This list is not exhaustive, but has been designed to give you the basic phrases that you can use to structure your essays coherently. Do not overuse these phrases, and make sure that your essays have plenty of interesting and relevant content. Developing the Argument The first aspect to point out is that... The novel portrays, deals with, revolves around The character of xxx embodies/ epitomizes
Ordering Elements Firstly,.../ Secondly,.../ Finally,... (note the comma after all these introductory words.) As a final point, (On the one hand), . on the other hand, If on the one hand it can be said that... the same is not true for... The first argument suggests that... whilst the second suggests that... There are at least xxx points to highlight. Adding Elements Furthermore, one should not forget that... In addition to... Moreover... It is important to add that Accepting Other Points of View Nevertheless, one should accept that... However,... Others' Opinions According to some critics... Critics believe that say that suggest that are convinced that point out that emphasise that highlight that contend that argue that Introducing Examples For example, For instance, To illustrate this point... Emphasising Particular Points The last example highlights that fact that... Not only... but also... Consequences From these facts, one may conclude that... This seems to confirm the idea that... Thus,.../ Therefore,... Comparison Some critics suggest..., whereas others... Compared to... (On the one hand) there is the firm belief that... On the other hand, many people are convinced that...
2 Conclusion The arguments we have presented... suggest that.../ prove that.../ would indicate that... From these arguments one could.../ might conclude that... All of this points to the conclusion that... To conclude, To sum up...
Remarks Verbs English is a language rich in verbs, so try to use the appropriate verb instead of vague verbs or long verb phrases. For instance, takes a look at examines, talks about sth in detail analyses. Weak action verbs (such as do, get, have, go, make, say, etc.) can often be replaced by stronger ones. For instance, has displays, exemplifies, demonstrates. Weak action verbs followed by an adverb or a noun can be treated in the same way. For instance, make an argument argue, give an explanation explain. And as much as possible, make sure your verbs are in the active voice. Passive voice is heavier and less direct. Sentence Variety Make sure there is some variety in the length and types of your sentences. Try to occasionally open a sentence with something other than the subject. Avoid endless sentences. Avoid long strings of short, simple sentences. This makes the ideas sound simpleminded. Combine some of them into longer and more complex sentences.