School: Carranballa College, Point Cook, Jamison Way
Year Group: 9
Date: 1 May 2014 9.45-10.45 Topic English Creating a narrative
Learning Intention: Imagining a narrative from viewing an image, learning how to construct a narrative
Success Criteria: Students can interpret characters, setting, plot and dialogue from viewing an image. VELS: Strands, Domain, Foci and Standards
ACELA1553 ACELT1635 Location / Setting
9P classroom
Organisation / Student Groups Introduction whole class discussion Middle work in groups of 2 or 3 - individual work on laptops End whole group sharing 4 or 5 groups to present to the class Classroom management strategy -Use 5,4,3,2,1 to call students attention. Be clear about when students are allowed to talk and when they are expected to work quietly. Walk around to all groups and give encouragement as well as reminders to stay on task. Ask all students to be facing the front during instructions, class discussion and others presentations. Key Vocabulary Characters, setting, plot, chronological, resolution. (putting new vocab on the English window)
Materials, Resources and Equipment Projector and laptop with images Printed images Students computers www.readwritethingk.org/files/resourses/ineractives/timeline_2/ Students English writing books and pens Paper and blue tack for students to put new vocab on the window References/Sources Images on Hayleys laptop under: Documents>Dip Ed> Prac Rounds>Narrative images
INTRODUCTION Connecting, Engaging and Modelling Inquiry MAIN BODY Guiding Inquiry and Practise CONCLUSION Sharing, Explaining and Reviewing Inquiry
I do: Settle class and get attention to the front all students to be fully facing the front. Introduce learning focus and success criteria. Show image 1 on projector screen ask students what do you see in this image/ What is happening in the image? How does the image tell a story? What could this story be? What dialogue might have been spoken? Repeat with one or two more images depending on students understanding of, and ability to read an image. (8mins)
Ask students to get into groups of 2 or 3. Introduce improvisation of a dialogue activity: With your groups you need to pretend that you are one of the characters in the images or a suggested character that might be connected to a person in the image and relevant to their story (establishing characters). Quickly assign roles and then engage in a dialogue as those characters. What might have been said in the image? What might have been said before or after the image? (developing plot) You may move around and add action if it is relevant to your characters and narrative. Give one image to each group (5 mins)
They Do: View images on projector screen and discuss with relation to narrative. Get into groups of 2 or 3 and listen to instructions for next activity.
I do: 1) Supervise group work and prompt as needed to ensure they are staying on task. Give indications of time left, encourage students to go back over their dialogue from the start, rehearse it to give a sneak- peak performance. (10mins)
2) Call attention back to the front for next instructions: Next students have to go to the readwritethink website and create a timeline of their characters journey. This could start before the moment represented in their image and finish years after, or it could only show a short period of time surrounding the moment of the image. (Chronological rundown) This is individual work and does not require talking. (15mins)
3) Ask students to get back into their groups and share their timeline. Would they change any of their dialogue now, based on what they have learned about the characters from doing the timelines? (7mins)
They do: Work in their small groups to improvise a dialogue inspired by their given image. Repeat/rehearse this activity until they are happy with the conversation they have created.
Listen to instructions for making a timeline Work quietly on laptops to produce a timeline for the character they have been portraying. Email their timelines to teacher (possibly need to take a screen shot to do this)
Come back to their group and discuss/re-rehearse dialogue in light of their character timelines (plots)
I do: Inform the class when they have 3 mins left to work on their timelines. Call for laptops closed and attention to the front. Ask groups to show the class their image and perform their rehearsed dialogue if time permits there may be some brief discussion of what in the image made them choose their characters and conversation. Groups to come up the front to present. (10mins)
Concluding comment about forming a narrative from a stimulus. Ask students to put vocabulary about narratives on English window (5mins)
They Do: Perform their rehearsed dialogue to the class and reflect on the narrative portrayed in a given stimulus. Be attentive and respectful audience members. Consider the vocabulary used in the class; character, setting, plot, dialogue and chronology.
REFLECTION: Was the Learning Intention met? Preservice Teacher Reflection I felt that this lesson was reasonably successful for my first lesson, the topic was simple but gave students the opportunity to use their imaginations and practice documenting their creative thinking. The class responded well to my rally call of 5,4,3,2,1 it was necessary to use this quite often because of the partner work, but I used it more than I expected and it may have been overkill. The class were interested in the lesson and responded particularly well to interpreting the images as a whole class. I was impressed with the discussion points that students came up with. The noise level when doing partner work was too loud and in several cases was off topic. I found that as soon as the class had some idea of the task they lost focus on me, even though I was not finished. I chose to let them go on rather than call their attention back, instead I went around and told each table/group information they had missed this is not a productive way of doing it, and information probably wasnt that clear. I dont think my first explanation of the dialogue task was clear enough, many students were spending too long discussing their image rather than becoming characters and having conversation as the characters. Others were very distracted and were mostly off task, I would have liked to choose the pairs myself to break up distractive students. There was a mix of focus levels during the individual work on laptops, some students had 10 or more events on their timeline, while others only got one down. I responded to this in two different ways; when I passed a student who had many points on their timeline I told the rest of the class to encourage them to catch up, when I passed individuals who were struggling or not working I asked them questions about their work, I then decided to set a number (4) of events that they had to have on their timeline in a set amount of time. I still had to constantly remind students to stay on task and work individually; I would like to re-arrange the seating to separate students. I was rushed for time at the end. We only saw 3 presentations of the dialogue before I had to finish it, I wasnt expecting to see them all but several students got out of doing it by acting too nervous and refusing to present even when told that they had to and it didnt have to be perfect. I wish I hadnt let them go as I think it sets a president for Mentor Teacher Feedback future presentations. I had to rush through the reflection of new vocabulary as we only had two mins left. I wanted the class to put the words up on the window, but I instead decided to get them to write them in their books and do a description of two of them.
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