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    In 6 years, US consumed the most energy from oil, whereas UK shows a dramatic change of energy resources from coal to gas. Most of the UK's energy consumption in 2006 came from gas, 37%, compared from six years ago, which is nearly half less.

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    In 6 years, US consumed the most energy from oil, whereas UK shows a dramatic change of energy resources from coal to gas. Most of the UK's energy consumption in 2006 came from gas, 37%, compared from six years ago, which is nearly half less.

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    Writing Task 1 With Corrections #1

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    In 6 years, US consumed the most energy from oil, whereas UK shows a dramatic change of energy resources from coal to gas. Most of the UK's energy consumption in 2006 came from gas, 37%, compared from six years ago, which is nearly half less.

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    Ticket Id: 33777 Wednesday, September 19, 2012

    The charts present information regarding the changes of the consumption of energy based on different resources between 2000 and 2006 in UK and UK. It is clearly evident that in 6 years, US consumed the most energy from oil, whereas UK shows a dramatic change of energy resources from coal to gas.

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    Ticket Id: 33777 Wednesday, September 19, 2012 In 2000, around 37% energy used in US came from oil and it is closely followed by coal. After six years, American consumers slightly increased it used in oil, in contrast, coal significantly drop to 25%. Gas, as another source, accounted for 14% and about less than half of it came from nuclear power. Only 5% was from other renewable sources. In 2006, US use of gas increased by 10% (25%), however, nuclear power and other sources had a slight decrease at 5% and 3% respectively. Most of the UK's energy consumption in 2006 came from gas, 37%, compared from six years ago, which is nearly half less. Opposite of this, coal had declines its share from 30% to 13%. Oil and nuclear power, only showed a small change, 28% to 30% and 15% to 13%, in turn. Other renewable resources used by British stayed at 10% throughout the period. Evaluation Report Word count Comments 202 The candidate has analyzed the bar chart well. An effort to compare and contrast the main features is visible. Paragraphing of the report is fine. However, it contains many mistakes related to grammar and sentence structures. Overall, the task response needs further improvements. 6.0 1. Revise grammar and improve sentence structures. 2. Read sample reports from our website. 3. Keep practicing to improve your performance. Writing Correction Service - to order a correction click here IELTS preparation e-books - download a free trial here Sample essays, letters and reports - click here Learn vocabulary from this link http://www.scribd.com/doc/244244/Check-yourVocabulary-for-IELTS

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