But be Ars Poetica - Archibald MacLeish Step 1: Find out the type of poem it is. For example, lyric, sonnet, ballad, etc. Step 2: Look for the rime/rhyme scheme or pattern in the gien lines. !ot all poems hae rime in them. "hen t#o #ords end #ith the same sound they are said to rime. $he follo#ing pairs of #ords are said to rime: deep/keep% send/bend% heat/meat. &o# to locate good rime' a( $he o#el sounds must be the same. $hus day/pay% tree/free% high/ buy. b( $he consonant sounds too must be the same. $hus: laid/paid% seat/beat% height/ bite% port/thought. c( $he syllables that rime should be those that bear a stress. )arefully pronounce the follo#ing pairs: feather/ proper% important/informant% respectable/ probable. $hey do !*$ rime. d( $he stressed syllables and the unstressed syllables at the end of t#o #ords must be the same if the #ords are to rime #ell. $hus: feather/#eather% pretty/city% fountain/mountain. )omplete the rimes in these lines: +. Most little boys Make lots of n...... ,. *n Monday morning -.m al#ays y...... /. $he tree #as a 0ueen 1ressed in garments of g...... !o# try to do these ones #ithout any initial letter to help you. +. 2eople say that the greed for gold Makes a man hard and cruel and ........ ,. -n the 0uiet hour #hen night #as falling - heard a bird from the tree3top ........ /. 4he #as young and so fair And 5et3black shone her ........ !o# look at this sonnet by 6ohn 7eats:
)at8 "ho has passed thy grand climacteric, a &o# many mice and rats hast in thy days b 1estroyed' 9 &o# many tit3bits stolen' :a;e b 1 "ith those bright languid segments green, and prick a $hose elet ears3 but prithee do not stick a $hy latent talons in me 9 and upraise b $hey gently me# 9 and tell me all thy frays b *f fish and mice, and rats and tender chick. a Find out the rime schemes in these lines. +. $#inkle, t#inkle little star, &o# - #onder #hat you are, <p aboe the #orld so high Like a diamond in the sky. ,. A cheek #here gro#s More than a Morning =ose: "hich to no Box his being o#es. Lips, #here all day A loer.s kiss may play, >ou carry nothing thence a#ay. )haucer stan;a also called ?rhyme royal. or ?$roilus stan;a. is a seen3line stan;a in iambic pentameters, rhyming ababbcc. -t is the only seen3line @nglish stan;a to be used for serious erse. ?$er;a rima. consisting of iambic Ausually pentameter( tercets rhyming aba bcb cdc ded, etc. is ill3fitted to @nglish. >et many use this stan;aic form, including 4helley in his Ode to the West Wind. ?*ttaa rima. is a stan;aic form composed of eight lines of iambic pentameter rhyming abababcc. $hough Boccaccio created the form it #as made popular by Byron in his Don Juan. $he form that has been used in rustic or folk songs and no# in light erse is ?illanelle.. -t is a form composed of nineteen lines of any length broken into six stan;as #ith fie tercets and a concluding 0uatrain #hich contains t#o rhymes and t#o refrain lines. Step 3: Find out the rhythmic pattern in a poem. -t is the metrical pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables in a line of poetry. -t must be remembered that @nglish is a fairly heaily stressed language. $he #ords that are stressed are the important ones: nouns, erbs, ad5ecties, and so on, #hereas the articles, prepositions, and the ?to. of the infinitie are often scarcely stressed at all. Look at the rhythm of this line: - #oke #ith a start in the middle of the night. Look also at the rhythm of this line: )ome to the house and speak to my father. 2 "hen a poet #rites a poem he often tries to organise the rhythm into some sort of regular pattern. $he commonest #ay of doing this is to try to get the same number of stresses in each line of the poem. -n #inter #hen the fields are #hite, - sing this song for your delight 9 -n spring #hen #oods are getting green, -.ll try and tell you #hat - mean. -n these lines #e see that there is a regular alternate rise and fall of #eak3strong, #eak3strong. !o# say these Byron.s lines smoothly and flo#ingly. 4he #alks in beauty, like the night *f cloudless climes and starry skies. Find out the metrical pattern in the follo#ing lines: +. $he curfe# tolls the knell of parting day, $he lo#ing herd #ind slo#ly o.er the lea $he ploughman home#ard plods his #eary #ay, And leaes the #orld to darkness, and to me. ,. 4#eet is the breath of Morn, her rising s#eet, "ith charm of earliest birds% pleasant the 4un, "hen first on this delightful land he spreads &is orient beams, on herb, tree, fruit and flo#ers. Iambic 9 <nstressed 9 4tressed% roc!aic 9 4tressed 9 <nstressed% Spondee 9 4tressed 9 4tressed% Pyrr!ic 9 <nstressed 9 <nstressed% Anapaest 9 <nstressed 9 <nstressed 9 4tressed% "actyl 9 4tressed 9 <nstressed 9 <nstressed. Step #: $he next step is to look at some of the deices of language that a poet uses to his adantage. $hough these deices are not exclusie to poetry the poet uses them #ith greater a#areness and #ith conscious artistry. 1eices of )omparison: 3 4imile : $he #ord ?simile. only means like. "hen the poet uses a simile he makes it plain to the reader that he is using a conscious comparison. &e uses certain #ords: like, as, as though, as if, as...as, as...so. Let us look at a fe# examples: $he poet "ords#orth describes a beautiful #oman as: Fair as a star, #hen only one -s shining in the sky. 4hakespeare comments on the passing of time and the shortness of life thus: Like as the #aes make to#ards the pebbled shore, 4o do our minutes hasten to their end. 6ohn Milton describing 4atan says: &e aboe the rest -n shape and gesture proudly eminent, 4tood like a to#er. "ords#orth, in admiration of the greatness of Milton, #rote: $hy soul #as like a star that d#elt apart% $hough hadst a oice #hose sound #as like the sea. Metaphor : $his type of comparison is often more subtle, more compressed and less obious. $he reader.s attention is not dra#n to the comparison by any sign3posts such as ?like., as...as and so on. "hen 4hakespeare said: All the #orld.s a stage And all the men and #omen merely players. he #as comparing the #orld to a stage and all the people in it to actors. Another poet, struck by the aried beauty of a #oman.s face, says: $here is a garden in her face "here roses and #hite lilies gro#. $o him the beauties of the #oman.s face appear to be like flo#ers in a garden. $he poet "ords#orth, looking at the great city of London in the early morning #hen eerything is 0uiet, still and unmoing, says: 1ear :od8 $he ery houses seem asleep 4 And all that mighty heart is lying still. 4ometimes a metaphor can be compressed. For example, 4hakespeare.s )leopatra says: - am marble3constant. 2ersonification : it is a special form of metaphor. -n personification a non3human being is referred to as haing the characteristics of a human. =ead the follo#ing examples: +. And the sunlight clasps the earth ,. $he sea that bares her bosom to the moon. /. 1eath lays his icy hands on kings. B. $en thousand sa# - at a glance, $ossing their heads in sprightly dance. Step $: $here are three deices of sound #hich amplify the reader.s appreciation of the tonal 0uality of a poem. Alliteration 9 it is the repetition of like consonant sounds that usually appear at the beginning of #ords but not al#ays. -n this line CLoe laments lonelinessD the alliteratie sound is consonantal. -n the poem The Ancient Mariner the poet )oleridge describes a sailing3ship running before a good #ind like this. $he fair bree;e ble#, the #hite foam fle#, $he furro# follo#ed free% "e #ere the first that eer burst -nto that silent sea. $he repetition of the sounds of ?f., ?b., and ?s. gie these lines their peculiar flaour. $he poet 7eats looking at the bubbles rising to the surface in a glass of #ine says: "ith beaded bubbles #inking at the brim. Assonance 3 it is the repetition of identical or similar o#el sounds. &ere is an example: - #ould the #hite3cold heay3plunging foam, "hirled by the #ind, had rolled me deep belo# $hen #hen - left my home. $he long deep o#el sounds in the #ords cold, foam, rolled, belo#, home, seem to echo in our ears and gie us an impression of the boom and roar of the sea. -n the follo#ing lines of poetry try to pick out the like o#el sounds that are repeated and attempt to explain #hat effect they hae. 5 +. Full fathom fie thy father lies. ,. 4#ift as the sparkle of a glancing star. *nomatopoeia : -n all languages there are #ords that imitate or echo sounds. -n other #ords it offers mimicry. "ords like ?meo#s., ?crash., ?bang., ?boom., ?;ip., ?bu;;., ?s0ueak., and ery many more are imitatie sounds. 4uch sounds are also kno#n as echoism. For example, $ennyson talks about: $he moan of does in immemorial elms, &ere the nasal sound ?m. is combined #ith the long, slo# o#els coney to us the deep cooing of does. 4imilarly, in the follo#ing line $ennyson combines the nasal ?m. sound #ith different o#els to produce the bu;;ing of a multitude of bees. $he murmur of innumerable bees. Alexander 2ope talking about dull poets says: A needless Alexandrine ends the song "hich like a #ounded snake drags its slo# length along. -n the second line a reader can feel the slo# painful moement of the snake in the slo# moement of the #ords. Step %& $here are some deices of grammar that add sophistication and 0uality to poetry #riting. Euestion : $his is the simplest form. 4ome of the 0uestions expect ans#ers and some do not. "illiam Blake portraying the strength, ferocity, and the beauty of the tiger asks: 1id he smile his #ork to see' 1id he #ho made the lamb make thee' &ere the poet is #ondering #hether the same creator #ho made the gentle and meek lamb made this terrible beast. -n the follo#ing lines 4hakespeare asks a 0uestion and then ans#ers it. 4hall - compare thee to a summer.s day' $hou art more loely and more temperate. A 0uestion is often addressed to someone or something and here the poet 0uestions the cuckoo3bird #hose song has delighted him so much. * )uckoo shall - call thee bird, *r but a #andering Foice' 6 Address : in a poem, a poet addresses a liing person or someone long dead or an abstraction or inanimate ob5ect. $he term ?apostrophe. is also used alternately. "ords#orth lamenting oer the state of @ngland in his o#n days thinks of 6ohn Milton and says: Milton, thou shouldst be liing at this hour% @ngland hath need of thee ... 6ohn 7eats, kno#ing that his short life #as dra#ing to an end Ahe died at the age of t#enty fie(, #rote the follo#ing line in his last poem. Bright star, #ould - #ere steadfast as thou art8 6ohn 1onne chides the sun for reminding him and his loed one that another day has arried: Busy old foole, unruly 4unne, "hy dost thou thus, $hrough #indo#s and through curtains call on us' $he apostrophe is a conention appropriate to the ode and to the elegy. $he inocation of a Muse in epic poetry is a special form of apostrophe. =epetition : it is a fundamental rhetorical unit in a poem #herein the #ords and sounds are repeated merely for the pleasure they gie the ear. -n songs and choruses a series of nonsense syllables are repeated at times. Look at 2uck.s song in A Midsummer Nights Dream.
*er hill, oer dale, $horough hush, thorough brier, *er park, oer pale, $horough flood, thorough fire, - do #ander eery#here ... $he repetition of not only certain #ords like ?oer. and ?thorough., but also the repetition of grammatical constructions, prepositions and nouns #hich gie the song the moement. Milton imagines 4amson, blind and de5ected, saying these #ords: * dark, dark, dark, amid the bla;e of noon, -rrecoerably dark, total eclipse, "ithout all hope of day. $he repetition of the #ord ?dark. in the lines coneys to the reader the complete de5ection of 4amson and also the hopelessness of eerlasting blindness. Ballads also hae choruses and refrains in #hich phrases, lines and 7 een groups of lines are repeated. A ?refrain. is repeated at the end of each stan;a and it may recur exactly in the same form. &o#eer, a ?repetend. is repeated only partially or at irregular interals. =ead this ballad stan;a: * #here hae you been Lord =andal, my son' * #here hae you been, my handsome young man' -.e been to the #ild #ood, mother, make my bed soon, For -.m #eary #ith hunting, and fain #ould lie do#n. >ou can see the repetition sho#s the mother.s concern for her son. -nersion : it is the inersion of the usual grammatical order of a sentence, clause or phrase in a poem. -t is usually done for emphasis. $he emphatic place for the @nglish sentence is the beginning. For instance, a person might say, ?*ut of the door he came running like a madman.. 4ometimes, the rhythm of a line, or the rime needed at the end of it, is the reason for inersion. A.&.)lough in his ?)ommandment for Modern $imes. says: 1o not adultery commit: Adantage rarely comes of it. "riting about a soldier dying of his #ounds in the terrible First "orld "ar, "ilfred *#en says: Moe him into the sun ... :ently its touch a#oke him once, At home #hispering of fields unso#n ... 6ohn Milton is a great master of inersion. &e uses it consciously to prolong the rhythm and to keep the reader.s mind follo#ing the sense on and on. *f Man.s first disobedience, and the fruit *f that forbidden tree #hose mortal taste Brought death into our #orld, and all our #oe, "ith loss of @den, till one greater Man =estore us, and regain the blissful seat, 4ing, heaenly Muse ... 4ay #here the inersion occurs in these follo#ing lines: +. $han these !oember skies -s no sky loelier. ,. <p the ash3tree climbs the iy 8 <p the iy climbs the sun ... @llipsis : -t is the omission of certain #ords that are needed to complete a grammatical construction , but #hich can be understood from the context. -ts main use is to contract the sense, to gie pithiness to the expression and to aoid the use of unnecessary #ords. A poet, singing the praises of his loed one, says: !eat she is, no feather lighter% Bright she is, no daisy #hiter. ".&.1aies, regretting the falseness of loe, says% - loed a maid $ime has proed false to be% "ould death had come "hen true that maid to me. "illiam )arlos "illiams gies a sharply dra#n picture of a cold day: By the road to the contagious hospital <nder the surge of the blue mottled clouds drien from the northeast 9 a cold #ind. Step '& 4ymbolism is ery common in poetry and the student must be on the look3out for it. For example, =obert &errick says in his poe m Daffodils: Fair 1affodils, #e #eep to see >ou haste a#ay so soon% As yet the early3rising sun &as not attained its noon. $he poet is not only talking about the daffodils, beautiful, short3lied flo#ers that bloom briefly in the springtime, but also about life. $he flo#er #hich blooms, then 0uickly dies, becomes a symbol of life. 6ames 4hirley, thinking about death, the great leeller #hich spares no one, #rites: $here is no armour against fate% 1eath lays his icy hands on kings. 4ceptre and cro#n Must tumble do#n 9 And in the dust be e0ual made "ith the poor crooked scythe and spade. ?4ceptre. and ?cro#n. are symbols of the po#er of the rulers of the land. ?4cythe. and ?spade., t#o common farming implements, are symbols of the poor common, #orking man. 4o the poet is saying that death makes no distinction. $he poet Louis Mac!eice #rites: $he glass is falling hour by hour, the glass #ill fall foreer. &e is not referring to a drinking3glass but to the glass tube that holds the mercury of a barometer. -t is actually the mercury in the glass that is falling, not the glass itself. G2lease note that there are more #ays of analysing a poem. )ompiled by 1.@.Benet 10