Formatting REP = Rephrase. Write this sentence differently.
2.0-3.0 Spacing CAPS for TITLES AWK = Awkward sounding sentence. Indented paragraphs E.g. I feel difficult. I feel stressed.
Mechanics SC = Style Change.
Punctuation Spelling G= Grammar error. Grammar following S-V-O? A? = Missing or incorrect article. Structure E.g. She ate apple. Sandwich shape? She ate an apple. -Paragraph 1 = Intro -Paragraph 2, 3, 4, etc = Body Frag = Sentence fragment. An incomplete sentence missing -Final Paragraph = Conclusion some part of “subject-verb- TS, CS, Supporting Details object” Intro = Hook + Thesis E.g. walked home. -Thesis = clear, precise, relevant He walked home.
Conclusion = Reflects P1 + Thesis?
RO = Run on sentence. One sentence that should be two Style sentences (or more!). Sentences FLOW? E.g. Darren loves his wife so much he -Linking words? thinks of her all the time. Formal Tone? Darren loves his wife so much -No “You’s” or “We’s” He thinks of her all the time. (except for instruction paragraphs) -No CONTRACTIONS (e.g. don’t, didn’t) C-AWK = Awkward sounding sentence Helpful pictures/diagrams that can help starting with a conjunction. me communicate more clearly? It can be corrected by connecting it with another complete sentence. Other Important Questions E.g. Because it looked good. Is my info., ideas, and opinions I bought it because it looked good. relevant and appropriate to my reading audience? VA = Verb agreement problem. E.g. She like ice cream. Will my audience care about my written She likes ice cream.. piece? Are there any ideas that I can express = Add a word. more simply or more clearly? E.g. He my friend. Are there any ideas that I need to is explain further with more detail? = Missing phrase, clause, or word. E.g. _________ like to eat beef? Final Check Do you like to eat beef? I have revised my paper at least 2 CAPS = Capitalization error. separate times? E.g. We live in korea We live in Korea
P = Punctuation error. Missing or incorrect . , ; : etc.