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11/04/13 Essay 2; final draft Citation error FYC 84 Original Version: As Leig Anne !o" y so #lainly stated it$ %Yo" t reaten &y son$ yo" t reaten &e'( Corre)ted Version: As Leig Anne !o" y so #lainly stated it$ %Yo" t reaten &y son$ yo" t reaten &e'( *! e +lind ,ide11/04/13 Essay 2; final draft Citation error FYC 84 Original Version: ,ean sar)asti)ally states$ %. o /o"ld01e t o"g t /e0d a1e a 2la)3 son 2efore /e &et a 4e&o)rat5( Corre)ted Version: ,ean sar)asti)ally states$ %. o /o"ld01e t o"g t /e0d a1e a 2la)3 son 2efore /e &et a 4e&o)rat5( *! e +lind ,ide11/04/13 Essay 2; final draft Citation error FYC 84 Original Version: As s e is s o/ing i& / at /o"ld 2e is roo& for t e ne6t fe/ days$ e says$ %7t0s ni)e$ 7 ne1er ad one 2efore'( 7n )onf"sion$ Leig Anne said$ %. at$ a roo& to yo"rself5( ,adly$ 8i) ael loo3s at er and says$ %A 2ed'( Corre)ted Version: As s e is s o/ing i& / at /o"ld 2e is roo& for t e ne6t fe/ days$ e says$ %7t0s ni)e$ 7 ne1er ad one 2efore'( 7n )onf"sion$ Leig Anne said$ %. at$ a roo& to yo"rself5( ,adly$ 8i) ael loo3s at er and says$ %A 2ed'( *! e +lind ,ide11/04/13 Essay 2; draft 1 ,"29e)t/Ver2 Agree&ent FYC 133 Original Version: 7n t e +lind ,ide$ t e lead ) ara)ters is a / ite fa&ily and one 2la)3 2oy' Corre)ted Version: *o#tion 1-: 7n t e +lind ,ide$ t e lead ) ara)ters are a / ite fa&ily and one 2la)3 2oy' *o#tion 2-: 7n t e +lind ,ide$ t e lead ) ara)ters )onsist of a / ite fa&ily and one 2la)3 2oy' 11/04/13 Essay 1; final essay :"otation error FYC 83 Original Version: ! ey do not &oti1ate &en t ro"g a great #ersonality$ yet t ey "se / at &en /ant t e &ost / i) is a1ing t eir %drea& girl(' Corre)ted Version: ! ey do not &oti1ate &en t ro"g a great #ersonality$ yet t ey "se / at &en /ant t e &ost / i) is a1ing t eir %drea& girl'( 11/04/13 Essay 1; final essay :"otation error FYC 83 Original Version: ! ro"g o"t t e )o&&er)ial$ O0;eal des)ri2es t e 1ariety of #riorities s e as as a %&ot er$ &odel$ a)tress$ and )o"ntry girl(' Corre)ted Version: ! ro"g o"t t e )o&&er)ial$ O0;eal des)ri2es t e 1ariety of #riorities s e as as a %&ot er$ &odel$ a)tress$ and )o"ntry girl'(

11/04/13 Essay 1; final essay :"otation error FYC 83 Original Version: , e des)ri2es t e &a3e"# 2y saying it %loo3s )lean$ nat"ral(' Corre)ted Version: , e des)ri2es t e &a3e"# 2y saying it %loo3s )lean$ nat"ral'( 11/04/13 Essay 1; final essay Co&&a error FYC 148 Original Version: At t e end s e is seen #la)ing t e &a3e"# on er fa)e #rior to a # oto s oot' Corre)ted Version: At t e end$ s e is seen #la)ing t e &a3e"# on er fa)e #rior to a # oto s oot' 11/04/13 Essay 1; final essay Co&&a error FYC 148 Original Version: !o /o&en$ )onfiden)e is 3ey$ and / en yo" a1e )onfiden)e yo" a1e #o/er' Corre)ted Version: !o /o&en$ )onfiden)e is 3ey$ and / en yo" a1e )onfiden)e$ yo" a1e #o/er'