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The stylistic analysis of literary language in relation to English teaching in Hong Kong
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THE
S T Y L I S T I C A N A L Y S I S O F LITERARY L A N G U A G E IN R E L A T I O N
TO
E N G L I S H T E A C H I N G IN HONG K O N G
To
be
s u b m i t t e d to The D e p a r t m e n t of E n g l i s h
Studies
and
in p a r t i a l of
L i t e r a r y S t u d i e s , in A u g u s t , 1987.
Chan Kant N i n g , P h i l ip
DECLARATION
I work or
hereby
d e c l a r e that this t h e s i s r e p r e s e n t s
my
own this a
in a p p l i c a t i o n for a d m i s s i o n to qualification.
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
w o u l d 1 ike to thank my s u p e r v i s o r P r o f e s s o r
Preston, overall
in r e a d i n g my m a n u s c r i p t a n d in d i s c u s s i n g
it w i t h m e .
And Sau
finally,
.
Lut me
Memorial
Secondary and
inspirat ion
encouragement
through lessons.
active
III
I I
Ill
ABSTRACT
The
what
methods these of of
used m a y be
and
methods
to s o l v e p e d a g o g i c a l in Hong one
problems
Chapter
theoretical This is
framework based
on m y reading of
Formalism as a use
and Speech A c t Theory. L i t e r a r y style not the which a kind use of integrates of language language style as
Chapter in a
type of d i s c o u r s e the
pedagogical to literary
implications language
stylistic
approach
for E n g l i s h t e a c h i n g
in Hong K o n g *
investigation
is based on m y course*
teaching
My conclusion
approach
i l l u s t r a t e d can
language and
literature* of
it s h o u l d be considered
in any p l a n n i n g
the future d i r e c t i o n s
in E n g l i s h e d u c a t i o n of Hong K o n g *
IV
PREFACE
from b o t h m y e x p e r i e n c e course.
as
and m y s t u d y on the
During was it
language
teaching to students to
introduced
were
dramatized learning of
get
Students to
found language
interesting beyond
language
context
their
Literature in the
reinforced Major
what
emphasis
in L i t e r a t u r e
I have two
found
subjects*
methodology experience
w h i c h e n a b l e d me in perspective.
teaching me to in
dissertation.
It
addresses
t w o k i n d s of
and
pedagogical.
The t h e o r e t i c a l q u e s t i o n s
is the it? Is in
H o w can w e c h a r a c t e r i z e
d a i l y c o m m u n i c a t i o n 7 How of language ? To
different
that
communication examining
answer t h e s e q u e s t i o n s , as a system of
language
signification.
Saussurean concept of the s i g n is a p o i n t of e n t r y A l t h o u g h Saussure c l a s s i f i e s 1iterature as a S e c o n d order' that the m e d i u m system, becomes
it is a legacy of h i s c o n t r i b u t i o n
the focal p o i n t of the s t u d y of art and language the p r i m a r y concern sharpens reflexive function of the s t u d y of this use is The Russian on So the the
characterized
focus
B u t the l i t e r a r y use of language discourse pragmatic attempts analysis to which the partakes of o t h e r interpersonal
is also a k i n d such as
functions This
ones*
together use of
language*
VI
The second k i n d of q u e s t i o n s are of p e d a g o g i c a l W h a t are the p r o b l e m s of E n g l i s h t e a c h i n g should language the and effort ? language and Literature be taught
nature: How
in H o n g Kong? to the
second is
two subjects
related? W h y
language standard f a l l i n g a l t h o u g h the spent Why What language This the is place have on it is g r e a t e r of the than that of
time other
the n u m b e r might
Literature stylistic
candidates approach to
in b o t h
language to
and
dissertation
attempts
t e a c h i n g of approach
through
l i t e r a r y and n o n - l i t e r a r y u s e
VII
TABLE OF CONTENTS
NOTES
83
-85
APPENDIX
ONE
86
-97
A P P E N D I X TWO
98
APPENDIX
THREE
104-120
BIBLIOGRAPHY
121-124
VIII
If literary
there
there u s t be that is
it spoken or
literary language
seems
v i e w of the protean nature of develops endless through theories between attempt to but system of This examined kind changes about literature brought well by
as
pedagogical the be
literary The
language w i t h i n of
in s t y l i s t i c a n a l y s i s , implications
pedagogical
can be drawn
for the
language and of
literature*
The of entry*
languages
correspondence only
signified necessary
conventional
^^ere
relationship between
world
of
objects
to
which
they
refer.
This
i f f e r e n t I a l , p o w e r of
the m e a n i n g of o b j e c t s and
articulate
i e . the d i f f e r e n c e c o r r e s p o n d i n g to that of just as the sign sign from fact ^dog^, its that that sign to this langue, one
Thus,
meaning
is g e n e r a t e d concepts* The
difference meaning
is i d e n t i f i e d b y signs cannot b e taken in r e l a t i o n to the o t h e r s . are concerned With this with in m i n d , the the
relationship^
he distinguishes individual
realization places of
in actual of
instances of
l a n g u a g e . A n d he as the
importance
langue o v e r p a r o l e
object
1inguistics.:
is
in
languages Philology he
through
Comparative as the
Historical
Linguistics,
which
characterizes
orientations
essential knowledge of
as
each
contributes
to
different
kinds
of study
w h i c h are c o m p l e m e n t a r y to a c o m p r e h e n s i v e
Saussure
sequence,
The
influence
of
Ideas o u t l i n e d
above
on
b u t that is o u t s i d e the scope of is on the study of implications 1 i terature of of and the the
ideas to the e x a m i n a t i o n
literary
When
Saussure
launched h i s
^revolutiorxary, concept
of
the s i g n , he was p r e o c c u p i e d w i t h the study system from a l i n g u i s t i c p o i n t of for only as a or minor the language, parole w i t h i n the on the
language as a regard
H e had l i t t l e which he He
imagined
significant
is thrice r e m o v e d
form
of l i t e r a t u r e
is c o n c e r n e d w i t h how
s y s t e m of
t e c h n i c a l l y and c o n c e p t u a l l y works.
i m p o s i t i o n of personal v i e w s on the
m e d i u m becomes primary
Saussure
just a p p l y the
to
language
compared w i t h other systems such as linguistic can therefore signs say are that to more
complex
wholly the
arbitrary
w h i c h come closest
is w h y language,
semiology systems
#
is o n l y one
If would
I a of is
paradigm
of l a n g u a g e
doaii!i which
is a
language As a
accurately
and
depends of the
b e t w e e n the to
signified this is
illustrate
of for
spectrum
of c o l o u r The
spectrum of
language
are v a r i e d and e n d l e s s * of
discovery effect
or change
in concept or r e l a t i o n
things the
a r e f i n i n g of the s p e c t r u m *
A n d where
material
is c o n c e r n e d ,
t h e s p e c t r u m can b e There is a
w i t h i n a language c o m m u n i t y *
or a dog and
views is
about
spectrum
to c o n t a i n
A house
elements
which
and
subject
to d i f f e r e n t degrees
experiences literature
become concrete or
more
l i t e r a r y w h e n the t h i n g it s i g n i f i e s
is
feelings*
adequately
langue
specifies concern. of a
former s h o u l d be the
is a set of *hoajrd d e p o s i t e d b y the practice speakers w h o b e l o n g to system to all the same and
speech
intents
from
and what
is e s s e n t i a l It
is a n c i l l a r y
(Saussure, p . 14).
distinguishes essential,
l a n g u e for l i n g u i s t i c
conceptual,
static, and
is a s c i e n c e ,
investigation^
the be do to
language of
is not meant to b e l i t t l e
literature.
situate order
the r e l a t i o n s h i p b e t w e e n language and l i t e r a t u r e that language can be the function u n e q u i v o c a l l y * system as its b a s i s , relationship But it Very must be starts the s i g n i f i e d R u l e s of observed* the and It
in has
language
literature between
conventional signifier.
within bare
relationship
to q u e s t i o n ,
parody or u n d e r m i n e
homogeneous, system of
structured
is predicated and In
relationship langue.
the system of
that the
relationship the
between
language
dialectical: voluntaristic
individual, of is
heterogeneous# literary both changes are realizations the system of lose their
realization langue
literary
langue*
So l i t e r a r y language it
tension w i t h w h i c h
related to the
system of
And by i t s e l f ,
literary language
is a r e f l e x i v e
conceptualizaton.
this way,
it
to r e i n f o r c e
relationship
between
the s i g n i f i e d and
become a the
rules when
language to take
there
is a tendency our
perception which
system of
Fredric
son-house *
language
Saussure does not p r o v i d e a s o l u t i o n to concept of the s i g n has a l r e a d y p o i n t e d It nature is his idea of the erodes arbitrary the
this to and
his
problem*
differential theory of
mimetic to
art,
so that
Course
played
by
d i s t i n c t i o n s w h i c h structure our w o r l d
2
and
the
focus on the sign as a system of r e l a t i o n s people Traces b e g i n to v i e w of language as an i n f l u e n c e can be organizing found in
t h e o r i e s of the R u s s i a n F o r m a l i s t s and the Circle. I w o u l d try to read t h e i r basic the nature of concept in order ideas to
further as to
characterize
l i t e r a r y language,
as w e l l
formulate s t y l i s t i c a n a l y s i s .
Formalism
is
essentially
the
study
of
literary
language. U n l i k e the A n g l o - A m e r i c a n N e w C r i t i c i s m w h i c h also explores endorse Literature leading what is or literary cultural in Formalists aesthetic It the Study do not form.
v a l u e s of the
Language, V i k t o r S h k l o v s k y , d e f i n e s stylistic include devices sound; to or is conventional depends ^routines on of employed imagery,
i t , s u m 3 The
total
in i t * . rhythm, ordinary
interrelated,
t
estranging
,t
il iarizing* predicated
The c o n c e p t arbitrary
currency,
perceptions
the
world
conditioned Jakobson It
1
and
is
to
Roman
4
#
alienates
It m u s t be p o i n t e d o u t that the F o r m a l i s t s treat p o e t r y as they the q u i n t e s s e n t i a l l y have used l i t e r a r y use of language* Travels and Tristram Although Shandy to
m o s t of w h i c h they t h i n k For it
5
their of as
in its p h o n i c
one
w r i t t e n to be read and to w r i t i n g ,
is closer
i m p e r f e c t and d e r i v a t i v e r e p r e s e n t a t i o n * . of the
features w h i c h are characterized as . 6 p h o n o l o g i c a l rather than g r a p h i c a l , and these more condense in poetry than literature in prose*
features we
Moreover,
starts
traditions the to of
These
explain
with language as
10
There a r e ,
of c o u r s e , c r i t i c a l o b j e c t i o n s t o t h i s
^To
think the
F o r m a l i s t s came to c o n s i d e r prose w r i t i n g , t h e y o f t e n extended poetry* besides to But it the k i n d s of t e c h n i q u e literature to they had used
simply with
poetry
include, which is
writing
self< the
s e l f - e x h i b i t ing )* This
any is
criticism
on
traditional
c a t e g o r i z a t i o n of genres
in l i t e r a t u r e ,
has b e e n found
in c r i t i c a l
black and w h i t e d i s t i n c t i o n b e t w e e n prose and p o e t r y to e s t a b l i s h * short story A prose w o r k , Kew Gardens for instance, V i r g i n i a is p o e t i c , whereas m a n y
prosatic
Poeticalness
is also r e l a t e d
function* of
is one p r o m i n e n t b u t use of
poetry and
deviation
the norm m o r e
there are m o r e r e s t r i c t i o n s
that means
there
literary in poetry
it is o b v i o u s and o b j e c t i v e *
11
it has great
pedagogical
implications, w h i c h I shall e x p l a i n l a t e r . But I line strictly throughout. counter and naturalist There writing are kind some of which other is not There
includes
realist
criteria as
which
make
people
regard
this
writing
And I shall d i s c u s s the l i m i t a t i o n s of and e x p l o r e other c r i t e r i a . H e r e , to b e speak only of For is literariness not f a i r , the let
literature,
literature* even if it
be
not p r e s u m e is o n l y to
to d e f i n e
characterize
is an language,
there
to treat p o e t i c language* F i r s t , we m u s t It is
Eagleton
t o spot the L o n d o n U n d e r g r o u n d N o t i c e s
(Eagleton,
that e s t r a n g e m e n t as the sole' p r o p e r t y of They bare* only the the purpose w o r k i n g of language is a of
literary is
estrangement our
in s h a p i n g kind of
perception* use of
Literary language*
reflexive
S h k l o v s k y in *Art as T e c h n i q u e *
12
(1917 w r i t e s :
The
p u r p o s e of art is to i m p a r t the s e n s a t i o n of t h i n g s
as
t h e y are p e r c e i v e d , and n o t as t h e y are k n o w n . The of art is to m a k e objects to increase the the difficulty of to and
technique forms of an
make
difficult, perception,
length is
process
perception Art
is a w a y is
the object
This
l a y i n g bare
of
the
arbitrary
p o i n t i n g back to the w o r k i n g of the system of the Eagleton has taken * seizes* a^ the two ^^^ h a n g i n g
#
m u s t be p e r v e r s e
the
correspondence
concept.
filters of the
literature
attention One
the
medium
which
affects
interesting is
e x a m p l e can be
of p o i n t i n g blank from
script,
these signs
differently
13
such
as
road
signs.
So
by
all
rneatris,
language
for
is is not.
in Addressing this
what
is
what
question,
pub Is
table this of
remark
As a matter
it comes from K n u t it is
b u t the language
properties of
this
even
W h e t h e r the language
not has to be seen in r e l a t i o n to other parts or of the t e x t as a w h o l e * W e cannot to d e c i d e whether of it the is qualities
or structures or two
isolate
sentences
deviation
constitutes there
be a n o r m a t i v e If e v e r y s e n t e n c e or u n i t or a novel that
would * Not It
e i t h e r be no line or u n i t Is not
14
poem
is
literary.
coincident
literary
critics
throughout Canto,
be
it C h a p t e r , even
l i n e or word to analyse
s o m e a u t h o r s are c o n s i d e r e d g r e a t e r , some
some
receive
literary
different the
c r i t i c s d o see it in d i f f e r e n t
use of l a n g u a g e is one
in a s p e c i a l w a y t h r o u g h d e v i a t i o n which makes it
foregrounding
us tells
come
back it
to is literary;
m e that
h i m s e l f at the p u b t a b l e , h e a r i n g the q u o t e d line I p r e s u m e that he would not choose j u s t the this line for critical sense not
analysis. of the
Of course,
It m a k e s b u t t h e teachers
the tell
manager's whether it
office. belongs
these r e l e v a n t
contexts The
cannot
the n o v e l It
#
if the l i n e
can o n l y t e l l
is a part of the
larger
framework* literary.
To be a part of t h i s He cannot a s s u m e
is not
that the c o n t e x t 15
, Us *
of
it
as
Eagleton the
to r e s t r i c t the word c o n t e x t to j u s t the n a m e of or the k n o w l e d g e to that the l i n e comes from that Ha sun*s means more a
novel: is
answer literary is
this
that
context is
that*
To test w h e t h e r one
b y taking
social and p o l i t i c a l c o n t e x t *
fact,
there
test
in
to conclude might
that
properties
distinguish sign is
linguistic
But seen
and it has to be
includes
functions, in w h o l e *
that of it the is it
from Joyce
J o y c e s p e n d o e s n o t endorse e v e r y sentence
w r o t e as l i t e r a r y , r a t h e r , in t h i s case, h e m a k e s it read as
16
an
advertisement us
which
m a y a p p e a r on a n e w s p a p e r b u t not as an
and
he
means
to read it as s u c h ,
imaginative is a
literary a d v e r t i s e m e n t
in a fiction*
Literary language
c o m p l i c a t e d subject because draw to on it is not a f i x e d e n t i t y ; at the same t i m e d e v i c e s it can common of no on l i t e r a r y language can b e e a s i l y found in m a n y or characterize kinds is writing way along School to T h i s does not m e a n that there literary
The
has
been
generally This
attacked for treating p o e t i c language as a l l d e v i a t i o n * be a t t r i b u t e d to w h i c h focuses within Jakobson a text* and the Prague School, on the concept of art as forms of such as here
Tynyanov represented
system.
in reciprocal be it
a p p l i e s to
forms of language,
or n o t * see the
the o p e r a t i o n of
relationships This is
underlying
system. function
of the relationships.
17
in a s y s t e m of
In . poetics', correspond
Jakobson's 8
*Closing
statement:
1inguistics
and which
in s i x f u n c t i o n s on the the
focus on
addresser the
emotive
function
addressee
function means of
contact
the
poetic as
is d e f i n e d it
art:
function
the
l #
w i l l b e c h a r a c t e r i z e d as
^ l i t e r a r y , or
aesthetic
r e l a t i o n w i t h other a
functions* relative
the w o r d 1 iterairy b e c o m e s
is no a b s o l u t e d i s t i n c t i o n b e t w e e n one k i n d of others*
from the
W i t h i n the p o e t i c f u n c t i o n , there is a c o n t i n u i n g the registers and relationships the change are pedantic diction poet is among the various Thus, elements archaic but
shift which
in p o e t i c
forms*
diction can be
word order
in e p i c p o e m s in m o d e r n p o e t r y * on b y The
Wordsworth
18
in
order The
dream,
shifting authors,
a p p l i e s the concept of the d o m i n a n t to the b e t w e e n 1 i t e r a r y and non 1iterary systems . Renaissance poetry is to h i m r e l a t e d to The d o m i n a n t visual art of of
R o m a n t i c poetry to m u s i c and of
to verbal
These topic
concept
helps characterize
concept of
of
the d o m i n a n t
is
developed
the a
another
conception of
we are estranged
in a text tension
attention
constituted
opposed the
utterances the is a It
intentional
in w h i c h the
19
differential
r e l a t i o n s h i p s of the sign.
The powerful
concept
of
the
dominant
or
foregrounding
is
the
deviation be
linguistic This
at d i f f e r e n t
l e v e l s can
at c e r t a i n is also to b e n o t e d become
levels that or
established
they w i l l from
constitute a normative
background T h i s can b e
w h i c h new d e v i a t i o n s can b e
analysed d i a c h r o n i c a l l y b y c o m p a r i n g the
between
and the R o m a n t i c p o e t i c
from the
time to
S h a k e s p e a r e , Donne
Wordsworth So the a
of one p e r i o d m a y
constitute
following period, of
deviate, form
particular
be d e v i a t e d
in the works is u s u a l l y
different intentional
But above a l l ,
deviation
systematic.
20
It approach
is of
introduce to
the
explain
deviation. struggle in
to B l o o m , of
the
^anxiety
metonymy,
them
a
in order to j u s t i f y to
p o e t i c d i r e c t i o n in form or
diction;
misinterpret
West ode
Wind
struggles
against
New York,
approach p r o v i d e s the changes point fathers of in l i t e r a r y t r a d i t i o n s * view, and the Seen from a
impetus
relationships between
sons he analysed r e g i s t e r an e x t r e m e
t e n s i o n w h i c h u n d e r l i e s the d y n a m i c s of is a a n x i e t y of reading of a r t i s t i c
A n d the the
i n f l u e n c e of the
traditions his of
intentioaality^
21
The deviation*
systematic systematic in
^The
foregrounding
of c o m p o n e n t s
in a work of p o e t r y c o n s i s t s
i n t e r r e l a t i o n s h i p s of these and
components^
in t h e i r m u t u a l in the h i e r a r c h y
Saussurean it as
logocentrism,
assertion
although
dominant 1
it clear that
the
is l i t e r a r y in language*
the d o m i n a n t , when as
their
from is and o
of to,
work w h i c h sets
in
as w e l l
equally
important because To
an aesthetic
evaluate upset
is to
in a k i n d of
dialectic
balance the
in the
background
^automat i z e d '
B u t for the
literature gradation
principle The d o m i n a n t
in spatial
and
terms.
So b y s y s t e m a t i c d e v i a t i o n , and
is
constitute this
the
l iterariness* which
dynamic in the
tension
may s h i f t and renew our p e r s p e c t i v e between the sign and the That protean
is w h y
literature w h i c h makes
has
such e v e r renewing
and
potential
it generative
of different
I dominant
must as a
that structuring
the and
Mukarovsky*s
privileging
of the d o m i n a n t tends to u p s e t the d y n a m i c r e l a t i o n the norm and the d e v i a n t , the latter. Jakobson the
tried from
structuring
message
deviation
The p o e t i c f u n c t i o n , from
However, dominant in
Jakobson
applied
v a l u e terms to make the p o e t i c f u n c t i o n p r e d o m i n a t e o v e r all m a y result it from in The Pratt puts the p o i n t projection p r i n c i p l e , poetic other functions function function other function, the function if it is in s t a b i l i z i n g literary language in k i n d and than
interpreted,
in rather special
taken together.
On the one h a n d ,
requires
the p a r t i c i p a t i o n of at
least one
poetic
principle
placep
in the a x i s of this
transforms
( P r a t t , T o w a r d a S p e e p h A c t of
LlteraryDiscourse^p,32)
24
The
privileging
of the p o e t i c
function g i v e s in
rise
to
a kind
* the p r o j e c t i o n p r i n c i p l e can be
ideas of and a
and
appropriately verbal
the q u e s t i o n
poses:
makes
the F o r m a l i s t s *
the is
relationship
language
similarities
is basic to start the they the with speech kinds of Prague were
a point
regarded
elements
within the
functions
community*
*
emphasized one In
the
the neglect 25
To
extend
the to
function the
as
elements the
within
the serves as a
functions
within social
the
speech Still,
is to treat I do
discourse* in
follow
Formalist first
methodology
p r i m a c y to the f u n c t i o n of the But this function functions of the speech of language must be We explained may view
literary to
reference perspective language reciprocal discrete rules accused message language Objective By
larger
as a background foregrounded. To
literary and
is
dialectical
object
with
its
inherent
formal
is to upset this r e l a t i o n s h i p . And the F o r m a l i s t s of and doing this for t h e i r of the social context with in
disregard
is used* Fallacy
Roger Fowler
separating event,
out aad
the s i x
* the i
in
any as
speech
identifying
function
focussing
o n one of t h e M E S S A G E
linguistic
26
form
or surface
encourages
neglect
of
o t h e r factors pragmatic, r e f e r e n t i a l , metal i gu ist ic The linguistic m o d e l on w h i c h it is based c o n t a i n s the e l e m e n t s accommodaiting as it use:
aspects of l a n g u a g e when
simply
attention
Jakobson
hierarchizes "poetic
The focus on the message as the p o e t i c f u n c t i o n prominent writing of message the is an in some k i n d of l i t e r a t u r e b u t not m a y place all.
is Realist aspects
on the r e f e r e n t i a l
I do h o l d that the focus on the starting p o i n t w h e n the a n a l y s i s use of language it a procedural is concerned* But I consider I shall of it
literary
the p o e t i c
in the w i d e r framework of the is to of language as the message and analyse the k i n d of discourse*
To do literary
presupposes
relationship
is special
literary
discourse in and
because place
literature
from its o r i g i n and that the s p e a k i n g I is not u n d e r s t o o d as the author and the you is not always the and the in the literary 1 istener. attitude use of
is speech identified
can be
interpersonal we
by i n t r o d u c i n g the d i s c o u r s e e l e m e n t s , f u n c t i o n of
the p o e t i c
language proposed b y
We b e l i e v e well as the
that the p o e t i c f u n c t i o n and the interpersonal Rather, ones are not found
and
it
coplemeutary use of in
relationship language. I
literary
try to i l l u s t r a t e t h i s analysis of
integration texts*
chapter two,
in practical
literary
38
literature In
start systems
it is w r i t t e n ^
literature belongs
to a of
language.
It is ,
theories
<1970as t o d o so,
b u t because o f m y eservatioas in h i s
about
Roger Fowler,
I n t r o d u c t i o n t o Style, ;
The
effect
of of the l i t e r a r y object by
seems into a
to be the
structure,
diagrammed
linguistic
categories
p o n s t r a c t i o n a p p a r e n t l y m o r e c o m p l e x t h a n the o r i g i n a l
(but
n o t a c t u a l l y s o ) , and c e r t a i n l y I i f e l e s s i n c o m p a r i s o n w i t h
29
the
original *
The the
analysis poems
is v e r y d i s t a n t become,
from
the
interpretation ,meaningless to r e v e a l
when e x p o s e d to a t e c h n i q u e w h i c h
meaning.
is a p o i n t
e f f e c t of t h e i r a n a l y s i s i m p r e s s i o n that
it is t o o c o m p l i c a t e d
mechanical.
is w h y F o w l e r f i n d s teaching English
in H o n g K o n g , But to
technical* other
to b e a t t r a c t i v e .
f a i r to J a k o b s o n and reveal
m e a n i n g e x t r i n s i c of the f o r m n o r d o e s It linguistic in is
e s s e n t i a l l y to show
c o m p o n e n t s are s t r u c t u r e d t o e x p r e s s t h e In o t h e r w o r d s , it t r i e s t o show
literature by
principle to the
literature
serves no other purposes except p o i n t i n g As has been said function. because terms, the focus on
the p o e t i c of
T h i s can by focusing
* a c t of e x p r e s s i o n / we in which
o r in s i m p l e
the s p e c i a l
reality
practices, this on
concentrated
in
30
of
message and
in the as w e l l
addresser to
addressee,
function
been with
innovation in
that
response
criticism
h i s later to or
linguistic
the the
poetic text.
function
linguistic
the act of u t t e r a n c e . S t y l e then is a s e l f - r e f e r e n c e , a k i n d of reflexive use of literary starting p o i n t and the analysis reference. will We language. This concept of style is
the m e d i u m should be the focus of any a n a l y s i s . proceed Our this stylistic frame of have
be based on
to be analysed equivalence in
phonological
a a d g r a a t ical
t h e f o u r t h refers t o t h e c o n t e x t
in w h i c h the topic, of
is m a d e . and the
study
involves
decorii , It
restrictions, combination
as w e l l as
interpersonal
functions.
of these aspects w h i c h c o n s t i t u t e s
the s t y l e of
literary language *
and each
use
of the
determines that
f o l l o w i n g t h e r u l e s of g r a m m a r a s far a s p o s s i b l e can b e basic then language language language for such less The of choice of
literary of often
i r r e s p e c t i v e of
m a d e t o serve e x t r i n s i c p u r p o s e s , The q u e s t i o n of c h o i c e
literary language is d e c i s i v e
Style it is a
of
32
Choice
involves
v o
l it ion*
It is a conscious act of
the
is expressed
Burnt
Since
literature
is
a w r i t t e n record of the
use
of is
in the p a s t ,
Literary
traditions
n o m a t i ve of is
constraints
from w h i c h
expression
e m p l o y e d obsolete
forms to
T h e r e was a ship,*
33
linguistic world of
signification. reality To
These a
for s
defa i 1 iatrize
the
to capture
supernatural
mysterious to
experience.
share
this experience,
readjust the c o n v e n t i o n a l r e l a t i o n s h i p s b e t w e e n t h e s i g n and the concept, hence a renewed @ r u c t i o n the use of an sentence can p o i n t to an a t t e m p t nay be brought
f o l l o w e d b y s h r i l l screams, step he
, h u d d l e d u p o n a d a m p dooreld. Crime,
ch,2 With ma^ changes in language, iu what is normal The nou^ in a period was
^cone like
archaic the v e r ^
another.
^ind* times:
pronouned
in Shakespeare's
i a g r a t i tude
The
d e l i b e r a t e archaism of S h e l l e y 34
is
only
by
the
fact
that it
it also
is
used may
within
the
context
of of felt wind
an the in to
e v o k e echoes
in m e a n i n g is the
in Shakespeare. of the
A n d the t e n s i o n c o n n o t a t i o n of
extension
i n c l u d e its g e n e r a t i v e f u n c t i o n in its d e s t r u c t i v e p o w e r . Choices random is the in the l i t e r a r y use of language are not made at in h i s Table Talk that poetry , prose in be in the
C o l e r i d g e has d e f i n e d
the b e s t words to
assessed
to be seen study of
comparison*
in the l i t e r a r y use of
language* from
perspective w i l l
furnish the b a c k g r o u n d
s i m p l y s t u d i e d in items of l e x i c a l c h o i c e m a y serve as an singular person in s u b j e c t i v e plural The case was opposed to case
in o b j e c t i v e
in an e a r l i e r state of
#
l a n g u a g e In modern E n g l i s h , is used
^ thou
you
objective effects of
analysis
l i c e n c e of not be
4
h i m some t h r i c e , uses
appropriately l e v e l , Sir A n d r e w .
address h i s it becomes
The
insult
is the
only
through
is m a d e m o r e u r g e n t and The
pronoun
is i n f l e c t e d to a
contexts
in w h i c h the
study of
and
*you* w i l l
illustrate to create a
is c o n s c i o u s l y used in l i t e r a t u r e is to be interpreted as
certain
effect w h i c h
meaning*
In
Othello
but
it is changed to
dismissal: m ine
#
(II, b u t he
Othello
address to
change
in
the r e l a t i o n between
convention
But as a l i t e r a r y c o n v e n t i o n ,
36
used
differently. affection
used it in h i s here it
sonnets
to
convey
beloved
coimunicates
i n t i m a c y . H o w e v e r , in R o m a n t i c p o e t r y , it suggests d i s t a n c e : Thou wast not born for d e a t h , No hungry generations Ode tread immortal B i r d ! down and
Thou s t i l l u n r a v i s h , d b r i d e of q u i e t n e s s , Thou ( What What of s i l e n c e and slow t i m e Ode to the G r e c i a n not; and
art we know
The
* thou here belongs to the p o e t i c mode of apostrophe, to set these apart the ordinary
it
functions
W i t h i n the p o e m s ,
p o i n t s to the a l i e n a t i o n of the p o e t from the and nature, in it may suggests the failure of
addressee
relationship
p o e t and the r e a d e r -
Beyond
lexical
choice,
37
decisions
about
prosodic
features
o b v i o u s and c o n d e n s e d in rhyme ,
genre
stanzaic a stanza of
del iberate B u t as a
the
sentence metaphor
sequence of
fro
wintry
cold, ie*
to
perception, of
the
its p r e c i o u s n e s s ,
in the c o n c l u d i n g
T h i s thou p e r c e i v * s t , w h i c h makes thy l o v e more To love tliat well which thou must The rhyme scheme leave ere long*
which
not
by to to
breaking
mastering
constraints serves
the form
38
R h
m e
i s
o b l i g a t o r y only i n
s o m e
p o e
tic
form,
1 4
sti1i
T h i s shall not be K e n t . Fare thee w e l l , K i n g . Si th t h u s tm h o lives u wilt Freedo hence, and b a n i s h m e n t is here* Lear) The rhymed couplet is foregrounded in the backdrop of b l a n k lays emphasis by the
verse. on the
is h i g h l i g h t e d
And
The p r i c e seemed
Silenced transmission
Voice, When
it c a m e ,
. - .1 had not m i s h e a r d
OR V E R Y D A R K * (Hole S o y i n k a , T e l e p h o n e Conv?r^tloo.)
39
is spoken n a t u r a l l y as a c o n v e r s a t icm W h a t is the use of i n t e r n a l rhyme and a s s o n a n c e i m p o r t a n t words to reinforce the m e a n i n g connecting with
makes They in a
within of
lines
<
to In are
confession
>
fact,
lines,
which
patterned to g i v e e p h a s i s to
signicant
The syntactic pauses vary a lot b e t w e e n and points to within break the the lines creating of a tension stanzaic which form* of
threatens
constraints
Tension can also be created in the registers literature langue, different consciously within can the a As we have common
mixing
registers they
levels
found,
manipulated
to produce
in all of the
we have n a m i n g of And this you can see Is to open the is the b o l t * as you The purpose We can this forwards flowers of it this
A n d r a p i d l y backwards and
a s s a u l t i n g and f u m b l i n g the
40
Here to
the t e c h n i c a l heighten
jargons of t e a c h i n g m a n u a l s are A
adapted is the
contrast
created
between
facilitates components
reinforces
are structured at d i f f e r e n t
to produce
between
Mixing in
decorum in
Besides
, we find m i x i n g of registers c o m m o n and to drama and the of and comic Shakespeare and And
incorporated characters
prattling serious
tongue tragedies
histories*
interestingly
, the rascal
where thou s p e n d e s t thy t ime* though the the faster it grows, y e t youth,
it is trodden o n , it
in
the
novel,
mixing
41
of
registers
is
subtly
In D i c k e n s , s Great
Expectations the
childTs
r e g i s t e r of the innocent P i p .
subtle
the registers
in the n a r r a t i v e reveal
character
He returned a
to Mercedes and
image, fever
into h i s b l o o d .
gathered w i t h i n h i m and led h i m to rove alone along kindly his the quiet avenue.
restless heart
if they had of
known each other and had made the gates or in some more surrounded supreme
perhaps at one
They w o u l d be in that
alone, of
tenderness he w o u l d be
On
superficial
level,
it
reminds
us Here,
of
d e s c r i p t i o n of Paul
in S o n s and
In the Brutus
rendered
effects.
42
character which
is presented o n d i f f e r e n t to e n v i s i o n
levels: in d r a m a t i c world
form
serves
t h e fantasy
of t h e form to
subconscious depict
and in v a r i e t i e s of prose n a r r a t i v e
c #
life*
conventions
and d e c o r u m s
such
as
genres, a
and other
formal
m a y constitute to
is c h a r a c t e r i z e d .
they
and s t y l i s t i c
effects in this
of the l i t e r a r y use of language have to b e analysed dynamic relationship* If style is a matter of only its
decision, reflects
relationship Stylistic
conventions
the choice
of an of the
individual
in the If w e apply
Saussure^s
literary
c o n v e n t i o n s and style to
traditions may be c o m p a r e d to langue and i n d i v i d u a l parole* And their elationship* as it has been
said, can
usually be
w e l l as reciprocal*
To
analyse
individual
style, 43
distinction
syntagmatic
and
paradigmatic
relationships
is
can be
is e s s e n t i a l l y a
although
c o m b i n a t i o n s of m o r p h e m e s and n e o l o g i s m s
effects
of literary deliberate.
conscious sentence
is b a s i c to
foregrounding* can be detected are not * T e n d e r is the n i g h t * inverted. And an sharpens our and found more
Syntagmatic easily
deviation its
and many of
it is
ungramrnat ical
syntax
illustrated
in c u m i n g s * s Me up at does
mouse
In at,
this P is
o e m
the p r e p o s i t i o n a l The
object
in the l i n e followed
up is who
inverted. And
*does* that
displaced.
adverbial
is found in The
They are
syntax
is d e l i b e r a t e l y d e f o r m e d to foreground the The create suspense that Foregrounding More than than usual for usual need not be appearance of the subject in the first three is
c o n f u s i o n of the to those
l i n e s and irony in
or less
justification parallel
in
, structure
As
caesar
loved
weep
for
him ;
as
he
was
fortune,
Here climax
the with
w h i c h serves slew 45
to
foreground The
logical stressed
concluding
create e m p h a s i s
The
same
idea is r e p e a t e d in the p a r a l l e l s t r u c t u r e , w h i c h is m a d e u p of two The a d v e r b c l a u s e of reason w i t h the which emphasizes in apposition. to the the v e r b is f o l l o w e d b y The a d j e c t i v e s in the the main noun clause to to in these
clause clause
in the f i r s t
correspond
nouns to
second: and
A n d the v e r b s are r e l a t e d to the nouns two clauses: to and to to to The c o n n e c t i v e s the sentences
and
f u n c t i o n to structure
and to construct is
after
of the m o b to The a
The the
effect of syntax
striking in a longer
repeated
cohes i v e Fog
everywhere.
Kentish
46
fog
l y i n g o u t o n the y a r d s ,
fog d r o o p i n g on the
. . .# F o g
G r e e n w i c h p e n s ioners * ..;
c r u e l l y p i n c h i n g the toes and fingers is rawest, and the dense fog is by Temple fog, of 1)
A n d hard
Chancellor
Chancery* (Charles D i c k e n s , B l e a k H o u s e , C h .
The s h a p e l e s s n e s s and p e r v a s i v e n e s s of the fog is d r a m a t i z e d and foregrounded the by main between the verbless noun of phrases, the text* are which The then move only
constitute connections
units noun
phrases
from
one
disconnected
scene
catching
glimpses
But the
embedding is
of the c o m m o n
logical
connection is expressed in the contrast between the inverted syntax of the last paragraph and the v e r b l e s s syntax of the * p r e v i o u s o n e s . In the last sentence, the three a d v e r b i a l s of place show d e f i n i t e directioru
47
The f i n i t e v e r b
is
predicate in a
to most
prominent
position
inverted syntax
expectation of the
fulfiled
o n l y at the end*
effects
deliberate connection
logical of for
the p e o p l e
it is the C h a n c e l l o r w h o is h e l d r e s p o n s i b l e
t h e i r p l i g h t * Thus through
a n a l y s i s can lead
Stylistic
effects
can
be
analysed
in
paradigmatic
The use of l i t e r a r y language n u m b e r of u n u s u a l the expected and collocations. the of fresh perception are of Tension and
will may be
be q u e s t i o n e d brought.
collocations many
more n o t i c e a b l e verse
in D y l a n T h o
*once b e l o w a sun
break s e l e c t i o n rules b u t
considered
48
ungrammatical.
They
serve to u p s e t our r e g u l a r
linguistic
e x p e c t a t i o n and h e i g h t e n the i n t e n s i t y of eaning. There are other e x a m p l e s o f v i o l a t i o n o f s e l e c t i o n r u l e s : The y e l l o w fog that rubs its back u p o n the w i n d o w panes, The y e l l o w smoke that rubs its m u z z l e on the w i n d o w panes ( E l i o t , The Tove Sorny of J . A l f r e d Pro f r o c k ) The stars are not wanted now p u t out e v e r y o n e : Pack up the m o o n and di swan tie the sun Pour away the ocean and sweep up the w o o d s For n o t h i n g now can e v e r come to any g o o d * (ftuden^Two songs fr..Hed]li ftnderson) The the first gives to inanimate nouns so in draatizait ionu that The
second one turns things l i k e the into disposable with clashes The first the objects* Tension
nouns*
in the usual
conventional
in a k i n d of caricature
animated
attributes p o i n t of
the
satirical
49
second
song
is
expressed
in h y p e r b o l e
forth
v i o l e n t f i t of e m o t i o n s o n the part of the speakers his love emotional is sincere or n o t , we nevertheless impact. feel the
Whether violent of it or
The
G e n e r a l l y s p e a k i n g , it is a m e t a p h o r i c a l use of l a n g u a g e . In linguistic constitute deviates a syntactic normative and lexical from which And restraints language Randolph
background and
Q u i r k e x p r e s s e s it m o r e c l e a r l y : A metaphor involves the one it introduces, and a paradigmatic it replaces and the relation
figurative the
literal
metaphorical
linguistic
environment (Hinnis, p.308) The metaphorical What use makes of language the language is not confined to the both
literature*
l i t e r a r y can be
t e n s i o n b e t w e e n the l i t e r a l and f i g u r a t i v e e l e m e n t s in the p a r a d i g m a t i c and syntagmatic relations* and this narrative The And discourse* the novel use of be
tension can
the n a r r a t i v e s w i t c h e s to a f i g u r a t i v e p e r s p e c t i ve : *He re and there huge afraid on a rounded w o o d - p i l e , black m u s h r o o m , to unfurl it that was l i k e the stalk of a but it all seemed that The of
its t i m i d ,
1 ight in for
burned of from
use seen
conveys
impression.
words
seemed*
and
if* c o l o u r the m o d a l i t y of
who
enters
into the m i n d of the character to describe Things are figures and people
presented as
Men, by a
t h e i r caps p u l l e d down their collars turned up, few w o m e n all m u f f l e d scurried along he and one into
cream A shilling! of dark She must be g o i n g away for e v e r ! A huge f l y i n g through the to s l i d e , coil the
rope went
In the
glow or a
or the peak of a ^ P *
saw her
w i t h her head
uncovered
51
In
these seen
examples,
the
world
world feels.
reflects These
feelings
indirect
w h i c h fuses the narrator^ and character^ v iewpo int the a u t h o r * s a t t i t u d e especially the attention towards F e n e l l a and The through narrative deviation other style and
strikes
the
so that he may compare the l i t e r a r y use of language here with This different use of system of in ordinary use of language for the the is
language r e s u l t i n g
reality
articulated. about *
of r e a l i t y
can be
brought
study describes
and analyses
the effects
of
in the d i a l e c t i c a l But
into account.
read is
evaluate
d e f i n e , b u t it cannot b e b y p a s s e d . In chapter t h r e e , I shall try to situate s t y l i s t i c analysis of and literary its language in
teaching
institutions
evaluate
pedagogical
i m p l i c a t ions
52
CHAPTER THREE
; LITERATURE
d i s c u s s i n g the p e d a g o g i c a l analysis
implications I would
of like
of literary language
Kong
based
secondary for my I
it w i t h a
level
was
Insufficient
l i n g u i s t i c competence
is the m a i n
internal
schools
but
b i l i n g u a l ism
English of
L i t e r a t u r e w h i c h are taught
in the curricula as s u b j e c t s
53
study. Notice
that E n g l i s h Language
in the A d v a n c e d l e v e l the
is
University
is now p e n d i n g
W i t h i n the l e v e l s of r e f e r e n c e , e x a m i n a t i o n s : the S c h o o l C e r t i f i c a t e at the the end of end of arts the the or science fifth
there are two e x t e r n a l to b e taken Examination streamed from at into form whereas And of
either
language
is m e a n t
for all
students, arts
Literature has
is o n l y o f f e r e d to become a m i n o r i t y
subject is
one:
candidates subjects,
other I
in the A - L e v e l . It
is to ways
English the
S o I shall b e g i n b y l o o k i n g at p r o b l e m s of the convenience, teaching use there be of English the are term no
Language
I shall
other Literature .
is meant to
The
Not
only time
subject,
the class of
allocated whole
to an average
18
the
school
timetable*
According
Department, curriculum
to p r o v i d e
p u p i l w i t h the o p p o r t u n i t y to d e v e l o p the m a x i m u m degree functional which are competence specially in for appropriate those d o m a i n s of to the Hong
English as one E n g l i s h as
languages of
medium of and
pleasure
medium Kong
inhabitants
Englsih as a tool
To realize
these o b j e c t i v e s , a
^Communicative A p p r o a c h of can
this be
2.
A u t h e n t i c rather than a r t i f i c i a l Engl ish should b e used. The learner should be involved in geriuiae acts
55
of
p u r p o s e f u l communicat ion
q
Equal medium
emphasis of
commurxicaition
formal
l i n g u i s t i c system of English. (Syllabuses, pp* 9-16) These principles has are sensible, some of for the at least the of new the
Approach
reduced
drawbacks
traditional
and the structural approaches, w h i c h rest on the *the learner, the able having **mastered * in for use* into to different of the one way the or
c o m m u n i c a t i ve
practice,
affected by the nature 15 contents and the First are of a l l , the interests and needs of the
learner of
colours. are
trouble
both teachers and learners tend to This is u n d e r s t a n d a b l e , for results has the
shaped
learning/teaching h a b i t s to a great
conditioned 20
56
Most
textbooks
are
functional
especially
for
familiarize
of d i f f e r e n t for testing
b y the e x a m i n a t i o n s
test paper series d o e v e n m o r e harm than g o o d to b o t h and students by they usurp the chance testing for for genuine and
substituting
learning
g i v i n g users a w r o n g
idea of what
language they
language by
for t h e m to learn
The E x a m i n a t i o n s
c a n d i d a t e s n o t to r e p r o d u c e set s e n t e n c e s o r
the e x a m i n a t i o n on c o m p o s i t i o n w r i t i n g t e s t i f i e s to
s t u d e n t s * A n d in m a n y
the
students place
more
are
teachers
students will b u y
for t h e i r own
57
answer g u e s s i n g and c h e c k i n g r o u t i n e tutorial centres Their reduce language to a handy have become
increasingly
education reinforce a
success is
learning a
certain
shortcut
What do we we
students
communicate?
should
Let us take a closer look at the course besides have those model test paper
series
just d i s c u s s e d . fifth
for the
by the Longman Press and ffew Access of the Oxford Press. Both books for 4
University of the
Syllabuses English
Secondary to analyse
Integrated using
Book
it for s i x y e a r s . Press,
r
it and
for each
book is passage
into u n i t s
unit
consists of a 58
cornpreherision
grammar have
taught
for c o m p r e h e n s i o n to a certain ,
e x t e n t not a u t h e n t i c .
stylistically ^easy^
uniform
w r i t t e n w i t h a c o n t r o l l e d v o c a b u l a r y for
r e a d i n g . Some d i a l o g u e s and i n t e r v i e w s are i n c l u d e d , b u t not e v e n one of t h e m is a u t h e n t i c speech in w r i t t e n few passages are extracted registers, from authentic form sources Very of
different
styles,
or types such as
expository,
So they l i m i t s t u d e n t s '
teacher
the student
questions
The structures
Language with
Review
Section
teaches R u l e s of
grai ar
and are
inadequate in single
explained but
illustrated
sentences*
Exercises
and do
d r i l l s that f o l l o w , not
4
as w e l l as those
encourage g e n u i n e The
acts of c o m m u n i c a t i o n
Appendix not
2) .
q u e s t i o n s or d r i l l s are a r t i f i c i a l , to experience* So
related
examples
59
or
formulas but
meaningless T h e y are to
or not
uncontextualized motivated to
apply
express
teaching do
contents
taught
in for
General the
not p r o v i d e
m u c h chance
teacher
to c o m m u n i c a t e of English
found
as
especially
s i n g u l a r e x p o s u r e to t h i s k i n d of
will testing
p r e d i l e c t i o n w h i l e the m e c h a n i s m of
in L i t e r a t u r e
is d i f f e r e n t * A l s o t h e y f o u n d it d i f f i c u l t e s p e c i a l l y in the f i r s t t e r m , b u t after that m o s t of t h e m said that about L i t e r a t u r e , they were really using language But is more in t a l k i n g to express
t h e m s e l v e s w h i c h they had s e l d o m done who do not choose L i t e r a t u r e , to read they h a v e even a the it
difficult
them
modern
unabridged to do
although
language
competence
m a y lead us to p o s t u l a t e
taught from
prepare
teaching
experience
more
experienced is
teachers is that an a v e r a g e
study
problems
which
language
gap
in is a
E n g l i s h teaching b e t w e e n form f i v e and form good reason to call the l a n g u a g e ^ Use of language
There
E n g l ish* a to
because tool
students have to a c t u a l l y p u t
to use as
for study* to
to train t h e m
listen
lectures
reference subjects
attitude
forms are
they have to do
teachers that in
the s i x t h form o f t e n hear t h e i r cannot take down the m a i n p o i n t s they confess sense in
complain And
In w r i t i n g
difficulties analysing
event
physical
change or a c h e m i c a l r e a c t i o n ,
etc.
61
In the w o r l d of w o r k , the gap m a y b e w i d e r . The k i n d of training received m o s t f i f t h form g r a d u a t e s and m a n y s e v e n t h does not give them either formers or
competence
They seem to be at a loss b e y o n d the or e x a m i n a t i o n c o n t e x t . how to use language language extent foundation M o s t of t h e m h a v e to start
classroom learning
in r e l a t i o n
to t h e i r w o r k , a l t h o u g h the some
t h e y h a v e b u i l t u p h e l p s t h e m to
The p o p u l a r i t y of language i n s t i t u t e s ,
extra-mural problems
their to to
f o u n d a t i o n and acquired
previously
practical of language in
anything
on learning E n g l i s h to some e x t e n t do not p a y * T h i s k i n d English alone education for I does not e x t e n d A beyond to schooling, the study
s t y l i s t i c approach
language m a y h e l p
The
teaching interest
of
Readers
is
supposed
to
and h a b i t provide it
in reading contents
good
Readers
can
in
the
approached*
is not
periods often
in the t i m e t a b l e neglected or
for t h e m , treated
they have or
teachers to use
Readers
in c l a s s .As a r e s u l t ,
d u r i n g the lessons, m a n y just ask to on HOWa any many teach the felt
read and e x p l a i n a few sentences or d i f f i c u l t words and some most the And book students Readers. to read and check the q u e s t i o n s a t t a c h e d M a n y of these q u e s t i o n s are factual ones instead of W H Y and
m a n y just r e t e l l or or s e m i n a r s
opinions courses
In short,
kill the it
genuine acts
Moreover,
Literature* misconception
uninteresting* in an why
the n u m b e r of Literature
63
Having
o u t l i n e d the s i t u a t i o n s and
problems,
we
may is to
then ask how the s t y l i s t i c a n a l y s i s of l i t e r a r y language related examine to E n g l i s h teaching in Hong Kong* I shall try
the r e l a t i o n s w i t h less
language teaching f i r s t
because
these seem
We serve as
have
may is
a paradigm
drawing it makes
attention aware
of the
the s i g n i f i e r
signified* use of
relationship and
any b r e a k i n g of the
important rectifies
language as something g i v e n and is t a u g h t as a second language, serious* Most students study They put and
E n g l i s h as f a c t u a l and concrete data b y rote l e a r n i n g . like them to m e m o r i z e in their idioms, writing They employ are set phrases and cliches irrespective not of and
style
actually
expressing act of
Using
language
is a kind of
n o t e x p o s e d to d i f f e r e n t s t y l i s t i c use of language and that they other have b e e n t r a i n e d to treat E n g l i s h as a subject to b e s t u d i e d for like
subjects
Stylistic language
analysis
not as a kind of factual data or f i x e d e n t i t y , but as a use a medium of signification for coromunicat ion*
The
concept Many
s t y l e as d e v i a n c e people
has
also in
students
to
works
of l i t e r a t u r e
they
T h i s k i n d of fear is based is a c q u i r e d
drills
in
gratumar
is i n s t r u c t i v e
to
sentences students*
Students
consciously But w h y do
or they
to a c h i e v e a certain
from
factor^
Another
more
subtle
factor
may
suggest
that
singular
e x p o s u r e to the n o r m in langue does n o t n e c e s s a r i l y e n t a i l a correct knowing language speak of only relative is r i g h t or or deviating grammatical what use of language b y an is n o t e n o u g h Just because to are
is r i g h t or g r a m m a t i c a l
is not a f i x e d of
It is m o r e a p p r o p r i a t e D e v i a t i o n and n o r m
using
grammatical
W i t h that in m i n d , of
language,
in l a n g u e * stylistic
In t h i s case analysis
teaching
of the
l i t e r a r y language b e c o m e
obvious*
the and
use
of
in d y n a m i c
dialectical in the
analysis the
relationship choice*
to describe Through
practice students it
literary
conscious of and
4
learning of the
more
literary
language
interesting
context
66
which become
grammar
is u n d e r s t o o d and l e a r n e d .
G r a m m a r then
can when
purpose
in an illocutionairy act
of that
It m a y be wrong for some teachers to assume students should not be encouraged to d e v e l o p their
style
i istakes
to correct a m i n o r m i s t a k e
are u s i n g grammar b u t may not be expressing t h e m s e l v e s . of making a mistake leads them to m e m o r i z e in set phrases Fear
sentences makes
and e v e n paragraphs in
exawinaLtions.
t h e m falter in
examiner notice
will
this problem.
grammar and style, norm and cannot teach grammar without and
d e v i a t i o n are analysing of
interrelated*
in the use
Another
essential
c h a r a c t e r i s t i c of l i t e r a r y is discourse.
implications
In fact*
the w o r d *
addresser instruction
(the to
giving
prohibitive Literary
addressee
otoirists*
discourse the
complicated
l i t e r a r y d i s c o u r s e can be c h a l l e n g i n g and stiroulating. The kind of messages that students are e x p o s e d to is m a i n l y factual , in
They are m o s t l y
few messages w h i c h r e g i s t e r in c o m p o s i t i o n or
Most q u e s t i o n s
not touch on
attitudes
individual the
opinions.
a result, or
express to an
their a t t i t u d e s
in w r i t i n g because they are not required Given, for e x a m p l e , writing the relevant to
a newspaper as a precis
a r r i v e at a c o n c l u s i o n as
grasp
viewpoint
stylistic
analysis
of
literary
discourse
can
be
In chapter two,
we have
illustrated
in d e t a i l in
d e v i a n t syntax and
modality
colouring
story can be
68
addresser/addressee
situation
is created
to
involve
the
reader in discourse w i t h the a u t h o r . The p o i n t of v i e w of an author can be seen from his attitudes towards in the the choice literary
A s t y l i s t i c a n a l y s i s of
It s e n s i t i z e s h i m to his
R e a d i n g t h e n can b e c o m e an a c t i v e
speech only of a
i 1 locut ioriary
attitudes
in the classroom or in
their the
writing, teacher is to
instead
discourse are
language
acts
really
^situational'
Having
said
all this,
I hope
I have not
given
the
i m p r e s s i o n that- o n l y s t y l i s t i c a n a l y s i s of l i t e r a r y language has pedagogical Let teaching be me implications propose for language teaching for in Hong
language should
The book
stylisticailly
include
passages of d i f f e r e n t s t y l e s and r e g i s t e r s , f e t t e r s and eroos, humour, historical advertise ents* writing, news reports,
technical
writing,
69
documents^
writing,
well
stylistic are
students for
to d i f f e r e n t a c t u a l in d i f f e r e n t study,
language
different a of in
It b e c o m e s r e a l l y
In different
fact,
I have t r i e d out
of and
styles
w i t h m y students
Above all,
stylistic
is m o s t successful
and p o p u l a r
In the s u a m e r of
Education 2).
of
schools
After
to also video
for language
do this
fay
the
Secondary by The
f i f t y teachers
and
these
analysed
As to the teaching of L i t e r a t u r e , we have analysed the present kind about students* some aiy of language education against seems to
that give to
and p r e j u d i c e
well-
established most of
ones start
form one
As to the
form seven was only an E n g l i s h Major who had not Literature (After all, at a l l * there
already* this
offering
The one where education cannot my to teach it* students there* still
I f i n i s h e d my f i f t h
cannot offer
find a Literature
finished was
nobody
Literature
There
is
a shortage n o t o n l y of s t u d e n t s b u t a l s o 71
of
teachers
and the s i t u a t i o n is in a k i n d of v i c i o u s
Institute to
teachers, b u t a l l
t e a c h i n g of University
U n i v e r s i t y of Hong K o n g * I t is o n l y a were less than twenty teachers e n r o l l e d that the major emphasis in
understandable
of
teacher
language can d i s p e l
fear
and
We different So And
have analysed
in d e t a i l
that literary
language in
is
in use b u t n o t
Literature* procedural
orientation*
This
72
It So I
to would
r e c o m m e n d t h i s approach to language m a j o r s w h o h a v e to teach Literature proved b e l o w the T h i s approach has a l s o using it been
effective in and
literary to be
materials accepted
propose language
teaching of the
methodologies
English Syllabuses
in Hong Kong*
is n e e d e d .
It is true that they c o u l d c u l t i v a t e i n t u i t i v e j u d g e m e n t and critical intelligence in t h e i r undergraduate practised might There their The not is a own
authentic
This tendency b e c o m e s a practice b o t h teachers and students are But we cannot under shift the the
There
are
adverse
effects
in
teaching
ready how
to the students.
the k i n d of
language the by
difficult
than it
have to swallow
73
It
stifles
individual
response and
teacher' s
comments
because in
express
themselves
their
their
As a r e s u l t , notes
their
undigested
phrases
sentences. A n d for the o t h e r s , we ay s t i l l be a b l e to trace the sources of these n o t e s * It does not take too long for an examination m a r k e r to i d e n t i f y the same p a t t e r n s of notes schools their
appearing each year. There are some we 11-estaLbl ished whose teachers instruct t h e i r students n e v e r to lend
notes to others.
T h i s e l i t i s t a t t i t u d e of m o n o p o l y is based Literature.
of language with
their words.
abilities
to
express t h i s e x p e r i e n c e
in t h e i r
74
Intuitive after
may come in to
only
long
literary from
authentic ready-made So to
encounter.
w i l l not c o m e
study
experience.
i m p l i c a t i o n s of the s t y l i s t i c a n a l y s i s of l i t e r a r y become given tend obvious to F i r s t of is the procedural Many they language.
to treat
l i t e r a t u r e as a f i x e d irrespective of the
teaching on
was to g i v e us and
Russian R e v o l u t i o n
evils
service
an
opposite extreme
to the F o r m a l i s t s .
To a v o i d b o t h use of
w e m a y start b y f o c u s i n g on the a l l e g o r i c a l and each and foregrounding* the ice the can be We
deviation in to
can then
students
find
the a u t h o r * s a t t i t u d e s b y a n a l y s i n g the of them each which the interesting and the kind of
characteristic
of
these is
A very
75
to
well
as the
t e a c h i n g p r o c e d u r e s h o u l d w e s i t u a t e the a l l e g o r y in a p o w e r relationship, necessarily fix politics it and ideology. We should Let not
to b e R u s s i a at
first .
students in some or
Maybe
it happens
classmates, the
m a y find aspects of t h i s s i t u a t i o n
capitalist
s o c i e t y of Hong
procedural i e the
primacy use
or
cardinal.
of the story,
the fable before they start teaching the their interest and i m a g i n a t i o n . use and keep of it literary
in suspense or
in the special and c o n s c i o u s use of language. what the content of the book means
To t e l l them
is to deny
prescribed
And paraphrase
in a
poetry poem
, in
tendency
to
examination
76
questions*
This
some
teachers paraphrase p o e t r y and S h a k e s p e a r e ' s p l a y s by way of e x p l a n a t ion. To do it w i l l of language In t h i s case, lose the total effects of the use the concept of deviation and
By d r a w i n g unusual prosody,
students'
syntax
features of
they
can so
e x p e r i n c e the t e n s i o n b e t w e e n the d e v i a t i o n and the n o r m , that choice they can analyse the total effects of linguistic the
stylistic
in the l i g h t of the
constraints.
The
has
understand
a v o i d t h i s b i a s b y introducing the discourse e l e m e n t important c h a r a c t e r i s t i c of l i t e r a r y language. T h i s for we have made selective use on
w h i c h the
that has been w r i t t e n about the work or commentaries and interpretat ions f i n d
they m i g h t have read a lot of books about analysis advantage, may turn the lack of cultural
students
safe
and
secure
that
they
will
not
miss
anything it
in is
confronting
the t e x t on t h e i r own
b e t t e r to choose w o r k s w h i c h a p p e a l to their e x p e r i e n c e *
To
take
an and
actual The
example, on
the the
choices, current
Great School
Why?
The
result t h e i r need to consult secondary texts it spacem reasons Hard some is not n e c e s s a r i l y m e a n t
in terms of
share.
Times
i n t e r e s t i n g for s t y l i s t i c
analysis*
set two c r i t e r i a
be p o i n t e d out that they are not two different are integrated in the text of a its literary work. Let
us
analyse
each c r i t e r i o n and
teaching
There
are
good reasons
to prescribe 78
texts w h i c h
are
more e x p e r i m e n t a l
in the use of
language
to
the m e s s a g e at t h i s l e v e l
. 23
language in
W e do n o t d e n y Literature, nor do we
neglect
critical
that one m a y d e v e l o p b y b e i n g e x p o s e d to great one m u s t g e t s t u d e n t s o j ect ives can be i n t e r e s t e d in t h e m realized* To get first them
s i g n i f i c a n t can be more i n s t r u c t i v e and i l l u s t r a t i v e of literary texts use of language. will enable them The to
u n d e r s t a n d i n g and to h e l p o v e r c o m e t h i s b y potential they have w i t h Language competence in the long years of language integrate the
It helps teaching.
teaching
language A English
typical- Hong Kong student has already been for t w e l v e years w h e n he reaches the fourth
studying As received of
knowledge
r u l e s and although
literary of this
can h e l p them
79
k n o w l e d g e and e x t e n d t h e i r use of langnaige. B e i n g c o n v e r s a n t w i t h g r a m m a r r u l e s and fcermSy t h e y are m o r e ready and b e t t e r prepared for t r a i n i n g in l i n g u i s t i c d e s c r i p t i o n , which is
b a s i c to s t y l i s t i c a n a l y s i s . On the o t h e r h a n d , the d o m i n a n t or foregrounded (not n e c e s s a r i l y d e v i a n t ) s t y l i s t i c in the texts can be illustrative of the features and
interesting
In t h i s w a y , language
each
W h e n language a focal p o i n t of
is changed interest,
At this juncture,
discourse
e l e m e n t can be
of language presupposes a choice and an i n t e n t i o n , w h i c h , some e x t e n t , iplicaite the author And audience, at the act of in the act of utterance expression presupposes So we the
least an implied or
i m a g i n a r y one* involves
say that the literary m e d i u m or message and the author it, the in a k i n d of
reader in
To participate
level the he
its
effects* *in to
and social
references
of
language to
As a result,
they m a y
discern
the a t t i t u d e or p o i n t of v i e w of the
author.
Some light be an
in a c t i v e is of
speech
and
O n l y when t h i s
done can students start to appreciate the c u l t u r a l v a l u e s Literature objectives and to d e v e l o p c r i t i c a l can be fully accomplished in And
these
Coming
back
to the second c r i t e r i o n of
the
syllabus of
discourse are
But these A
implications
teaching*
true contents a
language and
approaches*
can p r o v i d e
good c o m m u n i c a t i v e c o n t e n t ,
whereas
the k i n d of
stylistic
language*
81
To
conclude,
do
not of
want the
to
recapitulate analysis
the of
pedagogical
implications
stylistic
language. in the
situation gradual
medium
cause
Although
many
the
E d u c a t i o n C o m m i s s i o n Report N o . 2 been
i m p l e m e n t e d to i m p r o v e the s i t u a t i o n ,
can o n l y be e v a l u a t e d
in due course* F r o m m y e x p e r i e n c e
English will be
affected.
I find
students This
in
1 i n g u i s t i c s and/or l i t e r a t u r e A n d the reduced use of can affect t h i s p o t e n t i a l . So to reinforce when I English propose is b e i n g phased out as a that the i plicafcioas we language of have should
instruction, discussed be
considered
system
NOTES
CHAPTER ONE
Saussure,
pp.14-15^
2. S a u s s u r e , p ^ X X V .
Refer to in Lemon and Re is, as Russian Formalist
Translated
p p . 3 H
5. Q u o t e d in C u l l e r ,
6* R e f e r to Chapman, L i n g u i s t i c s and L i t e r a t u r e , p . 3 6 . 7* The many 8^ Refer to Jakobson, Roman (1960 , t^Closiiag Statement in Language, focus on the message is one important function of
In Sebeok, S t y l e
CHAPTER
political
L i n g u i s t i c s and L i t e r a t u r e ,
The
of
^Literature, p.103 A d e t a i l e d analysis of this sonnet ^Language collected and in The R e a d e r : is found in Sonnet 73' ed
Shakespeare's in
Literature,
R.Fowler, p.79-122. ch.3. 14* A d e t a i l e d analysis of prosody ^The Language is found in H e l e n Kwok' s Linguistic
in C h a p a n , s Th^
^^guage
of
d e t a i l e d analysis of their 3.
speeches
is
found
in
Appendix 17*
Engl ish
Grammar
for
CHAPTER 18. By
Chinese will
Failure
9f
is yet
published) 20. Accesses based in the to further s t u d i e s and work o p p o r t u n i t y are Salary scale especially of these
on examinatioti
results.
r e s u l t s into a c c o u n t *
21
Teachers can
22*
The
NEW
proposed
to For
include
Component.
23*
It
m u s t be p o i n t e d out that e v e r y text can be used the use of The After all, is
to a is a
matter
stylistics
comparative
BS
APPENDIX
ONE
USING L I T E R A T U R E IN L A N G U A G E T E A C H I N G
Explanatory
Notes
This is one e x a m p l e of u s i n g L i t e r a t u r e in language teaching. Act I I I , i i , 1 3 - 1 1 5 of J u l i u s CaesarCsee p S7 > was shown on v i d e o in a form four language class^ M a i n s t y l i s t i c features of the two speeches were d i s c u s s e d . A s a f o l l o w up a s s i g n m e n t , students were asked to use the structures, s t y l e s and t e c h n i q u e s found in these two speeches for c r e a t i v e w r i t i n g . The purpose was to encourage t h e m to a p p l y what they had learned to express themselves A n d the two scripts, B E A U T Y SPEAKS and THIEVES SPEAK IN COURT were the result of t h e i r e f f o r t s * They staged three performances based on these scripts
in 1986 Teaching
3.
interested
3* T h i e v e s Speak in Court
dM^iLQAm^
( iuii.>
noble Brutus h SlW^t patient till the last. * Romans, aountrymcn, 0 and lovers! Hear me for my s c
e
& r
cm
, ^
For m m c that you mav believe. Censure mc m your*wisdom r ^ t r u y 0 U [ s c n s c s , t h 2 t y u the better' lh this , any'dear Incnd o ^ ^ s ^ s , to Mm I say that Brutus' love to
silent,>hat you mayH e a r pdi eve tnc J onor, nonof, Md have respeez to mine n' 5 0
Caesar was no less than his. If tHcn that fHcnd 20 demand why Brutus rose against Caesar, this is my answer not that I loved Caesar less, but that I loved Rome more. Had you rather Caesar were living, and die all slaves, than that Caesar were dead, to live all freeman? As Caesar loved mc, I weep 25 for him; as he wz$ fortunate, I rcjoice at it; as he was valiant, I honor him. But as he wis ambitious, I slew him. There iS tears for his love, jcy for his fortune, honor for his valor, and death for his ambition. Who is here so base that would be a bondman? If 31 any, speak, for him have I offended. Who is f^crc so rude 0 that would not be a Roman? If any, speak, for him have I offended. Who is here so vile that will not love his country? If any, speak, for him have I offended. I pause for a reply. 37 a l l % None, Brutus, none.
more to Caesar than you shall do to Brutus. The question of his death is enrolled 0 in the Capitol, his glory not extenuated, wherein he. was worthy, 42 nor his offenses enforced,0 for which he suffered death. * [Enter ANTONY and others, with c a e s a h ' s Here comes hisv body, mourned by Mark Antony, who, though yik had no hand in his death, shall receive the benefit of his dying, a pbcc in the 47 commonwealth ~ as which of you shall not? With this I depart that, as I slew my best lover for the good of Rome, I have the same dagger for myself 1. cit. Bring him with triumph home unto his house, 2. CIT. Give him a statue with his ancestors. 3. CIT. Let him be Caesar. 4. cit. . Caesars better parts SHaH be crowncd in Brutus.
3. CIT.
1 fear there will a-worse come in his place 4. cm Marked yc his words? He would not tKc crown, , *
07
BEAUTY
SPEAKS
MCI J please
MC2: that
Yes, censure the in y o u r w i s d o w and awake y o u r you Many b e the b e t t e r judge of o u r people Some fantastic
say that h o l d i n g b e a u t y
contests are
even
naive speaks,
and s t u p i d ,
intelligence head to
from
MCi is
: not
So they w i l l a l l b e l i e v e meaningless it is
s i g n i f i e s many things*
MC2 : to
Glad an
envelope. of this
AHU
MC1:
Cash!
cheque?
Moneycar:
m o r e
M y f a v o r i t e h o b b y is c o u n t i n g cash,
coin by
A n d w h i c h type of car w o u l d y o u prefer? Moneycar The b i g g e r the b e t t e r . M C I : W o u l d y o u l i k e a v a n o r a lorry? M o n e y c a r N o , I m e a n the m o r e e x p e n s i v e , the b e t t e r s Rolls Royce Like a
MC2: Why
Moneycar
Cars
are
status s y m b o l
and m o n e y
earns
power.
M o n e y can b u y e v e r y t h i n g , e v e r y t h i n g
in the w o r l d !
Everything very
just f i t s y o u
Moneycar Yes MC2 Then y o u r parents m u s t know y o u v e r y n o g e n e r a t i o n gap b e t w e e n y o u and y o u r Moneycar: name Exactly * parents* they gave m e car the A n d there is
* Moneycar*
themselves, I
t h e y g a v e m e the n a m e ,
A s m y name
is M o n e y c a r ,
Moneycar
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MClz
C o m i n g is o u r second c o n t e s t a n t ,
Miss Innocent,
Miss
Innocent:
stepping
stone to the tv a f r a i d y o u h a v e not answered m y q u e s t i o n Innocent: Not that I want to get i n t o the tv c i r c l e experience* less,
Innocent: innocent f
W h o is here so innocent to say that I am In fact, y o u are a l l is fair, innocent Y o u a l l t h i n k t h i s Emm Let m e Do someone you to is
There
Miss Innocent
Innocent
is v e r y h u m o u r o u s
thank y o u M i s s
MC2:
It*s
time
Miss Bodily
So.
G l a d to touch you M i s s B o d i l y So. Bodily: afraid you made a m i s t a k e on m y Is that B o d i l y Sold? family
MC2: O h excuse m e .
S-O-L-D?
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Bodily:
h no S
I just w a n t to show m y b o d y n o t to s e l l
it.
It is b e c a u s e I am not a from?
MCIr Where d i d y o u c o m e
to e x p o s e y o u r body? B o d i l y : A s y f i g u r e is p e r f e c t , I want to show it o f f . A s I want to show MCi: Yes, what I joined this kind of fashion do y o u suggest for the
contestants? B o d i l y The more sexy, the b e t t e r . So that I can show off m y perfect But e v e r y b o d y w i l l see m o s t part of y o u r
the
That means showing off is the u n i q u e B o d i l y To be true to y b o d y , yes MCI: Thank y o u M i s s B o d i l y Show. a pleasure*
for your
joining
Bodily:
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Miss
V a n i t y You want to ask me w h y I j o i n e d t h i s c o n t e s t . A m I r i g h t ' MC2: Yes. The other contestant m u s t have f r o m the W h o is here so Who is here so honour? to an all My told
Right?
h y p o c r i t i c a l as to deny she has no a m b i t i o n ? high sounding is a as not to say she does not but
want also a
ambition famous,
famous
a singer,
DJ,
rounder* * * MC2 I question contest? V a n i t y For those who are rich, who are p o w e r f u l , I honour t h e n . For those am afraid you were not answering my is how w o u l d y o u treat your friends question* The
if you w i n the
I flatter t h e m * them.
c o m m o n and poor,
I dispise
MC2: E r * * * T h a a k y o u M i s s V a n i t y * Vanity T h a n k s
MCI: Well, it comes to the most e x c i t i n g owent * W h i c h w i l l be our M i s s Perfect? MC2: Our M i s s Perfect Reporter: result is M i s s Innocent* Innocent* Soe says that the
Congrafculations
Miss
is unfair*
What do you
think?
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Innocent: indeed*
Certainty
not.
The w h o l e contest
is v e r y
fair,
audience. in
R e p o r t e r w h y wereA s o c o n f i d e n t to say that y o u w o u l d w i n the semi-final? Because I am f i l l e d w i t h w i s d o m relatives relatives? from hand
Innocent:
to
and m y u n c l e is the boss of one of the j u d g e s . Y O U s e e , if I w e r e n o t M i s s P e r f e c t , w h o s h o u l d take y place? Reporter: contest? leave) Reporter M o n e y c a r , w h y d o y o u l o o k so u n h a p p y ? Moneycar U n f a i r * R e p o r t e r : Why? M o n e y c a r M y great h o p e has b r o k e n i n t o p i e c e s . i n n o c e n t g i r l b e M i s s Perfect? S u c h a p e r f e c t a great be Reporter Yes,, .why can an innocent gi r i p p e r feet? Moneycar Money Car M o n e y Car Reporter There is s o m e t h i n g w r o n g w i t h h e r * MCI: I'll send h e r to C a s t l e Peak. H o w can an unfair!
f
I (filling
In a R o l l s Royce?
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Reporter: you
Vanity,
Are
Vanity: goal
to become
people * Reporter: Vanity: What are you g o i n g to do then? am g o i n g to marry an h o n o u r a b l e m a n , a rich man,
an influential man *
B o d i l y Show,
is it a p i t y that y o u can* t w i n
the
Of course*
figure
in
I c a n / t w i n it required to wear
Reporter:
be upset*
You just want to expose your body* Then you can show
can i n v i t e you to take a set of photos* your perfect figure B o d i l y Show to sacrifice
9^
1 np SPEAv T h
Cast T h i e f ,
Judge,
Prosecutor
Mi 11ionfacturer
and
Jury.
Mr
Judge,
this
suspect
stole
one dollar
from
m i l l i o n f a c t u r e r o n the second of M a y , 1986J : Plead g u i l t y o r n o t ? T N o , I hadrit stolen it P Even though you deny it, w e have our honourable Mr
mi 11ionfacturer
citizen,
to prove
the case.
Mr
Millionfacturer
J: B e s e r i o u s . P: W to Is h e the one w h o stole your one d o l l a r coin? Y e s , I saw h i steal h i s left it in h i s right hand, then hand it it into h i s right
pocket J H a v e y o u g o t a n y p r o o f ?
M:
Proof?
As work
I am a for people
society, regarded
f
as a n honourable an
as I a m a n h o u o u r a b l e m a n , I
am t h e proof*
95"
J Do you plead g u i l t y or not? If n o t , d e f e n d T : A l l r i g h t ! I p l e a d g u i l t y but J: Then why did you r u i n your future
yourself*
for such a l i t t l e
money?
and I l o v e a l l of y o u m o r e , understand?
J No!
T. my
I use not
stolen i t , other p e o p l e w o u l d do it. A n y w a y , some need to be thieves, if not what are y o u is a p o i n t . you all be judge and prosecutor here for?
either
In fact, I am v e r y g r e a t
As indulge
you b u y t h e m ,
as I find
you
and as I anted to
in the world.
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T:
Shut
1
up!
Who
is here so m e a n as to p u n i s h an
TOarx ? If any speak, for h i m h a v e I o f f e n d e d . W h o base that t h i n k an h o n o u r a b l e m a n is w r o n g . for h i m have I o f f e n d e d . I p a u s e for a reply.. None J But, Mr Mill ion fact urer trust him Mr much luxury, him innocent? society, overcharges workers. luxury strength his an He so is our honourable man
If a n y ,
We must
as we e n j o y it so m u c h , But is the goods and But boss, as he luxury work free for
provides honourable. as
producer, underpays
his
consumers,
In fact,
he makes e v e r y o n e of us h i s worker
he produces makes us labour to the last ounce of for it* Who goods? is here so d u l l that he has not Who is here so strong that he
So if we is more
is g u i l t y is the
which
^real t h i e f ? Jury Mr Mill ionf a c t u r e r should be g u i l t y of making our poor evil. T : (wickedly and t r i u m p h a n t l y ) Ha ha in l u x u r i e s w h i l e the suspect has d e l i v e r e d us life
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Explanatory Notes :
T h i s Speech was d e l i v e r e d in the S u m m e r Course in E n g l i s h Language M e t h o d o l o g y 86 o r g a n i z e d b y the School of E d u c a t i o n , The C h i n e s e U n i v e r s i t y of H o n g K o n g * There were f i f t y teachers p r e s e n t . They were v e r y i n t e r e s t e d in the m a t e r i a l s and a p p r o a c h * We f o r m e d an i n f o r m a l g r o u p a f t e r the Speech and we still meet often to share experience and teaching k i t s < m o s t of them were l i t e r a r y o n e s ) in language t e a c h i n g .
Contents of A p p e n d i x
Two:
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G o o d m o r n i n g , dear col leagues M a y b e , y o u h a v e a l r e a d y c l a r i f y a few p o i n t s before sharing my experience w i t h you. F i r s t , I am not a g a i n s t g r a m m a r o r d r i l i s o r g r a m m a t i c a l drills* They are i n d i s p e n s a b l e b u t t h e i r e f f i c a c y depends v e r y much on how and when we use them * What I find uncreative and u n p r o f i t a b l e are those uncontexualized e x e r c i s e s w h i c h are n o t r e l a t e d to b o t h the t e a c h e r ' s and the l e a r n e r ^ s e x p e r i e n c e M a n y of those d r i l l s on language workbooks, q u e s t i o n s at the back of readers, and mul t iplechoice items belong to this category. Example from workbooks- please refer to p^ }o3 Students may just reproduce m e c h a n i c a l l y m e a n i n g l e s s b u t g r a m m a t i c a l sentences on the f o r m u l a p r o v i d e d . E x a m p l e from readers-please see the same p a g e . Most of the q u e s t i o n s ask What and H o w . They can o n l y f a m i l i a r i s e s t u d e n t s w i t h the a c t i o n of the story and enable t h e m to paraphrase the c o n t e n t s They do not appeal to t h e i r e x p e r i e n c e or e l i c i t personal responses. A s for m u l t i p l e - c h o i c e i t e m s , it is too o b v i o u s to q u o t e e x a m p l e to show that b o t h teachers and students m a y take testing as teaching.
let
me
So, in short, what are the p o i n t s of d o i n g and m a r k i n g such exercises? Is it e n o u g h just to m a k e sure that the students h a v e read the story or a c q u i r e d some v o c a b u l a r y b y doing the exercises on p Perhaps, we might p e r s o n a l i z e the context of the q u e s t i o n s . Thus in Section 1, we m a y ask What do I need to pass the e x a m ? or What does HK need to r e m a i n stable and prosper? And in Section 2, we m a y f o l l o w i n g q u e s t i o n 1 ask If y o u were caught d o i n g t h a t , how w o u l d y o u r parents p u n i s h you? Or we m a y ask them Is Tom naughty> b u t do y o u l i k e hixi/ Why? If w e want to d r i l l students, w e m u s t first get the interested and i n v o l v e d in the things they learn. T h i s can be done b y a p p e a l i n g to their experinces, enlarging their sensibilities and c h a l l e n g i n g the ir u n d e r s t a n d i a g * A n d h e r e , p o e t r y and drama w i t h t h e i r a u d i o - v i s u a l impact can be v e r y impressive> thus useful. i
For we start w i t h songs w h i c h are poetic and m e a n i n g f u l M a n y songs are catchy and popular w i t h youngsters, they are p o t e n t i a l l l y p r o d u c t i v e if we make good use of t h e m . However, youngsters are enthralled nore by the melody and the singer than by the words, they d o n ' t know and they are seldom g u i d e d to find out the m e a n i n g of the songsIn a d d i t i o n , most song series like Mister Monday and English Through Songs on Newspaper c o n c e n t r a t e o n structural d r i l l s in tenses and a s p e c t s The approach m a y not be a p p e a l i n g and m o s t of the songs are not f a m i l i a r and m e a n i n g f u l to s t u d e n t s . T h u s , t o make full ^se of songs in teaching, we m u s t g u i d e students to analyse and
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appreciate the l y r i c . O n l y a f t e r t h e i r responses h a v e oeeri initiated and d e v e l o p e d can s i m u l a t i o n of structure and grammar be started. And it w i l l be productive if the s e n t e n c e s are s i m u l a t e d t o e l i c i t and e x p r e s s authentic e x p e r i e n c e s and f e e l i n g s .
Fair
u s l i s t e n t o the f i r s t is in A p p e n d i x 3).
song,
Scarborough
Most students have no d i f f i c u l t i e s in f i n d i n g out the subject m a t t e r * The what q u e s t i o n is not a p r o b l e m * But the m o r e e s s e n t i a l task is to s e n s i t i z e t h e m to the experiences of the soldier * This l e a d s u s f r o m the c o n t e n t s to the techniques of the song o r w e m a y say p o e m . How does the w r i t e r p r e s e n t the c r u e l t i e s of war? H o w e f f e c t i v e is t h i s p r e s e n t a t i o n ? W h y d o e s it c u t a d e e p i m p r e s s i o n o n us? Let u s l i s t e n t o t h e song a g a i n , and at t h e same t i m e , I have p r o d u c e d a set of s l i d e s to h i g h l i g h t the t h e m e and its presentat ion.
First, we may guide s t u d e n t s to see the narrative structure* The song d o e s n o t narrate a s t o r y in a straight chronological order* It d r a m a t i z e s a t h e m e h i n g i n g o n the i n t e r p l a y s of the p r e s e n t w i t h the past the n o w w i t h then here w i t h t h e r e . Contrast is here b a s i c to the structure. The s e t t i n g of b a t t l e f i e l d stands in g r e a t r e l i e f to the background of home The cruelties of war and the helplessness of the soldier become more striking and oppressive a m i d the s p i c e s of the k i t c h e n and the w a r m t h of home* Repetition serves to reinforce t h i s i m p r e s s ion and effect* The line * Parsley, sage, rose m a r y and thye* reiterating in e v e r y stanza sends o u t the scent of sweet memory* It r e v i v e s the s o l d i e r w h o has b e c o m e n u m b e d and stupefied f o l l o w i n g m e c h a n i c a l l y the order of the generals to ight for a cause that t h e y ^ v e long ago forgotten.' These h e r b a l s p i c e s are b o t h h e a l lag as t h e y help restore the senses to the s o l d i e r , and s o o t h i n g as t h e y b r i n g him back s w e e t m e m o r y of h i s l o v e * However, she can o n l y b e a true l o v e to m o u r n for h i m as h e can s l e e p * u n a w a r e of the c l a r i o n c a l l * o n l y in h i s g r a v e *
If s t u d e n t s are m o v e d to p u t t h e m s e l v e s in the p o s i t i o n of the s o l d i e r , t h e i r s y m p a t h y w i l l b e e n l a r g e d and their ' s e n s i b i l i t i e s sharpened* T h e y w i l l b e g i n to analyse the techniques in p r e s e n t a t i o n , such as the use of contrast, repetition, i m a g e r y and e v e n c o u n t e r p o i n t in u s i c * Their p o w e r of a p p r e c i a t i o n w i l l b e increased*
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W h a t are the t e a c h i n g p o i n t s of i t . V e r y o b v i o u s l y , w e can teach students word f o r m a t i o n as p r e f i x and s u f f i x . We h a v e here e g , right, r i g h t a b l e and uar i g h t a b l e , etc Mo we can teach them the use of to-inf in i t i ve * B u t 9 reover, I 1 1 concentrate on the r h y t h m of the song* It is the rhythm here w h i c h i n v i g o r a t e s the w h o l e song and adds i n t e n s i t y to it* It starts s l o w l y and s o f t l y with 1 dream.. * L i s t e n to the 1 attack of the verbs that follow To fight, To b e a r * . * , each becomes forte or stronger b u i l d i n g up a m o m e n t u m u n t i l it reaches the cadence of the first stanza where the b e a t slows d o w n .
In the second stanza, the m oJm e n t u m p i c k s up again w i t h To r i g h t , To l o v e , To t r y . But t h i s t i m e it carries onto the third stanza *This is m y q u e s t * - * u n t i l it reaches the c l i m a x in the 1 ine: *To b e w i l l i n g to march into hell for a h e a v e n l y c a u s e . * Here the i n t e n s i t y of the m a n ' s will is at the peak where the t h e m e of sacrifice is g l o r i f ied^
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Thus, if we want to teach the use of t o - i n f i n i t i v e to express a purpose, we had b e t t e r s e n s i t i z e students to the rhythm first, so that they can feel the sense of urgency, d e t e r m i n a t i o n and m o m e n t u m . As for the teaching of word f o r m a t i o n , here the p r e f i x and s u f f i x , it w i l l be ore m e m o r a b l e and interesting if we relate it to the t h e m e * H e r e , all the p r e f i x e s are n e g a t i v e or they g i v e a n e g a t i v e sense to the a d j e c t i v e s , eg* i m p o s s i b l e , unbearable* If the to-infinitive p h r a s e s , f i g h t , to bear, to right,'etc. express a m o t i v a t e d , p o s i t i v e a c t i o n , we find the clash b e t w e e n the p o s s i b l e w i t h the i m p o s s i b l e the right w i t h the unrightable the p o s i t i v e w i t h the negative the thesis w i t h the antithesis* This clash culniiiates in the c l i m a c t i c l 9 ine, *To be w i l l i n g to m a r c h into h e l l for a h e a v e n l y c a u s e * The paradoxical c o n d i t i o n of m a n is suggested*
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Let us listen to a more formal poem, a sonnet by S h a k e s p e a r e > S o n n e t 73. What is s i g n i f i c a n t about t h i s p o e m is the mood and the f e e l i n g s w h i c h are c r y s t a l 1 ized in the v i v i d imagery in the first q u a t r a i n , the speaker compares himself to a u t u m n , w h e n trees are bare of l e a v e s . In Q u a t r a i n t w o , h e c o m p a r e s it to s u n s e t , the t w i l i g h t m o m e n t w h e n black n i g h t a p p r o a c h e s . In the t h i r d q u a t r a i n , he compares it to a g l o w i n g b e d of coals s m o u l d e r i n g in its ashes.
These m e t a p h o r s c o n v e y a concrete p i c t u r e of 1 , the speak e r ' s l i f e and fee 1 ings The p a u s e a f t e r * l e a v es , * # x none , few* in l i n e 2 adds an e m o t i o n a l impact of the slow and tragic s o l e m n i t y . The m o o d is l a d e n and i n t e n s i f i e d . The use of a l l i t e r a t i o n in l i n e 7 *by and by* b l a c k night increases the horror of d y i n g .
S o m e p e o p l e m a y t h i n k that p o e t r y is u n p r a c t i c a l or e v e n i r r e l e v a n t in the l e a r n i n g of language. Language is not just a tool of g i v i n g and f o l l o w i n g instruct i o n s , it e m b o d i e s t h o u g h t s and f e e l i n g s .
Let us watch a S h a k e s p e a r e ' s p l a y , J u l i u s . Caesar on video* I selected the two m o s t f a m o u s speeches for y o u . A f t e r v i e w i n g , m y students w i l l p e r f o r m two p l a y s . The scripts of these p l a y s were w r i t t e n b y t h e m s e l v e s after watching Shakespeare's *
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Chapter 1 1. What was Tom doing when his Aunt Polly called him? 2. How did his aunt find out that he had been swimming? 3. Why didn't Tom like the boy he met in the street? 4. What happened when he got home that night? 1. What had Aunt Polly planned for Tom on Saturday morning? 2. What happened to Jim when he tried to paint the fence? 3. How did Tom get all the work done? 4. What did */om do to show he was angry with Sid? 1. 2. 3. 4. What nude Tom dislike going to church? How did he spend his time in dxurch? How did A- nt Polly get iid of Tom's pain? How would Tom know if Huckleberry Finn was waiting for him that ni^it?
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E x p l a n a t o r y Notes: Camp L e a p 87 was organized by the Secondary School E n g l i s h Teachers Association and sponsored by the British C o u n c i l . There were 100 students and 50 teachers fro 50 d i f f e r e n t secondary schools who joined the c a n p . It p r o v i d e d a very good occasion for testing the use of the s t y l i s t i c a p p r o a c h to language and Literature teaching. T h e i r responses to the prograitne were analysed and a p p e n d e d .
C o n t e n t s of Appendix Three: 1. Progranne Notes 2 . A S t y l i s t i c Analysis of the two S p e e c h e s in jpi t ^esar 3 . .^f^yhnrnnqh P a Q u e s t i o n s aad D i s c u s s i o n
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b) Sunrise Sunset from F i d d l e r on the Roof c) The I m p o s s i b l e D r e a m from M a n of La M a n c h a IV* Cat in the R a i n - An A n a l y s i s
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These h a n d o u t s were g i v e n to the campers and they read and d i s c u s s e d t h e m in groups b e f o r e the p r o g r a m m e * The p r o g r a m m e p r o c e e d e d as f o l l o w s : The two speeches from were shown on Main stylistic features w e r e analysed and discussed f o l l o w i n g the notes o n the h a n d o u t * A f t e r the d i s c u s s i o n , m y s t u d e n t s p e r f o r m e d B e a u t y Speaks and T h i e v e s Speaks in Court* I I * D i s c u s s i o n f o l l o w i n g the n o t e s on the h a n d o u t s after the S l i d e Show
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a) and b) were shown o n v i d e o * T h e m e s of these m o v i e s were d i s c u s s e d w i t h reference to the lyrics* c) was p l a y e d on tape recorder* M a i n s t y l i s t i c features were analysed* They had not e n o u g h t i m e to read t h i s before the p r o g r a m m e , so n o d e t a i l e d d i s c u s s i o n c o u l d b e d o a 105
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B e f o r e y o u look at t h i s a n a l y s i s and answer the q u e s t i o n s , p l e a s e read the e x t r a c t f r o m S h a k e s p e a r e * s J u l i u s Caesar. W r i t e d o w n y o u r i m p r e s s i o n s or a n y t h i n g y o u f i n d i n t e r e s t i n g or s p e c i a l * endearing address of socializing and c o n d e s c e n s i o n E d o i n g s o m e t h i n g b e n e a t h one * s social ratr^jk to w i n the p e o p l e ' s support b y t r e a t i n g t h e m as friendly e q u a l s . A l s o an appeal to s o l i d a r i t y and p a t r i o t i s m * 1*16 R e p e t i t i o n of ^believe* and ^honour serves to relate and e v e n e q u a t e t h e m in the b a l a n c e d sentences of circular agreement, ie . *Bel ieve m e for m i n e honour* * * that y o u m a y b e l i e v e * A l s o an appeal to a u t h o r i t y . 1 * i8: F l a t t e r y - to c o n d e see nd i rig I y A n appeal to reason. praise in emotional order appeal to please here b e n e a t h a show of
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1.28 A p a r a l l e l structure b u i l d i n g up to c o n c l u d i n g c l i m a x w i t h e m p h a s i s , balance and c l a r i t y of idea organization. N o t i c e the regular rhythm up to honour hlfa* The e m p h a t i c ^But * arrests the f l o w of r h y t h m to create a s u s p e n s e [state of uncertain e x p e c t a t i o n ] w h i c h leads to a l o g i c a l cli actic conclusion ^ I s l e w h i m * . C o m p a r i n g the stress of t h i s l i n e w i t h that of w e e p for hi ,, r e j o i c e at it * and h o n o u r hiffi^What e f f e c t does the d i f f e r e n c e add to the reasoning? 1 29: A p a r a l l e l structure to reinforce the reasoning b u i l t in the p r e v i o u s structure. N o t i c e the m e a n i n g is the same but there are structural changes 1.28 is made up of an adverb clause of reason w i t h the a in clause which entphasizes the verb 1.29 is n o u n clause in a p p o s i t i o n Ctwo words or phrases h a v e the same r e f e r e n c e 1 * B u t 1.28 and 1.29 are integrated the a d j e c t i v e s in 1.28 c o r r e s p o n d to the nouns in 1.29, ie. fortunate to fortune, val iant to valour* and a m b i t i o u s to a m b i t i o n : the verbs in 1*28 are related to the nouns in 1.29, i e . w e e p to tears, rejoice to joy, h o n o u r to honour and slew to death. N o t i c e both in 1 *28 and f o r ' in 1.29 f u n c t i o n to structure the s e n t e n c e s a n d to c o n s t r u c t the reasoning. The c o n c l u s i o n , ie* the k i l l i n g f C a e s a r , is made l o g i c a l and acceptable w h e n it is introduced after Caesar is praised. To w e i g h l o v e , v a l o u r and hoaoar against a m b i t i o n is a tactic w h i c h j u s t i f i e s the k i l l i n g as 106
. 1 . 3 0 : R h e t o r i c a l q u e s t i o n s making the killing inevitable. The q u e s t i o n s are based on an u n s t a t e d e q u a t i o n , ie. Caesar=tyrant=people become bondmen=not Romans=not love his c o u n t r y a r h e t o r i c a l q u e s t i o n d o e s n o t ask for c h o i c e s or o p i n i o n s , it i m p o s e s v i e w p o i n t on the addressee so that he w i l l act a c c o r d i n g l y H e r e , the p r e d i c t e d and c o n d i t i o n e d negative response is reinforced by the derogative f adjectives, r u d e ' , W i l e ' and *base as w e l l as, the n e g a t i v e c o n s t r u c t ion It is a foregone c o n c l u s 1on A n d the pause is inserted for an o p e n d e c l a r a t i o n of a g r e e m e n t , for an act of c o m p l iance 1 4 4 : A n act of a p p e a s e m e n t , a g e s t u r e of g e n e r o s i t y , as w e l l as, a d e w o n s t r a t ion of p o w e r taken o v e r b y B r u t u s n o w . 1 * 5 2 : Not a c o m m i s s i v e act of p r o m i s e * Confident of the p e o p l e ' s support, B r u t u s p l a y s on t h e i r e m o t i o n s b y accusing himself in order to p r o m p t t h e m to a c q u i t and honour h i m * The direction is g i v e n indirectly* Complying with it, the people become m o b Ccommon p e o p l e whose f e e l i n g s and o p i n i o n s change from m o m e n t to m o m e n t w i t h o u t t h o u g h t I See 1.75. A n e x p r e s s i v e act of a p # o l o g y in face of the angry m o b w h o h a v e b e e n swayed to B r a t u s s s i d e . 1 ^84: The s u b j u n c t i v e * w e r e ' suggests that Caesar was not, so he was unjustly and * grievously* k i l l e d * 1 It undermines the v a l i d i t y of what the ^noble* B r u t u s * t o l d If what he * told* is false, his n o b i l i t y w i l l be in question* R e p e t i t i o n of are treated as a g r o u p w h i c h also B r u t u s and h i s a c c o m p l i c e s i m p l i e s a gang. *says* is
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CAT IN THE RAIN B e f o r e y o u l o o k at and answer t h e s e q u e s t i o n s , p l e a s e read the story first. W r i t e down your impressions or a n y t h i n g you find interesting or special* I ^Def inite Article what In the first paragraph, * the occurs t w e n t y - s e v e n t i m e s , i m p r e s s i o n does it g i v e to the setting of the story? of relationship
1. The story is c a l l e d *Cat in the Rairi* b u t not * A Cat in # tJ J the R a i n or The Cat in the R a i n In m o d e r n E n g l i s h , a s i n g u l a r n o u n u s e d w i t h o u t an a r t i c l e is u n u s u a l or e v e n u n g r a m m a t ical, where do you u s u a l l y find this besides in 1iterature? 2* T h r o u g h o u t the s t o r y , the a n i m a l * C a t ' is referred as c Cat in the R a i n ' Title U h e c a d 2 1 I , ^the k i t t y M l . 263 , ^a kitty'II .86], ^a c a t ' C f o u r t i m e s 1 1 . 9 6 - 9 7 ] . A r e t h e y the same cat? W h a t does she w a n t the cat for? W h a t d o e s the oat r e o r e s e n t ? 3 * I n what s i t u a t i o n is the w o m a n c a l l e d W h a t does the change 111^ Verbal Structure suggest? and
1. Compare the use of verbs in 11* 25-27 w i t h that1 in 11*3539* N o t i c e the a u x i l i a r y or modal verbs ^would , ^could* and ^must* in the second extract* Does the d i f f e r e n c e in the w a y s the characters are described b e t w e e n these two e x t r a c t s express the t e l l e r ' s standpoint to the characters? 2 * N o t i c e also that m o d a l verbs are o n l y used w i t h the w i f e w h e r e a s the husband is d e s c r i b e d in the same way throughout do it,** her husband offered fro the bed* C1 201 aad * G e o r g e was not l i s t e n i n g * He was r e a d i n g h i s book* ^ tl98J Does y o u r s / n p a t h y lie w i t h the husband o r wife? Vhy?
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rf ?n 2 ^ % ^ ' o c c u r many times and usea in ai fp-feren* , ^ ^^ 1 ^,.,,., *i t ^ n f l R f l / a s p e c t s , e g * f ro.m I i k e d ' t o r + lKing _ f^rff W a n t e d ' to ^want'. Notice also , t h e repeated p6 a9r a l l1 e l sentence s t r u c t u r e s in w h i c h these v e r b s 1 3 0 3 5a n d Z L T , ^ " U . 9 6 - 9 7 , H o v ^ o these f e a t u r e s h e l p e x p r e s s f cfter needs? A n d w h a t d o e s she r e a l l y need? Reference consulted Ronald Carter's style and Inn t e r p r e t a t i o n in H e m i n g w a y ' s " C a t in the R a i n " c o l l e c t e d i Lancfuaqe and L i t e r a t u r e , e d . R o n a l d C a r t e r , G e o r g e A l l e n and U n w i n , 1982.
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There were only two Americans stopping at the hotel. They did not know any of the people they passed on the stairs on their way to and from their room. Their room was on the second floor facing the sea. ft also faced the public garden and the war monument. There were big palms and 05 green benches in the public garden. In the good weather there was always an artist with his easel. Artists itked the way the palms grew and the bright colours of the hotels facing the gardens and the sea. Italians came from a long way off to look up at the war monument. It was made of bronze and glistened in the rain. It was raining. The rain dripped from the 10 palmtrees. Water stood in pools on the gravel paths. The sea broke in a long line in the rain and slipped back down the beach to come up and break again in a Jong line in the rain. The motor-cars were gone from the square by the war monument. Across the square m the doorway of the cafe a waiter stood looking out at the empty square. 15 The American wife stood at (he window looking out. Outside right under their window a cat was crouched under one of the dripping green tables. The cat was trying to make herselfso compact that she would not be dripped on. Tm going down to get that kitty," the American wife said. 20 '('II do t,' her husband offered from the bed. 'No, I'll get it. The poor kitty out trying to keep dry under a table." The husband went on reading, lying propped up with the two piHows at the foot of the bed. 'Don't get wet/ he said. 25 The wife went downstairs and the hotel owner stood up and bowed to her as she passed the office. His desk was at the far end of the office. He was an old man and very tall, *I1 piove the wife said. She liked the hotet-koopor. Si si Signora, brutto tempo. It is very bad weather/ 30 He stood behind his desk in the far end of the dim morn. The wife liked him. She liked the deadly serious way he received any complaints. She liked his dignity. She Jikedthe way he wanted to serve her. She |jked way he felt about being a hotel-keeper. She liked his old, heavy face and big hands. 35 Liking him she opened the door and looked out. It was raining twder. A man in a rubber cape was crossing the empty square to the caf The cat would be around to the right. Perhaps she could go along under the
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eaves As she stood m the doorway an umbrella opened behind her ^ was the maid who looked after their room 40 You must not get wet; she smiled, speaking Italian Of course, the hotel-keeper had sent her With the maid holding the umbrella over hert she walked along the grave! path unit! she was under their window. The table was there, washed brightgreenintherain, butthe cat was gone. She was suddenly 45 disappotrited The maid looked up at her. 'Ha perduto qualque cosa, Signora,. There was a cat/ said the American girl. A cat 9 .S!, il gatto "A cat?' the maid laughed. 4Acat in the ram?" 4Yes/ she said, 'under the table/ Then, I wanted rt so much. I wanted a krtty/ When she talked English the maid's face tightened. 'Come, Signora/she said. *We must get back inside. You wiii be wet/ 55 1 suppose so/ said the American girl. They went back along the gravel path and passed in the door. The maid stayed outside to close the umbrella. As the American girl passed the office, the padrone bowed from his desk. Something felt very small and tight inside the girl. The padrone made her feel very small and at the 60 same time really important. She had a momentary feeling of being of supreme importance. She went on up the stairs. She opened the door of the room. George was on the bed, reading. 'Did you get the cat?' he asked, putting the book down. I t was gone.1 65 'Wonder where it went to?' he said, resting his eyes from reading. She sat down on the bed. 1 wanted it so much/ shesaid, 1 donl know why I wanted it so much. 1 wanted that poor kitty, it isn't any fun to be a poor kitty out in the rain/ George was reading again. 70 She went over and satin front of the mirror of the dressing4able, looking at herself with the hand glass. She studied her protife, first one side and then the other. Then she studied the back of her head and her neck 'Don't you think it would be a good idea if f let my hair grow out?* she 75 asked, looking at her profile again. George looked up and saw the back of her neck, clipped close like a boy's. 1 like ft the way it is/ 1 get so tired of it/ she said. 1 get so tired of looking like a boy.* 80 George shifted his position in the bed. He hadnt looked away from her since she started to speak. 'You look pretty darn nice/ he said. She laid the mirror down on the dresser and went over to the window and looked out. ft was getting dark. 85 1 want to pull my hair back tight and smooth and make a big knot at the back that I can feel/ she said. 1 want to have a kitty to sit on my lap and purr when } stroke her." 50 *Yeah?# George said from the b e d "And I want to eat at a table with my own silver and I want candles. And 90 I want it to be spring and I want to brush my hair out in front of a mirror and t want a kitty and I want some new clothes/ *Oh shut up and get somathing to read,* Geocge sakt Hewas reading 95 rafailng in the palm trees. #Anyway, I want a cat* she said. 1 want a cat 1 want a cat now. If I can't have Sor^ hair or any tmt I can have a cat* George was not Istenlng. He was readmg his book. His wife looked out of the window where the I g M had come cm in t i e square. 100 Scmeone km)cked at the door. * Avanti George saki. He looked from Ws boc^c the doorway stood the maid. She held a big tortoise-shell cat pressed iglit s^akist her and swwi down against her body. Excuse me/she smd, the fcko*ie asked me to bring this for the
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