Student #1; Lyndon Barrameda

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Punctuation Mistakes I’ve noticed something. (,)
for my own good (,) but 3
my school, my country (,)
Sentence Errors to everyone. (And) here (Here)
in our
Year 2011, (it) was believed
products that’ve (‘s or has) 8
been
(In) (T)this year, we should
And (I) believe that this year
Spelling their (there) 2
Filipino (Flipinos)

Student #2; Matthew Licyayo

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Punctuation Mistakes Struggle’s (Struggles)
This 2011(,) I want to think 4
Decision’s (Decisions) I make
whether it’s (its)
Sentence Errors things (that) I have not
in the (year) 2010 3
it’s (be) good or bad
Capitalization ENTIRE ESSAY

Student #3; Angelica Taguinod

ERROR CORRECTIONS TALLY
NO MISTAKES NO MISTAKES NO MISTAKES

Student #4; Gladys Tumang

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Punctuation Mistakes Because its (it’s) for my own
good.
This year 2011(,) year of the 4
rabbit(,)
This year(,) I am going to focus
on my studies.
Sentence Errors That’s (the) one of the most
(important) thing(s) they(that) I
can (will) make them happy.
The economy of our country 8
now is raising up(improving)
 There will be no more
war(corruption) in our country.
This year and to the (more)
coming years of my life.
Grammar Not like other high school
students right now usually have 1
their love or friendships.

Student #5; Khent Velasquez

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Punctuation Mistakes For my family(,) I hope that 1
Sentence Errors I expect (for) myself that I
should be(to be) mature and to
study harder to have(get) more
passing grade (high grades).
Is to regain (j)Justice for (my
fellow) Filipinos and to (have) a 10
strong economy, and the thing
that President Aquino said will
(be) granted
Great expectations must be
do(done)
Many says (that) this year
Spelling (F)filipinos 1

Student #6; Raniella Villareal

ERROR CORRECTIONS TALLY
Capitalization Then, (e)Everyone wants this
year to be perfect for 2
(e)Everything.
Sentence Errors I don’t ask for more but (a)
guidance from him will do.
I want(hope) God (to be) 2
(would) happy for me in
everything I do.
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MISTAKES AND
CORRECTIONS OF
ERRORS OF THE
316 STUDENTS

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