Boy

&
Eel
By, Ellie Kitts
Once upon a time there was a prince and
a princess. That lived in a Castel sub under
water. And are married the prince had a
surprise for the princess and she said
come here she said we are going to have a
baby. As 7 years past the boy was 7 years
old. And one day the boy went into the
tube that his mom and dad said not to
touch. but he touch the button that said
DO NOT Touch. And he did, it said up. And
up he went and got out. He went into
another one that said water. And he touch
that button TO and he blasted out of the
sub. and saw an eel it swam around him
and said hi .he screamed AAAAA hi said
the boy please do not hurt me said the eel

I do not hurt humans I just want a friend

the boy said I will be your friend that
would be so nice the eel said you sound
get back in side but how am I supposed to
be your friend If I cannot come out here.
The eel said I have a great idea I can live
with you in attack the boy SAID.
And THAY LIVER HAPPY AVER AFTER

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happens

Criteria
Beginning

Narrative
format

1
No language is
used to indicate
that the tale or
legend is about to
begin.
There is no sense
of story.

2
There is an opening
statement, but it
does not reflect
traditional folk tale
format.
There is some
sense of story, but
the story does not
flow clearly from
beginning to end.

Characters
with easily
identified
traits

The character(s)
are listed but not
described with
detail.

Ending

No language is
used to indicate
that the tale or
legend is finished.

The characters are

described with
detail, but the
traits are not
clearly understood
or do not add to
the understanding
of the story.
There is some
sense of an ending.

Moral

There is no
reference to a
lesson or moral in
the tale or legend

There is some
reference to a
moral or lesson,
but it is not easily
understood.

Story
Elements

Story contains
few of the four
story elements
(setting,
characters,
problem,
solution)
Grammatical
and/or spelling
mistakes interfere
with the ability to
understand the
story

Story contains
some of the four
story elements
(setting,
characters,
problem, solution)

Conventional
form

There are some

grammatical and/or
spelling mistakes,
but they do not
interfere with the
ability to
understand the
story.

3
There is a traditional
beginning which
indicates that this is
a traditional folk
tale.
There is a clear
sense of story with
transition words to
facilitate the
understanding of the
listener/reader.
The characters are
described with detail
and the traits are
evident and easily
understood to
represent key parts
of the story.
There is a traditional
ending which leaves
the listener/reader
with a clear
understanding of the
story.
There is a clear
moral or lesson that
is easily understood
and can be restated
by the
listener/reader.
Story contains all
the four story
elements (setting,
characters, problem,
solution)
The folk tale has
been carefully edited
and is ready for
publication.

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