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submission:
(a phrase,
sentence,
paragraph, idea,
move,
punctuation,
piece of
evidence, etc.)
1. This is a specific
ad genre, because it
has all the
conventions that you
would normally see
throughout each
website portrayal of
the item you are
looking for. We all
love listening to
music one way or
another but let's say
you are interested in
buying headphones,
specifically Beats
By Dre drenched
Solo, because they
have that one flashy
color you like and
have really nice
sound quality.
An
observation or
question I
received from
De Piero or a
classmate:
The change(s) I
made to what I
initially wrote:
(ie, the change[s] I
made to column 1)
How this
change
impacts my
paper:
A specific ad genre, we
know this because it
has all the conventions
that are reoccurring
through each of the
websites that have the
item that you are
looking for. Now, lets
think of an example
where we see this ad
genre in motion. We all
love listening to music
one way or another but
let's say our friend
Joseph, someone I
made up to make an
example, is interested
in buying headphones,
specifically Beats By
Dre drenched Solo;
because they have that
one flashy color he
likes and it is said to
have really nice sound
quality.
By clearing stating
the importance of
understanding genre,
I have informed the
audience on the who
cares matter and
why it is important.
This addition sets the
3. You may be
thinking, what does
learning about Beats
and the websites that
sell them have
anything to do with
Genre?
Throughout the
beginning paragraph
I became aware of all
the yous that I have
placed and began to
minimize them by
instead addressing
who I was talking ti
whether it was
audience, consumers,
etc. helps by making
essay more formal
4. It also teaches us
the importance of
genre because you
cannot get someone
to buy a product if
you do not know
how to appeal to
them, if you were
looking at it from the
website's point of
view.
5. The Ukrainian
crisis began
Im still wondering
what, exactly,
youll be arguing in
your paper.
Remember: this is
an argument, so you
need to take a
position.
(Readers typically
enjoy having a path
to follow if were
able to anticipate
whats coming up,
well be able to
follow along more
easily.)
Youre pumping a
lot (too much, I
think) into this
intro, Villalva. The
backstory, then
the articles that
youve selected and
how theyre
differentthats a
LOT
I formalized my
thesis statement into
a more apparent
argument, explaining
to the reader what I
will be speaking
about. Taking a
position.
I basically
summarized the
whole intro summary
that I had on my first
paragraph into one
sentence. Before
leading my audience
into what I will talk
about, this gives them
7. It is very
heavily
opinionated by
the author but
he does not
attempt to give
a definite
answer on what
may occur for
the future of the
crisis
It is important for
someone to understand
why the specific genre
of an article is key to
the performance of the
piece. Evaluating the
conventions and style
of Motyels piece will
help us better
understand why the
scholarly peer reviewed
article genre is more
important at spreading
information on a topic,
over Tisdall's article.
I state my
argument to the
audience without
using I and I
give a specific,
detailed
argument road
map to the
audience
showing what to
expect from my
essay. It also
answer to so
what? question.
I added on to
that sentence by
further
explaining the
significance of
that specific
authors opinion,
how it relates to
the genre and
why it made his
genre less
effective than
that over the
other article.