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    As children of God, we have a divine responsibility to care for the earth. When God created the earth, he entrusted us with stewardship over its resources. As stewards, we must preserve the land and protect resources for future generations. Wise stewardship involves small acts, like picking up trash, or larger projects, like starting a recycling program. The Church also recognizes its role in being environmentally responsible through green building initiatives and conservation efforts. All of creation declares there is a God, and as his children we should honor our role as stewards of this beautiful planet.

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    As children of God, we have a divine responsibility to care for the earth. When God created the earth, he entrusted us with stewardship over its resources. As stewards, we must preserve the land and protect resources for future generations. Wise stewardship involves small acts, like picking up trash, or larger projects, like starting a recycling program. The Church also recognizes its role in being environmentally responsible through green building initiatives and conservation efforts. All of creation declares there is a God, and as his children we should honor our role as stewards of this beautiful planet.

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    Kimberly Austin, Article 4

    Writing for Mormon Insights


    Mormon Insights
    Gardner: ELang 430R, Editing for Publication
    Article 4
    Title
    Your Divine Stewardship
    Being Wise Stewards
    Environmental Accountability
    Kicker (<125 Characters)
    As children of God, we have a divine calling to care for and preserve the earth and its resources.

    S ynopsis (200250 Words)


    In the first book of Genesis, God pauses after each new creation and admires it as
    good (Genesis 1:1). [https://www.lds.org/scriptures/ot/gen/1.1,26?lang=eng] As the
    recipients of Gods earth, we are responsible to take the time to admire its beauty and
    preserve its resources. By doing so, we act in our divine calling as stewards over the
    earth.
    Your stewardship
    As stewards of the earth, we are accountable for our use of its resources. Stewards
    are to preserve resources and protect for future generations the spiritual and temporal
    blessings of nature (Gospel Topics). God has given us the opportunity to care for and
    preserve the earth. Stewardship does not equal ownership.
    Being a wise steward can be as simple as picking up trash on the side of the road,
    or as complex as starting a community recycling project. Wise stewards are aware and
    involved.
    The Churchs stewardship
    The Church recognizes the role of stewardship in Gods plan and strives to
    conserve energy and natural resources. The Church implements green building initiatives,
    water conservation efforts, and recycling projects.
    Let us keep the earth beautiful and clean, so that as we look upon it, we too can
    call it good.
    Read the full Gospel Topics article Environmental Stewardship and Conservation
    here. [https://www.lds.org/topics/environmental-stewardship-andconservation?lang=eng]
    Quotes to incorporate
    All things denote there is a God; yea, even the earth, and all things that are upon the
    face of it. (Alma 30:44) https://www.lds.org/scriptures/bofm/alma/30?lang=eng

    Amber Dalton 3/4/15 7:36 PM


    Comment: Since you start the next
    paragraph with a similar sentence, it might
    add some variety to switch up the words a
    bit in this sentence. Maybe When God gave
    the earth to his children, he entrusted us to
    take the time
    Amber Dalton 3/4/15 7:33 PM
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    Amber Dalton 3/4/15 7:30 PM
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    Amber Dalton 3/4/15 7:31 PM
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    Amber Dalton 3/4/15 7:55 PM
    Comment: This is a good place to create a
    greater sense of urgencyboth to improve
    ones stewardship and to read the full
    article. I liked this idea from the article: The
    earth is endowed with an array of natural
    resources that will provide for the human
    family if they are used as the Lord instructed.
    You could end by saying something like The
    earth has enough resources for everyone as
    long as we take care of it the way the Lord
    intended. Find out more about being a good
    steward.

    Amber Dalton 3/4/15 7:41 PM


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    Amber Dalton 3/4/15 7:41 PM
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    Amber Dalton 3/4/15 7:43 PM
    Comment: You could incorporate this
    quote in the first paragraph. You could start
    by describing a beautiful natural scene or
    different natural elements and tie them to
    how they are proof that God exists. Then
    this quote before your first sentence. Or it
    would make a great pull quote

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    Kimberly Austin, Mormon Insights
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