Check if the following need correction. Some of them are good.

1. This is a great introduction with good grammar and structure. What is the missing
sentence?

These can result in various effects.

2. Use HAVE/CREATE/ENCOUNTER car accidents

ENCOUNTER car accidents

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3. Use Another effect is that + VERB when you want to introduce the next solution:

Another effect is that increasing two lanes..

4. Use obtain, attain, be, become, suffer from or other more specific verbs
instead of get.

We have to attain enough

They do not have the chance to obtain rest

People are suffering from sleep deprivation.

5. Use HAVE with noun phrases:

People who have / suffer from sleep deprivation.

6. Use a variety of + plural noun. Use different types of + uncountable noun.

People who suffer from a variety of types of pressure

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7. Use modal verbs such as may when talking about effects. Use due to +
noun/VERBing.

Remember: diverse/various/different + plural noun

8.

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Remember: It has been argued that OR It is arguable that OR People have argued
that = correct.

It has been argued that

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Become is a verb that means a change. The time of present simple is not really possible for
this verb:

The situation is becoming worse.

The situation has become worse.
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Dont start a sentence with And. In addition, is more formal. Continuing the sentence is
also more formal. Use some + plural noun.

10.In addition, in some countries

, and
. And
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Remember: the chance to + VERB, the ability to + VERB, the opportunity to + VERB,
the possibility to + VERB

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Careful with verb agreement:

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Careful with negative verb forms:

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15.Remember: Besides this, = correct. This is more natural than that.

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16.Use too much + uncountable nouns; use too many + countable nouns.

, and it would not have too many adverse effects on

17.Use will / can / could / should / must / might / have to + base verb . Which of these is
correct?

18.Use VERBing as a subject. Here, the sentence begins with Increasing:

19.Increasing the number of subways of the existing way is

20.When you give details, use , involve + noun/VERBing.

This would involve a new law being passed.

e.g. I like chocolate.
e.g. I like sleeping in late.
I like my flatmates being quiet when Im sleeping .

21.Remember: It is + ADJ + to VERB. E.g. It is easy to / It is possible to / It is difficult to / It

is dangerous to .

It is very easy to cause us to

22.Does this phrase need a verb?

People may not be productive enough.

23.In academic style, the following are the most formal:
a great deal of / a large amount of + uncountable noun
a number of / a large number of /several/various + plural noun
Once or twice in an essay, a lot of is acceptable. How can we make this even more
academic in style?

A great deal of money

A large amount of money
24.How do you spell this word?

The environment
25.Use because if its impact on + noun. Use the with the following: the environment,
the public, the internet, the media.

because of its impact on the environment .

26.Use the + noun of noun phrases when not discussing quantity:

the technology of ITS

27.Use for example, for instance and such as when introducing examples:

like
, such as (noun).
.For instance, S V.
[and above too]
.For example, S V.
[and above too]
28.Is this a good way to introduce a new cause?

yes