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Mtech thesis
4 messages lalit choudhary <mechlalit2k7@gmail.com> To: Neha Garg <nehagarg.february@gmail.com> Mon, Jun 3, 2013 at 12:22 AM

Mam, Please find attached Mtech thesis for the partial fulfillment of the degree along with Reference paper (ISO 27001 guidelines) which I have used as a major reference in the thesis. Please suggest me the changes if required in the same. I am very thankful to you.

regards Shalu

5 attachments Mtech_thesis_02-06-13.doc 789K 5_ISO27k_ISMS_Auditing_Guideline_release_1.rtf 925K 1_IJCSNSA_Study of Network Security Systems.pdf 1436K 3_IJCSNS_Comprehensive Network Security Approach.pdf 884K 4_IJCSNS_Implementation of Home Network Security System.pdf 333K

lalit choudhary <mechlalit2k7@gmail.com> To: lalit choudhary <mechlalit2k7@gmail.com>

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-Lalit Kr. Choudhary Engineer (EM-Design) THDC INDIA LTD. Rishikesh

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Mtech_thesis_02-06-13.doc 789K 5_ISO27k_ISMS_Auditing_Guideline_release_1.rtf 925K 1_IJCSNSA_Study of Network Security Systems.pdf 1436K 3_IJCSNS_Comprehensive Network Security Approach.pdf 884K 4_IJCSNS_Implementation of Home Network Security System.pdf 333K

Neha Garg <nehagarg.february@gmail.com> To: lalit choudhary <mechlalit2k7@gmail.com> Dear Shalu,

Tue, Jun 4, 2013 at 9:45 AM

I have gone through the thesis that you have prepared and found certain points to be discussed and improved. Please go through these points and do the needful. 1.References should be more atleast 25-30. 2.References should be based on research paper which you have not even cited any where. 3. Only guideline document(ISO) is referred everyhwere. 4.Content,Abbreviations,List of of fig and tables are incomplete. 5.Snapshots are very less in number,show the comparison snapshots of diff tools also. 6.Main concern is what you have done(research innovation & implementation),this work might be already implemented. 7.Add references to the figures also. 8.References should be in IEEE format and uniform. 9.You have taken an example(THDC) to elaborate your work ,but you are suppose to take a practical example which is not implemented yet and implement it for the same, that will be your actual dissertation,this is exactly copied and Thdc(or any organisation)does not have any security issues,any third person can scan their network, is it feasible, justify it and If asked are you able to implement the same for Graphic Era. 10.Have added the sample data which you have taken in your thesis and what is the format of that. 11.Are you able to justify your topic "Cost Effective Auditing of Web Applications And Networks in Small, Medium Business Enterprises ",where is web application auditing in your topic ,only THDC network is represented, as per my understanding. etc...... Please do come some other day on time before 10 june 2013 according to your

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convenience and my availability so that i can have a better understanding of what exactly you have done and show me the tools , their implementation and comparison for your findings(for web applications and network or both)

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-Warm Regards,

Neha Garg Tripathi Asst Prof. (Dept of IT) Graphic Era University Dehradun 09897738782
"Winners Make It Happen.....Loosers Let it Happen !"

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