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Shakespeares Leading Lady: Juliets Strength Mirrored in a Young Adult Novelization
Introduction
William Shakespeare wrote some of the strongest characters in the history of literature, but his
portrayal of female characters has been put into question, as Catherine Belsey states in her article
Feminism and Beyond, Shakespeare was a patriarchal bard, who could not by any means be
reclaimed for feminism (Belsey 34). In almost every case, Shakespeares strongest and most
powerful characters are male, shining boldly in patriarchal plays surrounded by a historically
patriarchal culture, leaving female characters who have strong characteristics to be stuck in the
patriarchy, presented as weak next to their male counterparts. Rahul Singh author of
Shakespeares Plays: Men Celebrated, Women Despised? comments on Shakespeares ability to
write female characters saying, the women characters in his [Shakespeare] tragedies seem to
be designed, more or less as weak, treacherous, terribly nave, cruel, intriguing or stubborn
individuals. In factwomen characters are made responsible, directly or indirectly, for the tragic
end of the central character (Singh 141). This view of women in Shakespeares tragedies creates
a negative aura around these classic female characters who contemporary characters are often
mirrored off of as emphasized by Sarah Barber who discusses young adult novels and how they
give readers the ability to further read classic characters, they [young adult novels] become
an ideal vehicle to identify with the plays characters (Barber 1) . Belsey comments that
we need to reclaim early modern writing from patriarchal analysisrescuing fictional female
characters from critical contempt (Belsey 32). This analysis of Juliet is the beginning stage of
saving female characters from their patriarchal text. The language works as another vehicle into
the patriarchal context that women are read in.
More often than not, it is a males soliloquy that is read closely or analyzed, adding to a further
emphasis on male characters (i.e. To be or not to be). However, it is important to acknowledge
important speeches made by women like Lady Macbeths Soliloquy in Act 1 Scene 5 of
Macbeth, or Juliets many speeches in Act 2 Scene 2 of Romeo and Juliet. Both instances give
the reader insight into the character and are key to the plot of the story, but are usually forgotten.
In looking at certain passages spoken by female characters who, because of their gender have
become minor characters, will prove to show the strength, independence, and power of the
female protagonists. This paper will look primarily at Scene 2.2 of Romeo and Juliet and look
closely at the individual speeches of Juliet as she woos Romeo to her liking, allowing her
strength to become prevalent, despite her gender and perhaps her age. This analysis will lead into
further dissection of a young adult (YA) novel which features a female protagonist who has
similar trials and tribulations as Juliet. The characterization of both females will allow readers to
relate to Juliet on stronger levels, and prevent criticism of classic heroines, as Fran Norris Scoble
explores in questioning, Why dont we ever read books about girls? (Scoble 85)
Strong female characters like Juliet, from Romeo and Juliet, have influenced the writing of
modern literary characters, who often become the main protagonist of their own story, their
strength and power obvious to all readers. This paper will also explore the pairing of classic
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I will further explore Juliets strength with an analysis of Scene 2.2 of Romeo and Juliet,
typically referred to as the balcony scene as this scene shows how Juliet can be not only wise,
but independent and logical. This analysis will give a sense of the characteristics which are
mirrored within a contemporary novel that can be successfully paired with Romeo and Juliet.
Juliet cuts him off smartly, wishing that he didnt swear by the moon as it is inconstant, that
month by month the moon changes, and she will not accept such a comparison. Romeo, left
almost speechless by her statement, asks smartly what he should swear by. Juliet replies with a
line that should be more famous than it is:
Analysis
Juliet, though on the surface level may seem like an impulsive teenager shows otherwise
throughout this scene as she doesnt give herself over to Romeo without so much as a thought.
When Romeo shows up outside of her window wishing to climb inside, she questions him, and
questions his sanity in showing up somewhere where he is not only an enemy, but practically a
stranger. Among his pick-up lines and flirtation, she continues to question and warn him, If they
do see thee, they will murder thee (2.2, 70). She holds no sympathy for this man she barely
knows, understanding the risk in not only loving him, but in him continuing to talk outside of her
balcony. This is not a lonely, blind teenager speaking. Juliet is fully aware of her actions and
reacts as such. She is also fully aware of the circumstances of Romeo professing his love towards
her. Her speech starting on line 84, discusses her willingness to love Romeo, but also her
understanding that love can only go so far. He may say that he loves her, but may prove it false
further on in her relationship. She is not keen on throwing herself into a relationship with
Romeo, and wants him to prove himself to her, not buying his climbing through the bushes to her
balcony.
Juliet is not wooed by Romeos continued speeches and needs a straightforward answer. Her
maturity is obvious in grilling Romeo on not only his feelings, but in some cases his intentions.
Juliets reply, speaking of their future with each other as being not only too rash, but too sudden
and unadvised by not only their families, but by herself. Juliet is intelligent in this scene, and
despite her tragic ending, she displays strength and maturity in her decisions. Marriage is a topic
that gets brought up towards the end of the scene, Juliet stating that if Romeo wishes to speak
with her tomorrow, marriage must be his intention. She is not going to let this man climb through
her window without guaranteeing honorable actions from him. Close reading of Juliets lines
from this scene show that she is a strong female character, coming into her own as a young
female within this play, and is not as blinded by love as Mansour points out, Juliet is
conventionally perceived as happily and helplessly yielding to the tumults of juvenile love
(Mansour 206) and perhaps shown by her untimely death.
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Isaac begins to speak on the themes of Shakespeare and why it is taught saying, Romeo and
Juliet appears in classrooms because the emotions and conflicts it explores have immediate
relevance for many young adults, but the decisions and conclusions the play provides run in
direct opposition to the sorts of behaviors we [teachers] hope students will themselves employ
(Isaac 50). This is the beginning of an analysis on what Romeo and Juliet offers to students, like
strong female characters as I have stated, but the play also begins to be a cautionary tale of what
not to do. This is perhaps where YA can lend a hand in the form of contemporary stories that
offer alternative endings while still keeping heroines strong, and themes, like that of love and
family duties, practically intact. From this analysis of scene 2.2 of the play, this article will move
into the young adult section, which will offer an alternative novel to pair, in order to enhance
understanding and relevance of characters in a contemporary language applicable to readers.
still reeling from his lust over Rosaline, who refuses to marry him. Mimi is still feeling dazed
from how remarkable it is that she has been transported to this place that she knows so well from
the production, with the same two characters she has been reading for the last couple of months.
It isnt until she meets Juliet that she starts to understand their connection as it goes further than
coincidence. After meeting both characters Mimi begins to wonder, Could this be my story, not
Shakespeares? (Selfors, 112). Unlike Troy, who believes Shakespeares play must continue as
originally written, Mimi seeks to save the young lovers from their tragic ending, hoping to save
her own bleak future in the process.
To look at how similar both female characters are, a preview and analysis of Romeo and Juliet,
specifically Act 1 Scene 3 which is the first scene that we see Juliet, is necessary. Juliet has a
discussion with her mother and from here, familial values can be discussed, both in
contemporary texts as Saving Juliet and classic texts like Romeo and Juliet.
Preview Romeo and Juliet Act 1 Scene 3
This is the first portion of the play that features Juliet speaking with her mother and the nurse
that raised her. The idea of beauty in regards to Shakespeares Juliet, is different when compared
to the modern adaptation, especially when Juliets age is mentioned, Thou knowest my
daughters of a pretty age (1.3.11). Then mentioned again by the nurse, Thou wast the prettiest
baby that eer I nursed (1.3.61). In this initial scene Juliets beauty isnt brought into the
conversation, but rather her willingness to fall in love with Paris, as a source of beauty. Juliet
speaks with wisdom telling her mother, Ill look to like, if looking liking move; But no more
deep will I endart mine eye Than your consent gives strength to make it fly (1.3.98-100).
This sense of beauty contrasts to Mimi in Saving Juliet because her looks are considered skin
deep and looks to be the only honorable factor about herself, according to her mother. She is a
successful actress in Shakespearean plays, but primarily because she has the it factor, a special
blend of talent and beauty, focus on the beauty. Mimi is even compared to Juliet when her
makeup artist tells her that Juliet must be beautiful (Selfors 11). The words used to compare
Juliet are not of beauty being skin deep, but of beauty being her worth to her family, and her
wisdom when it comes to deciding her future husband. Although she is pressured by her mother
to marry Paris, Juliet offers criticism, stating that she will consider his courtship because it is
what is expected of her, but she will use strong judgment in her decisions.
Juliet is also contrasted with Mimi by the family pressure that is placed upon both characters.
Mimi is pressured to keep her families spotless reputation as well as perform well enough that
people will continue to view Shakespearean plays at her families theatre. Juliets familial
pressures are that of marriage.
considered a strength as her mother believes her to have some sort of a maturity level, but it also
compares to Mimi, as both characters mothers speak of them on a simplistic level, focusing on
what they consider to be their strengths, not wishing to look further. Mimi and Juliet have a
conversation in Saving Juliet where Juliet comments on her mothers wishes, She does not care
what I want. She only cares about the Capulet name and Mimi inwardly thinks, how painfully
familiar (Selfors 82). The similarities between Juliet and Mimis mothers begin to create that
connection between the two characters, further characterizing Juliet as strong, as she goes
through the same trials as Mimi, the female protagonist in her own story.
The feminism and strength of Juliet can be shown by her closeness with her mother or lack
thereof. Karaman states, Consequently, her [Lady Capulet] relationship with her daughter is far
from close (Karaman 42) creating first-hand a confusing life for Juliet as she is left to grow up
and make her own decisions, including whom she is to marry, at such a young age. This causes
Juliet to contradict the patriarchy she is a part of in having a relationship with Romeo, against her
fathers will, perhaps leading towards her imminent death. Juliet makes choices in response to
this lack of familial relationship, and shows resourcefulness, wit, and finally great personal
courage (Scoble 86) in choosing the direction of her life.
and Juliet, for example, students can see a girl grow up and while her family controls much of
her life at the beginning of the play, In the end, she takes daring risks for the sake of something
she chooses for herself (Scoble 86).
Introducing these methods in the classroom proves to students, both male and female, the
importance of strong female characters, as well as strong male characters, and how to find their
strength in a historically accurate piece of literature, such as Romeo and Juliet, which gives a
correct depiction of women based on their place in society during the time period. The main idea
of liberal feminism or mainstream feminism is the equality of genders and placing just as much
importance on Romeo as you do on Juliet within the play, and depicting her accurately is a good
start to placing feminism and perhaps feminist literary criticism within this play, and further into
discussion within the classroom (Lindsey 17).
Classroom Activities for Further Exploration
Introduction
Introducing another story with similar characters and plot is a successful method to teaching
Shakespeare in an educational environment. It is also important to have discussions, of course,
but also important to note that students may become entirely wrapped up in the novel and lose
focus on the classic, as the contemporary novel is in most cases easier to read, and can be more
entertaining. As Isaac states in her book, commenting specifically on paired novels, Many of
these books provide thoughtful reflections upon meaningful social issues and are worthy novels
in their own right. Yet, the play itself can get lost with this approach. The means and the end
twist upon each otherShakespeare as a vehicle for discussing [topics such as] death or
discussions of death as a tool for understanding Shakespeare (Isaac 51). Its important for the
paired novel to become a tool and not a supplement, so introducing classroom activities that
focus on the Shakespearean play, and shed light on the YA novel becomes important; students
cannot lose focus on the learning potential of the canonical work. This section will highlight two
activities to employ within a high school classroom in order to redirect focus, or place focus on
the Shakespearean play and the benefits of such.
I Am Poem
An activity to do within your classroom in order to enhance reading of major and minor
characters is to have students create I Am Poems about certain characters. For ease of
implementation you could split your classroom in half and have them write poems based on
Romeo and Juliet in order to explore their characteristics and further make them realistic
characters. An important aspect to note is that this may be a project to implement after your class
has read Romeo and Juliet in order to ensure close readings on both characters.
I Am Poem Template (Kaywell Vol 2 160):
I am
I wonder
I hear
I want
I am
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I pretend
I feel
I touch
I worry
I cry
I am
I understand
I say
I dream
I try
I hope
I am
By placing as much emphasis on Juliet as there is usually placed on Romeo, students begin to
understand the strength of the character, as well as her major role in the play, despite her gender
and age. It is important for both male and female students to understand this importance in order
to begin to understand the role of feminism within Shakespeare and further literature.
Double-Entry Reading Log (Kaywell Vol 2 150)
In order to successfully close read passages spoken by Romeo and Juliet, educators might
consider having their students do a double-entry reading log in which the student separates their
paper into two columns, label one side reading notes and the other side discussion notes, and
assign each student an important passage from the play to write on their reading notes side. This
not only employs the student to read an important passage in full, but will require them to write it
out fully, giving their mind time to process the wording as well as the ability to better understand
the language. The student would then close read the passage and record discussion notes on the
other side of the paper, which could include their reaction to the passage as well as anything that
seems confusing to them for further discussion. In prompting students to dissect certain passages,
not only will Romeos important role in the play become more prevalent, but Juliets strength and
her passage from young woman to adulthood will become more obvious to the student, when
assigned soliloquies or asides spoken by Juliet, as well as her conversations with Romeo from
scene 2.2. Students can then make their own assumptions about the ending of the play and how it
affects them on a more personal level, in having some time to get to know the characters better
and relate to their lives.
Conclusion
Despite the assertion that because of the historical context, Shakespeare is unable to write
successful female characters, through close reading and analysis it becomes clear that Juliet is
one of Shakespeares strongest female characters, despite both her gender and age. Juliet grows
from a young woman at the beginning of the play into an adult as she makes life-altering
decisions for herself by the end of the play, which unfortunately ends tragically. Scene 2.2, often
referred to as the balcony scene, shows Juliets strength as she denies Romeo entry to not only
her balcony, but her heart and mind without giving herself some time to think, and giving him
the ultimatum of marriage. Through the close reading of her statements and reactions (i.e.
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interrupting Romeo) it becomes clear that Juliet is a strong female character and not a nave lovesick teenager.
The strength of this classic female is further asserted through the pairing of a modern novel with
a protagonist that is written in Juliets image. Mimi is the protagonist in her own story, even if
Juliet isnt quite considered such, but in comparing the two females, Juliets own characteristics
become obvious and the view of her is strengthened. It is also important to note that
implementing an analysis of not only Romeo and Juliet, but a young adult novel with similar
characters is important in a high school classroom in order to show the feminism within both
classic and modern literature, allowing female students the ability to relate to characters, and
showing male readers the importance of strong female characters and the reality of such. As
Belsy as stated it is important to save female characters from patriarchal readings, and rescue
them from the contempt that seems to follow, straight from the classic piece. Feminism is ever
growing within our culture, and if analyzed, even the most patriarchal literature has strong
female characters. They might just be hiding behind the culture.
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