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Secondary Ideas
Example primary idea: The red-tailed swallow is a vital part of the Ungolu ecosystem; if removed, it will allow the corkscrew beetle to reproduce unchecked and destroy even more forest, along with the ecology it supports.
No basis in evidence:
It seems likely that the corkscrew beetles population will increase with the drop in the red-tailed swallow population. The red-tailed swallow likely eats insects, since many birds are insectivores, and its long beak seems to be well-suited to digging the beetles from their burrows, suggesting that it could even be the main predator keeping the corkscrew beetle in check. o Presents only conjecture and guesswork o No basis in evidence; no sources for information are cited
Evidence
Example evidence: This particular beetle is strictly herbivorous - it bores into trees and consumes them from the inside out. Multiple beetles usually live in and feed off of the same tree, killing it in less than three weeks before moving to the next.
Quotation:
The corkscrew beetle, on the other hand, is strictly herbivorous it bores into trees and consumes them from the inside out. Multiple beetles usually live in and feed off of the same tree, killing it in less than three weeks before moving to the next (Andrews 43). o Introduces the quote by giving context and using transitions o Uses exact words from source, surrounded by quotation marks o Uses correct parenthetical citation method in MLA style
Paraphrase:
The corkscrew beetle, on the other hand, is an herbivore. It gets its name from its feeding methods, which involve burrowing into the tree and eating the living wood from within. Multiple beetles usually do this, living in their burrows until the damage kills the tree, which usually takes less than three weeks (Andrews 43). o Maintains key points and detail while using noticeably different phrasing and word choice o Uses correct parenthetical citation method in MLA style
Summary:
Communities of corkscrew beetles, on the other hand, eat their way into a tree, killing it very quickly (Andrews 43). o Expresses the main point of the information o Omits details and significantly shortens the text o Uses correct parenthetical citation method in MLA style