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2009
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MyFavoriteThings:HereareafewthingsIamfor:abandonedpuppies,moonbeams,fudgebrownies. ThingsIamagainst:acne,meanpeople,nuclearholocaust.WritersofMFTarecalledfluffballsin admissionsparlanceneedIsaymore? TalesofMySuccess:Butfinally,whenIcrossedthefinishlineandreceivedthecongratulationsofmy teammates,Irealizedallthehardworkhadbeenworthit.Imaginehowoftenthatgetswritten,andthen sparetheadmissionsstaffersonemorevariationonthetheme.Letothersteachers,counselorstalk aboutyoursuccessesinstead. MyMemoirs:Donttrytostuffeighteenyearsinto500words.Itsnotthatanautobiographycantbe doneinthisspace;itsjustprofoundlydifficult.Writeaboutsomethingsmaller. [HarryBauld:Whattosayinacollegeadmissionessay,ReedMagazine]
IvecomeacrossMissAmerica,thePerspirant,theJock(quitepopular),TalesofMySuccess(most frequent),andMemoirs. Iwouldratherreadanessayaboutabladeofgrassthanabouthowyoumusteredthatlastounceof strengthtopipyouropponentinsoandsocompetitionand,collapsingtothegroundinweariness, realizedthatyoucandothingsifonlyyoudriveyourselftodoitandbelieveinyourself,andnowyou cantakeonanyobstaclebecauseyounowknowwhatyourecapableof,woohoo!Certainly commendable,andIadmireyourspiritofperseverance.Idontmeantobelittleyouraccomplishment either.WhatIamsayingisthatsuchessaysrarelyrevealsomethingthatisuniqueaboutyou.IfItook anotherpersonandsubstitutedhimorherintotheessay,itwouldprobablymakesenseaswell.Most peoplehavegreatdriveandteamworkand[insertqualityofyourchoice],butnotmanypeoplecan writeathoughtfulreflectiononabladeofgrass.Andifyoucan,andifthoseareyourrealthoughts,it willbeajoytoreadbecauseoftensuchessaysrevealmoreabouttheirwriterthantheMySuccess essays
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awardsandwins.(Thisseemstobeanunfortunateeffectofourresultsorientededucationsystem).And ifyouwonttakeitfromme,takeitfromthem:
Admissioncommitteesatthesetopschoolsaren'tlookingtohearaboutyoursummervacationtoEurope oryourplantoendworldhunger.Infact,theyaremuchmoreinterestedinhearingyourobservations aboutthefrequencyofcarsrunningyellowlightsattheintersectionnearyourhomeorhowmanyyearsit hastakenforthatoaksaplingoutsideyourfrontwindowtopushupthesidewalkslabsnexttoit. You'reprobablyaskingyourselfwhyonearthanyonecouldbemoreinterestedinyourintersectionoroak treethanyourgreattriporhumanitarianideals.Theanswerissimple:Becausetheintersectionandthat oaktreecantellmoreaboutwhoyouareandhowyouthink. [CollegeConfidential:IvyApplications:AdmissionsEssaysforIvyLeagueSchoolsItsAllAboutVoice]
Intentionally Insulting
Meet mr. negativity Whenyouwrite,makesurethatwhateveryousaytotheadmissionsofficers,youwouldbecomfortable sayingtoalmosteveryoneelse.Ifyouwouldntshowyouressayto,say,afriendbecauseyouknewit wouldoffendhim/her,thenwhywouldtheadmissionsofficersnotbepossiblyoffendedbythatsame essay?Sure,youhavearighttoyouropinion,althoughifyouregoingtocomplainaboutsomethingin theessay,youdbettersoundmatureandobjectiveaboutit.Butsometimesyoumaynotrealizethat whatyousay(ormoreoftenthannot,howyousayit)maycomeacrossasinsulting/snobbing,andthisis whereyouneedobjectivefriendstohelpreadyourwritingandpointitouttoyou. Anextremelycommontrendistohurlcriticismaftercriticismatthelocaleducationsystemandhowit stiflesstudentsfromtrulybecomingcriticalthinkingandcreativepeople,howtheyrarelyhadthe chancetospeakup,howtheexaminationorientedsystemyougetit.Fortherecord,Imnotabigfan ofthesystemeither.Iagreewithmostofthecriticisms,andIknowhowliberatingitfeelstobeableto finallywriteaboutthis.Butitisveryhardtowriteagreatessayfueledbyonlyangerandfrustration,and IrarelyreadanywhichtackletheTheSystemthemewell.Ifyoumustwriteonthis,domorethanhave abashfest.Writeaboutyourownexperiences.Perhapsyoufoundyourownwaytoovercomethe 3
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