AATR3 ROUND1 SCRIPT By fishy-kun =================== Characters: ----------Goldie "fishy-kun" (G) Angeline (A) Gwynn (GW) Brian "okk"

(B) Felicity (F) Mallory (M) Lethe (L)

How the format of this script works: -----------------------------------{Everything in curly brackets is a description of the scene.} [Everything in square brackets is not [really] mandatory for the script.] If bracketed and separated by a slash [both options are usable]\[either one woul d work]. If paranthesized, it's small text. (See what I mean?)

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====== AATR3 ROUND1 ====== PAGE 1 -----{Fishy and Angeline are walking along the Real. Angeline's looking bored.} 1) G: - I dunno why I've been thinking so much these days? - Like, it's not like [anything majorly important happened recently]/[I went through any traumatic life drama or anything]. - [I'm still doing the same things I'd been doing before (kinda sorta)]\[I still have the same habits, same... nevermind.]. - And it's not like I wasn't pretty self-reflective back then too.

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PAGE 2 -----{More walking and talking.} 1) G: - But I guess the difference now is that I'm just really sick

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of the things I'm thinking about? - My head always feels so full. - Sometimes, I feel like all my thoughts will gush out like [a spring of] black blood. {Illustrative picture of black blood flowing out of forehead}. G: G:

PAGE 3 -----{Talking heads.} 1) G: - Do you get what I'm saying? 2) A: - Sounds like you need a psychiatrist [pronto]. G: - .... Gee thanks. 3) A: - Well what am I suppose to tell you? I don't know how to help you! 4) A: - I'm just a highschool no-body from the mid-west. - You're a college student! From California! You're older than me! - I'm still trying to get over [the fact that you're the first Chinese girl I've met][racial barriers] (much less [the fact that you] created me) -(I really don't want to think about the metaphysical implications that entails.) PAGE 4 -----{Talking heads. General postures of friendship.} 1) A: - .... 2) G: - .... 3) G: - Byahahahahaha [Chinese]? Is that it? 4) G: - Don't [you] worry about that. 5) G: - I think we'll work [just fine]/[well] together. 6) {Felicity, Mallory and Lethe crowd around loo} PAGE 5 -----1) M: L: F: 2) F: 3)

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- Oh my god ew. - Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwww.... - Sush girls. - That's suppose to be our "Creator" there. (Show some respect). M: - Our dead "creator". L: - How are we going to pretend he's still alive? M: - He smells SO bad. [(I could puke myself back to the 80's)]. F: - Relax. We'll clean him up first. M: - [This is like. Grody to the max.] - [Man his face is butt ugly.] - [Tots looks like road pizza.] [(E.N.- I Googled 80's phrases and put in everything I found.)]

PAGE 6 -----{While Mallory and Lethe gross out some more, Felicity gets idea to use Pokeball to store dead body.} 5) F: - Stand back girls. {Zap zap zap} 7) F: - [Perfect]/[Easy] M: - We are NEVER going back in that ball. L: - Nuh-uh.

PAGE 7 -----{Fishy and Angeline find themselves at boundary between Fishy's world and Okk's world. Noticable difference in art styles.} 1) A: - What is this? G: - I think we're about to meet our next opponent. - From the thick crayola colors and thick bold line style, - I'd would guess that our opponenet may be American... 2) A: - What the heck? G: - What the- MY CLOTHES. 3) G: - MY JEANS. 4) G: - MY BOOBS. 5) G: - This settles it. - Our next opponent is MOST DEFINITELY [A GUY]/[AN AMERICAN MALE]. PAGE 8 -----{Sees Felicity, Mallory, Lethe}. 3) G: - Well..... - I was way wrong. 4) G: - (Ahem), I'm sorry, I must apologize [in advance]. - I thought my next opponent was a guy, and erroneously discriminated against [females who also like drawing hoochie girls, such as yourself]\[young ladies such as yourself who like drawing hoochie girls]. {Fel, Mal, and Lethe here all look kinda confused.} PAGE 9 -----1) G: 2) 3) 4)

- [So!] [I hope you will forgive me.] - [Who here's the artist?]/[Which one of you is the artist?] {Mallory and Lethe point to Felicity} G: - It's a pleasure to meet you miss! - I always enjoy meeting fellow artists! G: - Oh but I talk too much! - Call me Fishy. What's your name? F: - ... Felicity Salt... - (Uh, er, hoochie?) G: - A pleasure!

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- So how shall we go about fighting? - A card game? A race? How about cooking or playing music? A: - Uh... G: - Or how about a drawing contest! I've always wanted to do a drawing contest. Hah, how ironic would that be? - Let me talk to my girls first. {F,M, and L huddle} M: - Who invited little miss sunshine? She talks a mile a minute! L: - She seems nice... F: - Nice or not, one thing's for sure: we absolutely cannot let her know that the dead guy is dead. Or else WE'LL die. F: - {Narrow eyes} The easiest way is to KILL her. - (Like a small animal.) L: - Felic! F: - Hahah I'm just kidding. :P :)

PAGE 11 ------1) F: - Alright Fishy we'll play a game with you. {Felicity is spinning the pokeball casually on her fingertip.} 2&3) {Fishy stares at pokeball} 4) G: - [Excellent!]/[Sure!] I have just the idea for one! 5) G: - Let's play Concentration! A: - That kid's game? F: - Yeah sure. :) PAGE 12 ------1) G: F: {Everyone 2) G: 3) G: 4) G: {Felicity -

You like pokemon right? ? sits down in a circle.} Concentration~ concentration is the game Keep the rhythm~ keep the rhythm just the same Subject: Pokemon! has an OHSH!T expression} Starting with...

PAGE 13 ------{ New scene. Imagine a dark cave/void with watery streams flowing everywhere. Gwynn the waterbending elf is on a boat paddling through. She spots a dream bubble about the size of a car. Interested, she strokes it open and enters the dream bubble. } 5) ???: - Crud! PAGE 14 ------3) B: GW: B: B: GW: GW:

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- [I can't [seem to]]/[Why can't I] get past this gym leader? - (I don't get it, all my pokemon are leveled over 9000.) - Please pardon my intrusiveness. Are you dead? - What? - No, I don't think so. - Death can't be this [annoying]/[frustrating]. - Pardon me, it's just that - You are [currently] wandering around the Aether, which a human can only do if dead or guided.

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- What? - I think you may be dead, but only half so, because you are here in a dream bubble with a semi-corporeal body. - Perhaps your body is being kept in a stasis of near-death? - Wait wait wait HOLD UP - You mean to tell me that dying means constantly getting beat by a gym leader with SIX JIGGLYPUFFS?

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- THAT'S INANE.

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- [Of course,] You are in limbo. - I HATE THIS PLACE. - If you wish to leave it is within your power. - You are welcome to come with me. Perhaps we may chance upon your desired destination. - [Yeah! I'm all for boat rides.]/[Uh, I'm not too fond of boats

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- Where are you going? - I'm expecting a summons. - Oh. - Cool. {After some time...} GW: - We have arrived. {Reach a bubble that's kinda wacky looking} GW: - Such a strange dimension [to be summoned to].... {Closer look reveals an aerial view of FML} B: - Hey! My OC's!

PAGE 18 ------{The Concentration game continues. OC's sans Mallory yell them out.} 1) ?: - Bulbasaur - Charmander - Squirtle - Pikachu? - Pichu - Lopad - Chikorita - Mudkip...? - Celebi - Snivy - Tepig - ...............? ?) B: - Oh my god OSHAWOTT. OSHAWOTT PAGE 19 ------1) G: 2) 3) 4) F: G: F: G: F: F:

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Wow your character knows more about pokemon than you do! I wasn't expecting that. ..... That's wierd. I thought that since you have a pokeball as summoning item, you'd be a fan of pokemon. ........ Oh well, guess that means I win. :D ....! [(WHAT- )] (SO UNFAIR!) FORGET THIS STUPID GAME! LETHE, MAL! SUIT UP!

PAGE 20 ------{Awesome sailor moon action sequence for Lethe and Mallory -> pointy blue armor suits} PAGE 21 ------1) G: 2) G:

- Oh? So you want to brawl instead? - LET'S BRING IT.

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- HEY HEY HEY. I am absolutely not doing /any/ fighting, got that? - Don't worry. Just save my butt again when things get brutal. :) - Stupid...

- Come at me! - I have a red belt from two years in Taekwondo, and I'm not afraid to use it! {Inner monologue} G: - [What are you doing]/[Why are you doing this] Fishy! - Too reckless! - Pain really hurts you know. - (Is this why you're doing this - to feel the pain?) - (It's just like that song from Linkin Park.) - (E.N. - Actually it's Goo Goo Dolls)

PAGE 23 ------{Mallory and Fishy duke it out. Mallory's going easy on Fishy.} 1) Nar: - It became immediately obvious to everyone.... ?) Nar: - ... that this fight was a joke. PAGE 24 ------1) M: G: 2) G:

- Listen sweetie, I don't want to hurt you - OH SO YOU'RE GOING EASY ON ME HUH?! (Yes, that was obvious) - WELL IF IT WEREN'T FOR THESE TIGHT CLOTHES I'D BE GOING MUCH HARDER ON YOU. - YOU KNOW WHAT. I'M TIRED OF THIS STUPID [AMERICAN] FASHION SENSE - I'M GONNA ANIMIFY THIS PLACE [WITH GWYNN]

PAGE 25 ------1) G: - {Looks at hair} As soon as find a white hair... 2) {Mallory's feels put. She looks at Fel+Lethe, who encourage her to do it. Further gestures convey need to preserve secrecy and remain alive. Mallory consents and prepares a killer blow.} PAGE 26 ------1) {Angeline spots lethal intent and blinds Mallory by growing wings out her her eyes. Mallory's blow connects with side of Fishy's nose instead of temple. Fishy is knocked back, and a white hair falls on her face.} ??-1) G: - Oh cool! Foud wogh. ??) G: - Comaugh, Gwynh! PAGE 27 ------{EPIC ANIME SPLASH PAGE OF SUMMONING. Enter Gwynn.} 1) G: - Let's show'em what's what! PAGE 28 ------{Three panels. 1) Gwynn pulls waterbending move. 2) F+M+L get swept up by wave. 3) Wave freezes, immobilizing F+M+L.}

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Aw yeah awesome job Gwynh! High five! Miss Fishy, it is an honor to finally meet you. (Aww, you left meh haygeng) Miss, there is a matter we must deal with right now. There is a spirit here seekingMy characters! {Races past Gwynn towards frozen OCs} How you guys doin'? You're the guy who died! C-c-c-oooold-d-d...

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- Not [quite] yet! Where's my body at? - Inside the pokeball. - (Please get us out it's really hard to breathe). F+M+L: - GASP HEAVE FASP {Shadow of approaching figure appears. Phitus falls from sky.} Phi: - Are you guys done yet? - Cause I'm getting F#$%^%$# bored. - (Not even one explosion).

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- No! The fight's just getting started! - Felic, could youF: - Yeah. {Tosses pokeball open.} {Whole row of faces looking at body materialize.} {Whole row of faces looking appalled.}

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- I guess dead bodies don't hold well in pokeballs? - MY BODY - That... is beyond healing. *indistinct animal gurggling noise* - You're F$%^$%^$% dead.

{Brian's spirit float into nothing.} G: - Thank you Phitus for stating the obvious. Phi: - The winner... Phi: - ... is Fishy-kun. - For managing to stay alive. Phi: - Don't ever sass me again.

PAGE 34 ------1) F: - Whelp. We're goners. M: - Ceasing to exist. L: - It was good [knowing]/[being with] you guys. [I'll miss you all so much.] 2) {Grounds opens up and swallows three + dead body. Fishy + OC's look disturbed} EEEEENNNNNNDDDDDD

Man is this depressing or what.