UniversityofPuertoRicoatBayamn

20152016SecondSemester
English3202
Prof.DavielizVillafaeColn

RubricforNarrativeWrittenWork

COMPONENTS

DESCRIPTION

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WORKSUBMITTEDONTIMEANDPRESENTABLE

WORKSUBMITTEDONTIMEBUTNOTPRESENTABLE

WORKNOTSUBMITTEDONTIME(PRESENTABLEORNOT
PRESENTABLE)

Punctuality

RANGE

Commitmentto
Instructions

TitlePage

HandwrittenDraft

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EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
Thewrittenworkshowedcommitmentto
instructionspresentedanddiscussedinclass.

GOOD:
Manyinstructionswerefollowed,buttherewere
somethatwerenot.

FAIRTOPOOR:
Someinstructionswerefollowed,buttherewasa
considerableamountofthemthatwerenot.

VERYPOOR:
Fewornoinstructionswerefollowed.

EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
Thetitlepageisfullofcreativityandoriginality.

GOOD:
Thetitlepageshowscreativityandoriginality.

FAIRTOPOOR:
Thetitlepageshowssomecreativityandoriginality.

VERYPOOR:
Thetitlepageisnotcreativeand/orisnotoriginal.

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INCLUDEDWITHTHEPROFESSORSONTIME
SIGNATUREEVIDENCEANDFEATURING:
Individualbrainstormingexercise
Typeofconflict(s)
Summaryofconflictapplication
Thesisstatement
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(Continuation)

FirstKeyboarded
Draft

INCLUDEDTHEAFOREMENTIONEDCONTENT
ATALATERDATEORWITHOUTTHE
PROFESSORSONTIMESIGNATURE

INCOMPLETEORNOTINCLUDED

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PAIRORGROUPCOMPLIEDWITHTHE
FOLLOWING:
CreatedaGoogleDrivedocumentandaddedall
collaboratingclassmatesandprofessor
UpdatedGoogleDrivedocumentwithtitleof
narrationandintroduction
AddedbodyparagraphstoGoogleDrivedocument
ProvidedaconclusionattheendofGoogleDrive
document
Submittedallpartsofthenarrativeessayasrequired,
followedinstructions,andcompliedwithobjectives

PAIRORGROUPCOMPLIEDWITHMOSTOFTHE
REQUIREMENTSPRESENTEDABOVE

PAIRORGROUPCOMPLIEDWITHONLYAFEW
ORNONEOFTHEREQUIREMENTSPRESENTED
ABOVE

PeerEditingRubric

LastDraft

INCLUDED

NOTINCLUDED

I. Format
2

1.5 EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
Originaltitlepage
Readablefont
Doublespacing
0

FAIRTOPOOR:
Someornoneofthespecificationsoftheformatwas
usedasinstructed.

II. Title
2

1.5 EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
Included
Originalorsomewhatoriginalandrelatedtotopic
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II.Title(Continuation)
1

FAIRTOPOOR:
Notincluded
Notoriginaland/orsomewhatrelatedornotrelatedto
topicatall

III. Indentation
2

1.5 EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
0.5(oneTAB)onleftmarginperparagraph(s)or
dimensionssimilartotheonesinstructedinclass
0

FAIRTOPOOR:
Haddimensionscompletelydifferentfromtheones
instructedinclassorhadnoindentationatall

IV. Introduction
6

EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
Startedwithacaptivatingorinterestinghook
Includedbackgroundinformationrelatedtothestory
Presentedathesisstatementthatcomplieswiththe
elementsofathesisstatement

FAIRTOPOOR:
Startedwithasomewhatinterestinghookoromitted
hook
Backgroundinformationwasincludedbutshowed
weakcontent,ornobackgroundinformationwas
presentedatall.
Thethesisstatementpresentedoneofthefollowing
conditions:
Applicationofsomebutnotalloftheelementsof
athesisstatement
Noapplicationoftheelementsofathesis
statement
Nothesisstatementwhatsoever

V. BodyParagraphs
6

EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
Contentshowedatleastthreebodyparagraphswitha
topicsentence,atleastthreesupportingsentences,and
aconcludingsentenceeach.
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V.BodyParagraphs(Continuation)
3

FAIRTOPOOR:
Mostofthefeaturesofasuccessfulbodyweremissing
orwerenotincluded.

VI. Conclusion
6

EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
Arestatementofthethesisstatementwasvisible.
Asummaryofthebodyoftheessaywasvisible.
Aproperendingwasprovidedtothestory.
Amessagewassenttotheaudienceinadirector
indirectform.

FAIRTOPOOR:
Aweakrestatementornorestatementofthethesis
statementwasvisible.
Asummaryofthebodyoftheessaywascompletely
missing.
Theendingofthestorywasweakorwascompletely
missing.
Amessagetotheaudiencewasnotevidentorwas
completelyomitted.

VII.Clarity
3

EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
Properuseofpronouns
Noirrelevantornonsensicalopenquestions

FAIRTOPOOR:
Misuseoroveruseofpronouns
Irrelevantornonsensicalopenquestions

EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
Allparagraphswereconnectedorrelatedtothethesis
statementingeneral.
Allsentenceswereconnectedorrelatedtothethesis
statement.Inthecaseofthebodyparagraphs,all
sentenceswereconnectedtoboththethesisstatement
andtopicsentence.

VIII.Unity
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VIII.Unity
1

FAIRTOPOOR:
Someparagraphs,partsofparagraphs,and/or
sentencesingeneralwereslightlyconnectedorrelated
tothethesisstatement,ortherewasnoconnectionor
relationtothethesisstatementthroughoutmostofthe
essay.

IX.Coherence
3

EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
Madesenseasawhole
Showedlogicalorchronologicalorder
Presentedadequateuseofvocabularyortone
Demonstratedproperuseoftransitionsthroughoutthe
paragraph
Avoidedunnecessaryrepetitionofkeywords

FAIRTOPOOR:
Showednoticeableproblemswiththeapplicationof
manyorallofthefeaturesofcoherence

X. GrammarConventions

WritingRoom
Evidence

TotalScore

EXCELLENTTOVERYGOOD:
Completesentenceswereusedratherthan
fragments.
Subjects,verbs,andsubjectverbagreementwere
usedadequately.
Nospellingerrorsoraminimumnumberof
spellingerrorsappearedinthelastdraft.

FAIRTOPOOR:
Showedseveralormanygrammarissues
throughouttheentireessay

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PAPERSLIPANDREVISEDDRAFT

MISSINGEVIDENCEOR
NOEVIDENCEINCLUDED

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