1984 Part 2 Response

Writing: Pick one of the prompts and answer it below

Examine Julias belief, If you kept the small rules you could break the big ones (129). Do you
agree or disagree with this statement? Provide examples to support your answer.
Evaluate Winstons belief, The end was contained in the beginning (159).
Differentiate Mr. Charringtons current use of the poem about Londons churches and the
previous times when Winston had heard it.

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Awesome!
I have great discussion of
my prompt (10pts).
I use many grammar
techniques, including simple
sentences, AWUBS, semicolons, and/or dashes and
they are meaningful (10pts).

I effectively integrate
quotes into my writing and
have perfect citation
(10pts).

Got It!
I have solid and clear
discussion of my prompt (89pts).

Almost
I have some discussion of
my prompt, but it needs to
be pushed more (6-7pts).

I use a couple different

grammar techniques we
have learned so far and they
are used in meaningful way
(8-9pts).

I may try to use the

grammar techniques we
have learned so far, but
there are errors (6-7pts).

I integrate quotes into my

writing and have perfect
citation (8-9).

I integrate quotes into my

writing and have citations
for the quotes but they are
awkward and/or cited

Not Quite
I have weak, incomplete, or
confusing discussion of my
prompt; it is too short, or I
have errors (0-5pts).
I fail to use the grammar
techniques and/or there are
many grammar errors (05pts).
I have hovering and/or
missing quotes and I have
incorrect and/or missing
citations (0-5).

1984 Part 2 Response

incorrectly (6-7).