Eclipse in Edward’s POV (please comment and tell me

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twilight.

1.Ultimatum

Its like time is passing so slowly just to make me go

mad. It feels like I haven’t seen bella in days, and only
a couple of hours have passed since school today. Not
that much has changed since me and my family came
back to forks. Me and bella still sat with all her
friends ,only some of them really weren’t her true
friends but I realy didn’t have the heart to tell her that
her only real friends were Angela and Ben and of
course Alice.

I thought I had stayed away from bella long enough for

one day so I started running toward her house. When I
came around the corner I started hearing Charlie’s
thoughts .
I wonder where Edward’s going to college . Oh no!! he
better not be planning on going with my daughter
across the world to live with her. I will not allow it ,
she’s still just a baby!!!

I chuckled and decided to wait and hear what he was

going to say. I didn’t want interrupt on something
important.

“so……,”Charlie said sounding embarrassed

“so what?” bella asked
“nothing…. I was just, just wondering what
Edward’s……. plans are for next year?”
“oh” she said
“well?”

I decided it was time to save bella. So I walked up the

steps and knocked on the door three times.
I heard bella sigh with relief and run to the door.

“coming!” she yelled

Does he really have to come here every night I mean
come on! Cant he just go ride into a tree somewhere
or something. Charlie thought.
I don’t blame Charlie for hating me so much . I mean I
put his daughter through so much pain. It was right for
him to not want her to ever go through that again, but
I’d be dammed if I was ever going leave her again. So I
was just going to have to prove to him that id never
hurt her again.
“go away” Charlie said just as bella opened the door.
She wrenched the door out of her way- ridiculously
eager- and there she was…. my own personal miracle.
Time had not made me immune to the perfection of
bella’s features and I was sure I would never take my
dear bella for granted. She looked at me with the most
loving look on her face. I was sure that I did not
deserve this beautiful creature.
She looked into my eyes as I looked into hers. I was
completely lost in her eyes. If I wasn’t a vampire I
would’ve been light headed and it seemed bella was
having the same trouble as me but the only difference
was that she couldn’t tell that I was absolutely dazzled
by her. I saw her searching for her my hand and I
obliged.
“hey” she said smiling a little.
I reached up to her cheek and brushed the back of my
hand over it.
“how was your afternoon?” I asked
“slow”
“for me, as well.”
Bella had no idea what slow meant. Her human senses
couldn’t handle how slow time without her was. If she
were ever to die I wouldn’t think twice about killing
myself, but of course before I did anything I would
make sure that she was actually dead. I wouldn’t make
that mistake again.
I pulled my wrist up to bella’s face. I knew she was
worrying about the pain it was putting me trough but
honestly it wasn’t that bad anymore. The pain of the
thought that bella had died didn’t even compare to the
pain of my thirst.

Then I began to hear Charlie coming around the corner.

Why does he stair at her like that like, like he owns her.
bella should get another boyfriend like... like Jacob
he’d be much better for her. Not like bella would ever
leave Edward. I guess I’ll just make bella hang out
with Jacob more.
“good evening, Charlie” I said very politely, but it
took quite some effort. Bella would not go anywhere
near those dogs. They are way to dangerous and
unstable. They could snap at anytime and hurt her
badly. I simply just wouldn’t stand for it .

Charlie grunted at me with his arms crossed over his

chest. He was watching us like a hawk, never taking
his eyes off of us.
“I brought another set of applications” I told her
holding up a stuffed manila envelope. I was wearing
thick roll of stamps like ring around my little finger.

I knew what she was thinking, how did I find all those
loop holes. It was really late in the year, and when I left
bella ,she didn’t think to apply to a college. So I
thought its my responsibility to get her in somewhere.
“there are still a few open deadlines. And a few places
willing to make exceptions” I said exited
Colleges were really easy to bribe. They would do
anything to help them with finances. I smiled seeing
the expression on her face.

“shall we” I asked towing her to the kitchen with

Charlie following behind us. Although he could not
complain about our activity’s tonight.
I don’t have a clue why she only listens to him. She
doesn’t even want talk about college with me. I guess
he’s doing me a favour .He’s probably applying to the
exact places as she is. he thought.

He was right I was applying to the same places. How

could I ever leave bella behind. I wouldn’t ever survive
it. Just the thought of it made me feel sick.
He is her father though, so I can not blame him for not
wanting her and I to live together. She is still just a
baby to him.

I saw bella moving Wuthering Heights her book she

had read about a hundred times to the counter. I was
about to ask her about it, but Charlie interrupted before
I said anything.
“ speaking of college applications , Edward” Charlie
said, he tried not to speak to me directly, and we he had
to it made him angry.
“bella and I were just talking about next year. Have you
decided where you’re going to school”
 I looked up at him and smiled. I made my voice
friendly.
“Not yet. I’ve received a few acceptance letters, but
I’m still weighing my options”
“where have you been accepted?” Charlie pressed.
“Syracuse…Harvard…Dartmouth… and I just got
accepted to the university of Alaska today”
I turned my head slightly to wink at her. Knowing she
got her acceptance today to.
She giggled to low for Charlie hear.
“Harvard? Dartmouth?” Charlie unable to conceal his
awe. “well that’s pretty…that’s something. Yeah , but
the university of Alaska ….you wouldn’t really
consider that when you could go to Ivy League. I
mean, your father would want you to……”
“Carlisle’s always fine with whatever I choose to do,” I
told him serenely .
“hmph”
“guess what, Edward?” bella said in a bright voice,
playing along.
“what, bella?” I asked making my voice sound curios.
She pointed to the thick envelope on the counter. “I just
got my acceptance to the university of Alaska!!”
she said jumping up and down.
“Congratulations!” I grinned “what a coinsidence .”
Charlie’s eyes narrowed and he glared back and forth
between the two of us “fine,” he muttered after a
minute.
“I’m going to watch the game, bella. Nine thirty” that
was the usual time that I had to go home now, since
bella’s been grounded. Not that it stopped me from
staying later, its just that is better not having to hide all
of the time.” Er, dad? Remember the very recent
discussion about my freedom….?” she asked.
Well that took me by surprise and that rarely happens.
Charlie sighed “ right. Okay, ten thirty. You still have a
curfew on school nights.” he said.
“ bella’s no longer grounded?” I asked
Bella looked confused by the fact that I hadn’t known.
She probably thought I had come earlier.
“conditionally” he corrected through his teeth. “ what’s
it to you?” I just ungrounded her and he already want’s
to take her away from me. She mustn’t think that she’s
going out with him tonight. he thought
Bella frowned at her dad but he didn’t see her . He was
to busy glaring at me.
“it’s just good to know,” I said politely. “ Alice has
been itching for a shopping partner, and I’m sure bella
would love to see some city lights.” I smiled at bella.
“ no!!!” Charlie’s face turned purple.
“dad!, what’s the problem?” she asked worried that
we’d upset him. In truth we really did.
No, no, no, no! DOES HE WANT TO GET HER
KILLED!! Cant they just do something else. I’m sure
Alice wouldn’t mind.
And then I understood ,when he went through the
newspaper in his head again.
“ I don’t want you going to Seattle right now”
“huh” she asked confused.
“ I told you about that story in the paper- there’s some
kind of gang killing spree in Seattle. So steer clear,
okay?”
Bella rolled her eyes. “dad there’s a better chance that
I’ll get struck by lightning than that the one day that I
go to Seattle-” I cut her off before she could upset
Charlie anymore
“ no that’s fine, Charlie, I didn’t mean Seattle. I was
thinking Portland, actually. I wouldn’t have bella in
Seattle either , of course not.”
I would never take bella to Seattle, not now. Not while
there was some or other crazy, uncontrolled newborn
there. Especially with bella’s blood that smelt so much
better than any other human around here. The humans
instantly made up an excuse for unexplained murders ,
like gang killings or serial killers. Me and my family
have been watching the story for quite some time now.
All the signs were there. The murders were always
after dark, the bodies poorly disposed of and the lack of
evidence. Those were all signs of a newborn on the
loose . A newborn crazy with thirst.
I picked up the newspaper reading the latest on the
story.
“ fine” Charlie said, and walked to the living room
Charlie had already put on the tv when bella started to
ask me something.
“what-”
“hold on” I was almost done reading the article
Charlie was still listening so I pushed the first college
application toward bella.
“ I think you can recycle your essays for this one, same
questions.” she sighed and started filling I the questions
. I was finished with the article but bella hadn’t noticed.
So I decided it was a good opportunity to think about
Seattle.
The murders were getting worse. It was hard to
imagine only one newborn doing this.

Bella snorted, I was now curios so I turned my toward

hers.
“ bella?” I asked
“ be serious, Edward . Dartmouth?”
I gently lifted the application and set in front of her
again.
What possibly could be wrong with Dartmouth? I
thought it was rather nice there.

I hated that bella thought she wasn’t good enough for

those schools. In truth she was really smart. And if I
needed to tutor her at school next year I would do it
every night. Anything to make my bella happy.

“ I think you’d like New Hampshire,” I said “ there’s a

full complement of night courses for me, and the
forests are very nicely located for the avid hiker,
Plentiful wildlife.” I smiled the smile that I knew bella
couldn’t resist.
She sighed and pulled her face.
“ I’ll let you pay me back if that makes you happy” I
promised “ if you want, I can charge you interest?”
“like I could get in without some enormous bribe. Or
was part of the loan? The new Cullen wing of the
library? Ugh! Why are we having this discussion
again?”
I didn’t care how much money I used because of her.
When was she finally going to figure that out. I loved
her and that was all that mattered. Not the amount
money I spent on my bella.
“ will you just fill out the application ,please, bella? It
wont hurt you to apply.”
Her jaw flexed “ you know what? I don’t think I will.”
I quickly took all the papers and put them in my
pocket, before bella could throw them away.
She reached out trying to grab the papers, but there was
nothing there. She stared at the table for a couple of
seconds.
“ what are you doing?” she demanded.
“ I sign your name better than you do yourself. You’ve
already written the essays.” she wouldn’t get away
from going to college that easily. I will make sure she
has the best future possible.
“ you’re going way overboard with this you know.” she
whispered.
“ I really don’t need to apply anywhere else. I’ve been
accepted into the university of Alaska . I can almost
afford the first semester’s tuition. Its as good an alibi as
any. There’s no need to throw a bunch of money away
no matter who’s it is.”

of course she was only thinking of her alibi. She wasn’t

even considering going to college. I wasn’t going to
stand for it. She will have options.
“ bella…”
“ don’t start. I agree that I need to go through the
motions for Charlie’s sake, but we both know I wont be
in any condition to go to school next fall. To be
anywhere near people.”

Bella had no idea what she was getting herself into.

She didn’t know what she wanted was to be a monster.
She thought we were something from a fairytale, but
we were the exact opposite, and that was what she
giving everything up for.
“ I thought the timing was still undecided” I reminded
her softly. “ you might enjoy a semester or two of
college. There are still a lot of human experiences
you’ve never had”
“ I’ll get to those afterward”
“ there is no afterward bella, you only get one chance
at humanity.”
She sighed “ you’ve got to be reasonable about the
timing Edward , its just to dangerous to mess around
with.” she argued

She still didn’t understand what this meant. After she

becomes a vampire she wont be able to do anything
normal for a while.
“there’s no danger yet” I insisted.
Bella didn’t say anything. She looked panicked, and I
knew what she was thinking. She was most likely
thinking about Victoria stalking her looking for
revenge, the Volturi insisting she be turned into a
vampire, and if not she would be killed, and last but not
least she was probably thinking about Jacob. Jacob
who knew what was going to happen. If we changed
bella a war would begin with the werewolves.

I decided it was to ask her what was wrong

“ bella” I said “ there’s no hurry. I wont let anyone hurt
you. You can take all the time you need.”
“ I want to hurry” she said trying to put a smile on her
face “ I want to be a monster too” she said trying to
make a joke

Was she crazy why would she want to be monster like

me, and then make a joke of it to. She obviously didn’t
know what vampires did to people, people who had
families, friends, lives. People like her.
“ you have no idea what your saying” I said harshly ,
and flung the newspaper to her and pointed to the
headline.
“ what does that have anything to do with this?”
“monsters are not a joke, bella!”
“a…a vampire is doing this?” she asked with a shocked
expression
I smiled without humor. My voice was low and cold

“ you’d be surprised, bella, at how often my kind are

the source behind the horrors in your human news. Its
easy to recognize, when you know what to look for.
The information here indicates a newborn vampire is
loose in Seattle. Bloodthirsty, wild, out of control. The
way we all were.”
Her gaze dropped down to the paper avoiding my eyes.
“we’ve been monitoring the situation for weeks now.
All the signs are there-the unlikely disappearances,
always at night, the poorly disposed-of corpses, the
lack of other evidence…… yes someone brand-new.
And no one seems to be taking responsibility for the
neophyte…..” I took a deep breath
“well, its not our problem. We wouldn’t even pay
attention if it wasn’t going on close to home. Like I
said, this happens all the time. The existence of
monsters result in monstrous consequences.” I told her
She looked like she was avoiding something on the
page. Maybe just maybe she realized what she wants to
become is not all that glamorous. I don’t want her to
throw her life away because of me. That would be
selfish. So I would everything I could to change her
mind even if its something I don’t want to happen . I
didn’t ever want her to stay human, but Id be dammed
if I was going to turn her into a monster for myself.

“ it wont be like that for me” she whispered “you wont

let me be like that. We’ll live in Antarctica “
I was tired of fighting so I just gave in
“penguins. Lovely”
Bella laughed a shaky laugh and hit the paper of the
table

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