanation capital letter needed/ not needed divide sentence check word ending incomplete sentence link ideas together in one sentence new paragraph punctuation needed/ not needed plural repetition spelling error london should be London Yellow should be yellow 'The two of them met often when walking the dogs it was near to both of their homes' should be 'The two of them met often when walking the dogs. It was near to both of their homes.' 'He liked talked to her' should be 'He liked talking to her' The best meal ever should be It was the best meal ever He went for a walk. As she drove up the drive should be He went for a walk as she drove up the drive. one paragraph for each new subject its hot should be its hot I have four dogs should be I have four dogs The learners mind was made up should be the learners minds were made up 'It was a nice day and the food was nice too.' should be 'It was a nice day and the food was delicious.' The noise effected him should be The noise affected him He practiced regularly should be He practised regularly Example

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Explanation subject-verb agreement tense unclear pronoun word missing word order wrong word not sure what this means

Example he receive should be he receives He showed that he is in trouble by waving furiously should be he showed that he was in trouble by waving furiously Sarah and Raj met up with Shernette and Jack. Their car had broken down so they were late. (Which couple was late?) 'She found out he lied.' should be 'She found out he had lied. Ive been also to the city should be Ive also been to the city he would of come should be he would have come

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