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JaelynnDay

Ms.Robillard
LA8Hour7
12March2015
VaccinesareBeneficial
Didyouknowpeopledieeverydayfromdiseasesthatcouldvebeenprevented?Latelythere
havebeenmanycasesofmeaslesandthefluthatareevencausingdeath,howeversomeparents
refusetovaccinatetheirchildreninfearofthedangerousreactionsthattheycancause.Vaccines
areimportantbecausetheycankeepchildrenandadultssafe,cansaveyourfamilytimeand
money,andvaccinesareimprovingeveryday.

Somemaysaythatvaccinesarenotbeneficialbecausetheycancausedangerousreactions.
AccordingtoSandraCleary,everychildgetsthesamevaccines,whichmeansthateachchild
reactsdifferently.Also,somekidsmaybeallergictotheingredientsinthevaccines.Some
childrenareallergictoeggs,whichareusedintheInfluenzaVaccine.Thissupportsmyclaim
becauseitshowsjusthowdangerousvaccinescanbe.Italsoshowsthatchildrenaredifferent
andreactdifferently.However,vaccinesalsoprotectpeople.Morepeoplediefromnotgetting
vaccinesthanpeoplewhogetthemandreactbadly.(Cleary)

Vaccinesarebeneficialbecausetheyarealwaysimproving.AccordingtoTheUSDepartmentof
HealthandHumanServices,theyaremakingvaccinesavailablequicker.Thissupportsmyclaim
becauseitshowshowpharmacistsareimprovingthevaccinessotheyareeasierandfasterto

makeyethavethesamegreatquality.Italsoshowshowuptodatedoctorsarebecausethey
knowwhatchemicalsandmedicineshelpwithcertainthings.TheDepartmentofHealthand
HumanServicesstatesthatdoctorsaremakingvaccinescheaperandmorecosteffective.This
meansthatvaccinesarenotonlygettingcheaper,butyoualsoaregettingmoreforyourmoney.
Thissustainsmyclaimbecausevaccinesareobviouslygettingbetterandcheaper.Asreported
byTheDepartmentofHealthandHumanServices,doctorsarelookingfornewvaccinestohelp
preventorprolongdiseaseslikecancerandAIDS.Thissupportsmyevidencebecauseithasto
dowithhowvaccinesareimproving.Ifdoctorsarefindingnewcuresthatmeanstheyare
improving.("Goal1:DevelopNewandImprovedVaccines")

Vaccinesarebeneficialbecausetheycansaveyourfamilytimeandmoney.Accordingto
Vaccines.gov,ifyougetvaccinatedatanearlyage,thenyouwonthavetospendmoneyon
otherthingslater.Thissupportsmyreasonbecauseifyougetvaccinesnow,youwontendup
spendingmoneyonmedicinesandtreatments.Italsosupportsmyclaimbecausevaccines
dontcostmuchthereforemakingiteasytonotspendmuch.AsstatedbytheCDC,vaccines
aremostlycoveredbyinsurance.Thissupportsmyclaimbecauseyoudonthavetopayany
feeswhichhelpsyousavemoney.Italsosupportsmyclaimbecauseitshowsthatvaccinesare
easilyattainable.AsreportedbyVaccines.govitseasytogetvaccinesbecausetheyaregiven
atlocalplaceslikedoctorsofficesandpharmacies.Thissupportsmyclaimbecausevaccines
aregivenclosebywhichmeanstheydontusemuchgaswhichintheendmeansthatthey
wouldsavemoney.Thisalsosupportsmyclaimbecauseifvaccinesaregivenlocallythey

wouldntcostasmuchtogetconveyed,whichmeansalowercopay.(CentersforDisease
ControlandPrevention)(FiveImportantReasonstoVaccinateYourChild)

Vaccinesarebeneficialbecausetheyprotectadultsandchildrenfromharmfuldiseasesand
viruses.AccordingtoStephanieTurner,andalmosteverydoctor,vaccinespreventsicknessand
dangerousviruses.Thissupportsmyclaimbecauseifyougetvaccinesthenyoumostlikely
wontgetthevirusandnoonewillgetitfromyou.Thissupportsmyclaimbecauseitwillkeep
youandyourrelativesandclosepeoplesafe.AsreportedbyStephanieTurner,thisyearalone,
morethan130peoplehavegottenmeasles.Justthink,ifallofthosepeoplehadgottenthe
vaccine,noneofthemwouldvegottenthevirusinthefirstplace.Thisonceagainprovesmy
pointthatiftheywouldveprotectedthemselvesthen,theywouldvealsokeptotherpeoplesafe.
AsstatedbyStephanieTurner,ifonepersongetsmeasles,90%ofthepeopleclosetothemwho
areunvaccinatedwillalsogetthevirus.Sincethatistrue,thatprovesmypointthatvaccines
needtobetakenseriouslyandshouldbegiventoeveryone.(Turner)

Vaccinescanhelpwithsomuch.Theyarealwaysimprovingtomeettheneedsofthepatrons,if
anewviruscomesoutdoctorsarealreadyontheirwaytotryandcureit.Vaccinesalsohelpsave
money,ifgetvaccineswhileyoureyoung,youwonthavetospendmoneytocurethevirus.
Vaccinesalsopreventdeadlyandseriousvirusesanddiseases.However,vaccinescancause
dangerousreactionsbutonlyonsomepeople.Overall,vaccinesareaveryimportantpartin
peopleslife.

WorksCited
Cleary,Sandra,andHannahBabcock,prods."GettingthePoint(TheVaccineDebate)."
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Mar.2014.Web.12Mar.2015.
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"FiveImportantReasonstoVaccinateYourChild."
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Child
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"Goal1:DevelopNewandImprovedVaccines."
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Vaccines
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("Goal1:DevelopNewandImprovedVaccines")

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