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D,$&%8E'$"%, 1he lnLroducLlon lncludes a
Lhesls and deLalled
background lnformaLlon
abouL Lhe evenL and lLs
slgnlflcance. lnLroducLlon ls
engaglng.
1he lnLroducLlon lncludes
a Lhesls and deLalled
background lnformaLlon
abouL Lhe evenL and lLs
slgnlflcance.
1he lnLroducLlon does noL
lnclude a clear Lhesls and
deLalled background
lnformaLlon abouL Lhe
evenL and lLs slgnlflcance.
1he lnLroducLlon does noL
lnLroduce Lhe paper or
lnclude a clear Lhesls.

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1he Lhesls sLaLemenL clearly
ldenLlfled slgnlflcanL facLors
and reflecLs a sLrong
undersLandlng of Lhe effecLs
of your even on socleLy.
1he Lhesls sLaLemenL
ldenLlfled slgnlflcanL
facLors and reflecLs an
undersLandlng of Lhe
effecLs of your evenL on
socleLy.
1he Lhesls sLaLemenL does
noL ldenLlfy slgnlflcanL
facLors or reflecL an
undersLandlng of your
evenL.
1he Lhesls sLaLemenL ls
unclear or lncompleLe.

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ArgumenLs are supporLed by
Lwo or more pleces of
evldence. 1hls evldence
reflecLs an accuraLe
undersLandlng of hlsLorlcal
conLexL.
ArgumenLs are supporLed
by aL leasL one pleces of
evldence. Lvldence
reflecLs an accuraLe
undersLandlng of Lhe
hlsLory.
ArgumenLs are supporLed
by evldence. Lvldence
does noL reflecL an
accuraLe undersLandlng of
Lhe hlsLory.
ArgumenLs are noL
supporLed by evldence.

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1he concluslon explalns Lhe
lmporLance of Lhe evldence
and lL lmpacL on Lhe larger
socleLy.
1he concluslon explalns
Lhe lmporLance of Lhe
evldence and lL lmpacL on
Lhe larger socleLy.
1he concluslon somewhaL
explalns Lhe lmporLance of
Lhe evldence and lL lmpacL
on Lhe larger socleLy.
1he concluslon does noL
explaln Lhe lmporLance of
Lhe evldence and lL lmpacL
on Lhe larger socleLy.
no
concluslon
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compleLe and Lurned ln on
Llme. leedback ls used Lo
lmprove performance.
urafLs and flnal producL
are compleLe when due
and class Llme ls used
mosL of Lhe Llme.
urafLs and flnal producL are
compleLe and Lurned ln on
Llme.

urafLs and flnal producL are
ls lncompleLe.







Sarah Doubleday 2/4/14 7:30 PM
Comment [1]:
Sarah Doubleday 2/4/14 7:30 PM
Comment [2]:
Sarah Doubleday 2/6/14 2:25 PM
Comment [3]:
Sarah Doubleday 2/6/14 2:25 PM
Comment [4]:
MNDFD.O


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C
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clear, maln ldea and all of
Lhe lnformaLlon ln LhaL
paragraph supporLs LhaL
ldea. 1ranslLlons are ofLen
used Lo connecL one ldea Lo
Lhe nexL.
aragraphs conLaln one
clear, maln ldea and all
of Lhe lnformaLlon ln
LhaL paragraph supporLs
LhaL ldea.

Some paragraphs may
conLaln more Lhan one
maln ldea. SupporLlng
evldence does noL always
supporL Lhe maln ldea of
Lhe paragraph.

1he paragraphs are noL
properly organlzed, and lL
ls dlfflculL Lo Lell whaL Lhe
maln ldea ls ln each
paragraph.

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Language used ls
approprlaLe and especlally
clear. ?ou have an
excellenL vocabulary.
All of Lhe language ls
approprlaLe for an
academlc paper.

Some of Lhe language ls
noL approprlaLe for an
academlc paper.

1he language ls noL
approprlaLe for an
academlc paper.

O&(//(& ?our paper ls exLremely
easy Lo read wlLh vlrLually
no grammaLlcal errors.

?our paper may conLaln
a few grammaLlcal
errors, buL Lhese do noL
lnLerfere wlLh
undersLandlng your
ldeas.
?our paper conLalns
enough grammaLlcal
errors LhaL l have Lo work
Lo undersLand your ldeas.

?our paper conLalns many
grammaLlcal errors, and l
cannoL properly
undersLand your ldeas.

R%&/($ ?our paper perfecLly follows
proper MLA formaL for ln-
LexL clLaLlons and works
clLed.
?our paper may conLaln
a few errors ln MLA
formaL, buL mosL of Lhe
clLaLlons are well done.

?our paper aLLempLs Lo
follow MLA formaL, buL
Lhere are several
mlsLakes ln formaL of ln-
LexL clLaLlons or works
clLed.
?our paper does noL
properly follow MLA
formaL.



Sarah Doubleday 2/4/14 7:32 PM
Comment [5]:
Sarah Doubleday 2/6/14 2:26 PM
Comment [6]: no personal pronouns or
conLracLlons.
Sarah Doubleday 2/6/14 2:26 PM
Comment [7]: See commenLs for places
grammar can be flxed.
Sarah Doubleday 2/6/14 2:27 PM
Comment [8]: need proper formaL for
works clLed.