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Sharon

Phil 1250
TR 1-2:20
Dr. Jane Drexler
SignatureAssignment
Introduction:Tomydearestaudience(hello,professor),thefollowingpagescontain
confidentialinformation.Thisinformationisnotforthefaintofheart,onlythosewith
substantialbraveryandenduranceshallreapthebenefits.Whatlieswithinisanargument
ofgreatforce,whichIhavebeenfortunateenoughtoreport,however,notcompletely
unscathed.Ifirstgotwindoftheargumentmonthsago,whereIreceivedaletter
announcingmyquestaswellassometemporarycompanionswhowouldstartwithme.I
willnotforgetthatfatefuldaywhichmarkedthesearchforthetruthbehindthisthing
calledgenepatenting,whichhadbeenthecauseofmanyseriousconflicts.LittledidI
knowatthetime,thatbychoosingtopursuethedefensivedeductiveargument,Ihad
sealedmyfate.
TheIssue:Theonequestionwhichhadruledmymindduringthisadventurewas:Are
patentsongenesproperunderU.S.patentlaw,andhowdotheyrepresentwisesocial
policy?
Conclusion:Accordingtothisparticulararguer,yes.However,(asIutterundermy
breathinfearoftheforceoverwhelmingme)Idisagree.
BurdenofProof:Sincethemomentthisgreat,fallaciousbeasthadmadeitsclaimupon
theworld,itwasforcedtocarryaratherlarge,heavyburden:theburdenofproof.SinceI
hadalsostakedmyclaim,Itoo,havethissameburdentocarry,whichIshall
demonstratelateronwithinthissorrowfultale.

Sharon
Phil 1250
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Dr. Jane Drexler
Premise/Subpremise:Navigatingprovedtoberatherdifficult,astherewereagreat
dealofseparatepathwaysleadingtonowhere.Atmyexpense,Ishallexplainwhich
pathwaystonavigateindetail,whichshallbefollowedbyamap.Thestartingpointis
calledthereasonswhypatentsongenesareproperunderU.S.patentlawandwhythey
representwisesocialpolicy.Continuingdownthispath,youmakeyourfirstturnat
banningsuchpatentsriskshuttingdownalargepartoftheindustryandcreatingamajor
roadblocktoprogressinpatientcareandfoodproduction.Downthisroadyouwill
followasubtunnel,genepatents,morespecificallypatentclaimstonucleotide
sequencesarefundamentalandcriticaltothebiotechindustry.Thesubtunnelleadsto
anothermainroad,dubbedtheinvestmentwillnothappenif,afteritisdone,a
competitorcangetafreerideonthepioneerseffortsandknockofftheproduct,which
leadstoasubroadinventionsdonotmovefromthelaboratorytothemarketplace
withoutahugeinvestmentofmoney,time,andeffort.Onceagain,thissubroadleadsto
anothermainroad,theconstitutionprovidesforpatents.Thisroadhasasubroad,with
twosmallerroadsconnectedtothesubroad.Afterwards,thesmallerroadsleadtotwo
connectedsubroads.Finally,thesubroadsshalltakeyoubackonthefinalmainroad,
withtwointerconnectingsubroads.Youwillfindthatallofthemainroadsleadtothe
biggestroadofall,thefirstmentionedinthebeginning.Now,Ileaveyouavisualmapas
yourguide,bestofluck.

Sharon
Phil 1250
TR 1-2:20
Dr. Jane Drexler

IllusoryMethodofAttack(FallaciousArgument)
Addressedtotheauthoroftheargument,Ihopetoconvinceforhim/hertoseemy
pointofview.Theeverintelligentargueroughttobeabletoagreewithmydiffering
pointofview.Iwilladmit,he/shewasratherwisetobringuptheopponents
unintelligibleclaimsbeforecompletelyobliteratingthemwiththeirown.However,Iam
surethearguerneedsnotmypraisetocometomypointofview,seeingashisonly
optionsaretoeitheragreewithmeorbeincrediblywrong.Simultaneously,itisfoolish
toangerthecreature.Therefore,Ihavedecidedtocometoacompromise,hopefullythat
shallappeasethearguer.
WhilegenepatentingmaybeproperunderU.S.patentlaw,theyarenevertheless
utterlystupid.Whoeverbelievessuchathingasbeneficialmusthavesuchlow
intelligence,theremustbeanewpsychologicaltermtospecificallydescribetheirmental
illness.Nottomention,donotgetmestartedonthetypeofpeoplethearguerandhis
opponentsare!Commentersoftheircaliberarealwaysmisinformed,andneverfully
understandwhoorwhatthesubjectisfullyaboutbeforetheybombardtheiraudience
withnonsense.

Sharon
Phil 1250
TR 1-2:20
Dr. Jane Drexler

TheRealBattleBegins
Totheauthoroftheaforementionedargument,Iwishtoreviewmycurrent
understandingofwhatexactlyyouwereattemptingtoportray.Obviously,youarepro
genepatenting,duetoyourbeliefthatpatentsongenesareproperunderU.S.patent
lawandthattheyrepresentwisesocialpolicy.Tosupportyourargument,youhave
sharedhowgenepatentsarefundamentalandcriticaltothebiotechindustry,
consideringhowpatentsprotectdruginventionsnecessaryfortoday.Anargumentyou
havesupportedbymentioninghowtheConstitutionalreadyprovidesforit,aswellas
howthenewinventionshelpimprovethehumancondition.
Whileforthemostpartyoumakeagoodargument,Ihavenoticedafewflaws,
whichseverelyweakenit.Intheintroductionoftheargument,youbeginbymentioning
howvariousacademicshaveattackedgenepatentingthroughouttheyears.Your
evidence,whichreoccursthroughouttheargument,isasingleexampleofascience
fictionnovelist.Whileacertaindegreeofresearchisrequired,usingthenovelistasan
exampleisevidenceofthefallacyknownasbiasedsample.Furthermore,withinthefirst
paragraphofFoundationoftheIndustry,youemploythefallacyofbeggingthe

Sharon
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question,byconstantlyusingyourconclusioninordertoprovetheconclusion.Finally,
thereistheappealtotraditioninthesecondsentenceunderWeNeedGenePatents.
Simplybecauseasetofprincipleshavebeensupportedforover200years,doesnot
necessarilyprovethemcorrect.Therestofthesentence,whereitfocusesonthe
contributionsandthebenefits,woulddowelltostandalone.

Reflection
Myattacksontheterribleforcewerebrutal,howeverIamfairlyproudofthe
strengthandsincerityofsaidattacks.Ieversokindlypointedoutthechinksinthe
argumentsarmor,inhopesofhelpingthebeaststrengthentheargument,shouldhe/she
choosetoyetagainwreakgrammarhavoconanotherunfortunatesite.Afterpointingout
wheretheflawswere,Iproceededtonotethetypesoferrsmade.Outofthekindnessof
myheart,Ievenaidedthegreatforcebysuggestinghowtoimproveupontheattack.

Sharon
Phil 1250
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Dr. Jane Drexler

Terminology
Ifeartheadrenalinewhichwascoursingthroughmyveinsuponmeetingthefoul
creaturehadpossessedmetoattackitnotone,butfivetimes!Theeventwhichfollowed
wastraumatic,resultinginahazymemory.Thatbeingsaid,herearetheaccountsofthe
fiveaforementionedattacksIregrettablymade(andamfortunatetohavemadeitout
alive)thatarenotinorderofappearance:appealtoflattery,goldenmeanfallacy,ad
hominempsychological,falsedilemma,andfinallystereotyping.Appealtoflattery
involvedstrategy,appealingtothecreaturespridetoconvincehimofmyargument.
GoldenmeanfallacyiswhenIclaimedmypositionwascorrect,becauseitcompromised
myargumentaswellasthecreatures.Suckerpunchedwithadhominemofthe
psychologicalsort,Iinsultedthecreaturesintelligenceandlackofabilitytothingand
processclearly.Withthefalsedilemma,Iattemptedtoconfusewithonlytwooptions
available,hopinghewouldntrealizethereweremanyothershecouldhavechosen.

Sharon
Phil 1250
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Dr. Jane Drexler
Stereotypingwasthefinalinsulttoinjury.Bygroupinghiminthesamepoolastheother
fearsomefoe,Iwassuretobringhimdown.

Sharon
Phil 1250
TR 1-2:20
Dr. Jane Drexler

Sharon
Phil 1250
TR 1-2:20
Dr. Jane Drexler

Sharon
Phil 1250
TR 1-2:20
Dr. Jane Drexler

Sharon
Phil 1250
TR 1-2:20
Dr. Jane Drexler

Sharon
Phil 1250
TR 1-2:20
Dr. Jane Drexler

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