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by itself was capitalized as if it was a proper noun. It can be capitalized only if it is included in
the name of an educational institute, such as University of New Mexico.
The beginning sentences of the conclusion needed to be clarified. They were reported to
be choppy sounding. They were fixed to not sound awkward when read so that way the ideas
flow logically. For example: I conclude this analysis with agreeing with the points that were
included in the ad. I was drawn to it because of what I am interested in. I am sure that
other students were appealed to it because they like technology as much as I do. changed to
I conclude this analysis by agreeing with the points that were stated in the ad. I was drawn
to it because it effectively illustrated how I can apply myself to a future in technology. I am
sure that other students are appealed to it because they like technology as much as I do.
To conclude the revised components of the MWA 1, the changes were enough to make
my writing easier to read and make the points I made stronger. The indenting and the
university situation were the only major grammatical errors throughout the entire assignment.
The remainder of the issues were fixed so that way my writing fit the prompt more. As
mentioned before, this learning experiences enables us to look back in our writing and make it
better not only for us, but for everyone taking an interest in reading our pieces.