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Final, Revised Submission

1. (Thesis
Stateme
nt)

Through the use of different trials and studies, the health practitioners,
Visser, and Mall explore the topic of family abuse as well as use various
moves to prove that familial abuse or domestic violence can cause
drastic changes in human behavior.

2.

The main point of this paragraph is to point out and

analyze the difference in rhetorical features and
conventions between the two scholarly articles and the
news article. While also discussing how they connect to
my thesis of how domestic violence can cause drastic
changes.

3.

The main point of this paragraph is to continue discussing

the difference between the two genres.

4.

The main point of this paragraph is to point out and

discuss the similarities in rhetorical features and
convention between the two scholarly articles and the
news article.

5.

The main point of this paragraph is to point out the

moves that the writer of the news article does to
support her arguments and her paper as a whole.

6.

The main of this paragraph is to point out Janice Malls

purpose within the news article and who her likely
audience is.

7.

The main point of this paragraph is pointing out and

explaining the moves psychologist Margreet Visser makes
and the reasoning behind them.

8.

The main point of this of this paragraph is to point of

Vissers purpose in writing her article as well as stating
how she uses her evidence.

9.

The main point of this paragraph is the point out the

health practitioners moves

10.

The main point is the point out the health practitioners

purpose in writing the piece as well as their intended
audience

11.

The main point of this paragraph to conclude my paper as

well as answer the question what can scholarly pieces

and non-academic piece achieve what the other cannot.

In my revised submission, I added a whole new thesis. The reason for this
change was so my paper was a proper thesis driven argument. I also took
out certain statements that did connect properly to my new thesis. Another
change I did was rewriting my conclusion statement to also tie into my
thesis. I also added more analysis to different quotations to better support
them and make the reader see why the quotes are important to my paper
and how they relate to my central argument. I also added and took quotes
from my sources to allow the paragraphs to flow better and so they
connected back to my thesis. There wasnt any drastic changes that I
performed on this piece other than writing a whole new thesis statement that
could be supported by my statements.