Raja Gidh: Bano Qudsia

attack on reason
Farooq Sulehria
Two decades ago when I arrived Punjab University, two titles were a must read. Students with a
progressive bent of mind read and discussed Raja Anwars Jhotay Roop Kay Darshan (Glimpses of Fake
Beauty), a collection of beautifully-versed love letters. I am not sure if this title still travels hostel-room
to hostel-room on the university campus, but the author of the book, ironically, has abandoned the
views he preached in his book with a messianic passion.

The subject of my essay is Bano Qudsias novel Raja Gidh (The Vulture King), read and passionately
discussed on campuses and beyond. Last year, while waiting for the train at the Lahore railway station, I
noticed the title at the local bookstall. Out of curiosity, I began to skim through the book. Dedicated to
Qudrutullah Shahab, the notorious sufi-bureaucrat in the service of military dictatorships, the copy in
my hand was a sample of the 30th edition published in 2012. The first edition went to press in 1981. In
other words, there has been one edition every year since. I bought the copy and re-read it on my way to
Karachi. Honestly, when I read it for the first time as a college student in 1991, I was mystified. This time
I was horrified but not because of the reactionary ideas presented in the novel. I hardly expect anything
optimistic from Qudrutullah Shahabs disciples. That this novel continues to hold sway over popular
imagination is what I find horrifying. But this is understandable. In a period of reaction, reactionary texts
stand a greater chance of becoming popular or in this case maintaining popularity. Reactionary times
reinforce the popularity of the reactionary texts and vice versa. For those who are unfamiliar with the
text, let me briefly recap the plot.

The story of Raja Gidh: This tale revolves around four central characters: Professor Sohail, who teaches
Sociology at the Government College Lahore, and three of his students, Seemi Shah, Qayyum and Aftab
Butt. Professor Sohail is hardly six years older than his students yet he in his possession has sort of a
flog that trainers use to train the lions. He was not good at convening an academic course yet he was
good at the martial arts of minds [zehno ka judo khelna janta tha]. His favourite pastime was arranging
wrestling between various ideologies. He liked to dig open the brains of his students. On finding them
empty, he would love to let them be empty. He knew how to make such students speak who were shy of

speaking while he could equally efficiently shut the mouths blabbering like a radio set. He was never
shocked by anything. Not merely sociology, he was good on any subject in the world. Therefore, in his
presence, the atmosphere did not carry the superficiality of educational aura (p9).

Seemi Shah, westernized in her mannerisms and dress, is a product of Lahores elitist culture of
Gulberg. A not-so-handsome Qayyum hails from a Sheikhupura village. He is a bookworm while Aftab
Butt is a scion of an elite Lahori family from the Walled City. Along with his film star looks Aftab (Sun), a
leader of the student union is charming by virtue of his intelligence. The three young sociology students
are tied into a love-triangle while Professor Sohail is the geometrician behind the triangle. As happens in
Bollywood productions, the daughter of Gulberg who would take shower with back brush somehow
surrendered her heart before a Kashmiri kid, that too from Walled City during the very first day of their
MA course. It happened, of course, during Professor Sohails lecture. While they had been stealing
glances at each other the day they came to college to submit their admission applications or passing by
each other in the college corridors, however, during the lecture delivered by Professor Sohail, their
eyes were first overtaken by a surprise, then a familiarity developed between the two, and in one
session it all ended up in a confession [eitraf]. After the lecture, both left the class room; as if in a
drunken stupor both were walking together; reaching outside the college building Seemi Shah without
saying anything hitchhiked with Aftab on his motorbike (p15).

Meantime, Qayyum is also madly in love with Seemi and is jealous of Aftab. Incidentally, Aftab and
Qayyum are hostel roommates but they are not friends. They never speak about Seemi. One day,
Qayyum finds out that Aftab is engaged to a cousin and views this as an opportunity. Aftab marries his
cousin and leaves for London, without completing his course. Seemi, heartbroken and dejected, moves
to Rawalpindi. She is unable to forget Aftab and keeps travelling to Lahore so that she can meet Qayyum
and talk about Aftab. Such is her passion that she establishes a physical relationship with Qayyum
thinking that Aftab and Qayyum being roommates might have been in a gay relationship. After all boys
while living in hostels become homosexuals (p118).

A digression: I wonder if the Changez-Erica affair in Mohsin Hamids The Reluctant Fundamentalist is a
plagiarized version of the Seemi-Qayyum relationship described in Raja Gidh. Or is it a sweet coincidence
that Bano Apa and Mohsin Bhai have conceived similar love tragedies. I will not suggest that Bano Apa
drag Mohsin Bhai to court on the charge of plagiarism. She must decide for herself.

Like Erica, Seemi Shah commits suicide. Seemis suicide drives Qayyum to the point of half-madness
[neem dewana]. By chance, one day Qayyum happens to meet Professor Sohail. The professor advises
Qayyum to practice Tantric Yoga. Again, as chance would have it, Qayyums distant relative Abida arrives

in Lahore from Chichawatni to stay with Qayyums family. She wants a divorce because her husband is
not able to father a child and she desperately wants a child. Since Qayyum needs a sex partner to
practice Tantric yoga, he seduces Abida on the plea that she would become a mother. Abida, who is a
religious person, surrenders herself for a while. However, she is uneasy with the relationship and finally
returns to her husband. Meantime, Qayyum finds a job at Radio Pakistan where he comes across Amtal,
a red light area woman.

Now forty, Amtal is at an age where she is able neither to sell her voice nor her flesh. Qayyum and Amtal
develop a liking for each other, but are not able to develop a physical relationship. One day, Amtals
prayer [dua] is blessed and she is killed by her own mentally-challenged son.

Qayyum, lonely and upset again, finally agrees to marry a girl of his familys choice. His only condition is
that the girl should be a Baqira [virgin]. Roshan, a girl from the Walled City, is selected. However, on the
wedding night, Roshan tells Qayyum that she is already pregnant. Before marriage she was in love with
Iftikhar, a man who lived in her neighbourhood. Her family disapproved of the relationship. Iftikhar was
forced to leave for Saudi Arabia.

Qayyum is not Mantos character. Instead of kissing Roshans swollen belly, he sends her to the holy
land of Saudi Arabia where she re-unites with Iftikhar. Despite her sins, Roshan is redeemed through
Saudi Arabia. Qayyums growing Pagal Pan [insanity] apparently a result of unrequited love-affairs,
requires a Sufi solution. Bano Apa sends him to Sain Jee in the company of Professor Sohail. Sain Jee
commands such metaphysical powers that he can lift the veil of death and show you the other world
(p418). He can summon a spirit [Roh] and is capable of uncovering the thoughts seated in the darkest
corners of ones mind. Qayyum wants to meet Seemis spirit. Sain Jee is powerful but his powers are not
limitless. He can arrange meeting with spirits of dead people only if the image of dead persons grave is
in the mind of person interested in meeting the spirit (p 424). Qayyum does not even know where
Seemi is buried. Sain Jee is a hybrid of Baba Wasif Ali Wasif and Baba Yahya. A Sain Ji with restricted
mystical powers offers atheists a chance to mock Bano Apas Sain Ji. Hence, Sain Jee, promises to find a
solution. By chance, as tensions and suspense peak, the day Qayyum arrives at Sain Jees secluded dera
[abode] to meet Seemis spirit, Sain Jee disappears permanently ( saints do not die, they disappear].

Behind all the chance happenings, there is a grand scheme. The grand scheme in turn is neatly located
in a grand theory. Ji Haan! The theory of Halal-o-Haram (Kosher and Forbidden)!

Lavishly described (pp 274-281), the Theory wants us to believe that Haram and Halal acts literally
penetrate the genes of future generations. Pagal pan is caused by Haram genes. Once condemned to
carry Haram genes, s/he is destined to live the life of a vulture; a bird that lives on dead meat.
According to Sharia, the dead meat is not Halal. However what fascinates her readers is the attempt to
lend her theory of Halal and Haram a scientific aura.

Pressing science into the service of absurdity: Bano Qudsia Islamifies Eugenics (pp 66-67, 111,142,149,
337, 342-43, 361, 444) and presses Eugenes racist crackpot-science into the service of her anti-science
theory. However, when wrapped in Islamified-Eugenics, the characterization of Qayyum is justified.

Qayyums mother eloped with his father, Maqsood. Incidentally, both met at Baba Bulleh Shahs shrine.
In other words, like Wahabis, the puritan literary mystics organized around a sufi-bureaucrat, and
benefitting from military dictatorships, find Bulleh Shahs shrine an impure place. Not so incidentally,
Punjabi progressives glorify Bulleh Shah as a symbol of resistance to tyranny.

Elopement [a sin, hence, Haram] delineated in Raja Gidh, springing from Bulleh Shahs shrine, is not
sanctified through Nikah (marriage) as often happens in real-life Punjab in the countryside. Instead, it
vulturises into a triangle of sin. Maqsoods cousin who resides with him also establishes relations with
an eloped woman.

We are implicitly told that Qayyum is a bastard child fathered by this cousin-uncle. On top of that,
Qayyum is Rajput by caste. Rajput warriors from Rajasthan, in the business of plunder and massacre for
centuries, settled in Punjab. For centuries, Rajput plunder entered as Haram genes in Qayyums body,
determining his vulture-like nature.

As a result he is condemned to a life of preying upon dead meat. He is condemned to prey upon the
Westernized Seemi Shah who loves Aftab or Abida, who commits infidelity by betraying her husband.
However, when he attempts to go Kosher [Roshan, who wears Hijab and is a traditional woman], fate
denies him the pleasure. As far as Amtal is concerned, because she is a red light woman she is herself a
vulture. For generations, she has carried the Zina [adultery] genes. Understandably, her son suffers
from Pagal Pan. However, Pagal Pan is not always a punishment visited upon children for sins
committed by their parents. Aftabs son, born in London, also suffers from Pagal Pan. However, his
Pagal Pan is a blessing: through his insanity this child can communicate with metaphysical powers.
While Amtals son is a killer, Aftabs Islamified son recites Azan and is very religious. With the looks of a
Greek God, Aftab is Qayyums nemesis. However, there are no clues in Raja Gidh regarding whether

Aftabs family run carpet business employs child labour or not. Similarly, there are no clues regarding
the plight of carpet workers. But then the exploitation of workers or child labour is not enough of a sin
to corrupt the genes.

This theory of Halal and Haram was marketed at a time when the country was suffering under the
jackboots of a puritan military ruler, who was in the habit of offering highly-publicized Istikhara prayers,
while Bhutto-era workers friendly reforms were being rolled back. Needless to say the attacks on
womens rights and religious minorities increased during this period.

Likewise, it was a time when the countrys top scientist advocated the harnessing of Djins untapped
powers to generate electricity [From the Theory of Electricity Through Djins, the Invention of Water Car
is but a natural consequence].

The publication of Raja Gidh, viewed in the context of the Zia dictatorship, assumes a highly political
character. It would be a very cute coincidence if we believe the members of Shahabia sect, Bano
Qudsia and her husband Ashfaq Ahmed, the most prominent among them, were incidentally
propagating Halal ideas under the kosher dictatorship of Zia-ul-Haq. It was a dictatorship that jailed
Jalib, forced Faiz, Fraz, and Fehmida Riaz into exile and permitted the flogging of four brave journalists
(Khawar Naeem Hashmi, Masoodulla Khan, Nasir Zaidi, Iqbal Jaffari). But disciples of Mr. Shahab were
duly patronized all these years.

In fact, what Raja Gidh, along with state-sponsored/state-patronized cultural production, did at the time
was to rationalize reactionary rightwing politics that ultimately led to present-day Talibanisation. Not
surprisingly, Raja Gidhs discourse on women and communists for instance sits neatly with Zia-era
politics.

Raja Gidhs anti-communism: The discourse demonizing communists begins from Page 18. However,
instead of questioning the tenets of communism, she resorts to familiar Jamaat-e-Islami tactics. On the
one hand, she points out the contradictions (hypocrisies) marking the lives of communists. Professor
Tanvir, Qayyums BA teacher, personifies Banos demonized communist. Thus Qayyum describes his BA
teacher, Professor Tanvir: I met him during the first year of my BA. He would always smoke imported
cigarettes, always dress in a three-piece suit. The bespectacled professor would conduct our tutorials
besides delivering lectures. That he was well read inspired me [initially]. Since my education had taken
place on the countryside, therefore, I had inkling for feudalism. He staunchly believed in socialism.
Theoretically, he would assign every problem to an unequal distribution of wealthHowever, he was

only a bookish socialist. His lifestyle, even in its minute details, mirrored feudalistic style. The real
problem was his lack of tolerance for any criticism either on his creed or his lifestyleA few days ahead
of our BA exams, he allowed us to smoke in the class room to establish his progressivism [roshankhiali].

One day I stood up and asked, Sir! May I ask a question.

You do not have to stand up. We are all friends here. You need not extinguish your cigarette either, he
said.

I said, Sir! You daily tell us that capital is the root cause of Third Worlds zilat [insult]. Why dont you sell
your car and buy a motorbike.

I was not yet mature enough to understand that the lives of towering personalities are marked by
contradictions. Professor Tanvir went red with rage. He composed himself and said, This is very
personal question. You country side folks lack good manners. You donkey how would I come to college
if I sell my car?

My ego had been hurt. I, therefore, refused to give up the debate. To corner him, I said, you can cycle
to the collegeone should rub shoulders with ordinary folks.

You donkey of a man! This is space agewe need to save time. You want me to ride a bike.

Sir! But China is also into space age. The Chinese

An intellectual and professor should ride bicyclewhile your businessmen, factory owners, nouveau
riche should ride cars.

But you do not believe in classes. How come you assign status to classes, I said.

Professor was foaming with rage now. Waving his arms, he said, Sit down you frog! With your two-anda-half inch brain, you cannot understand Marxism (p 18-20).

On the other hand, Professor Sohail is also a self-styled communist, an atheist, and a lover of the
prophet, all at the same time (p240). But a communist, who by the end of novel, sees the light and
owes allegiance to Sain Ji.

At one point, even Qayyum is described as a socialist. However, as usual he is a bookish socialist as well,
unable to understand the problem of hunger (p 83). [But also, being a vulture, bastardised by an eloping
couple with Rajput genes should qualify him as Marxist].

Another socialist, briefly introduced is, Haider. Briefly because Seemi Shah let him prey on her dead
meat at a certain moment. As usual, Haider and his ideology-fellows [Hum Khial] rebel against their
parentsBut temporarily. Unlike old-fashioned people, they hurriedly reconcile with their rich parents
because they cannot live without the luxuries of life. They are socialist in talk, bourgeois in their
lifestyles

What is their lifestyle? Inside the boundaries of their homes, they enjoy HiFi music, enjoy the company
of girls, explore US magazines, give long telephone calls, and engage in meaningless chatter. When they
go out, they go for hamburgers, cold coffee, disco music, motorbike rides, porno literature etc.

One really wonders if it is a metaphysical coincidence that every Red in Raja Gidh is a [petty] bourgeois
hypocrite. At the time Raja Gidh went to press, thousands of students and activists, inspired by Marxist
ideas, were heroically resisting the Zia dictatorship. Some of them courageously embraced martyrdom.
Razak Jharna, for instance, walked to the gallows chanting, Long Live Socialism. Nazir Abbasi was
tortured to death in a khaki dungeon. Comrade Jam Saqi became a household name by virtue of his
heroic struggle. Professor Jamil Umer, who recently died, was tortured and spent years in jail for his
struggle against the Zia dictatorship.

But, godless communism is not the only problem. The immoral West is equally hopeless, being morally
corrupt and lacking authentic spirituality. The real villain, however, besides the Reds, is our own
Westernized woman. Seemi, personifying the Westernized woman, not merely met a bad end [not
even blessed with a ritualistic funeral and grave]; she is a woman with questionable morals. Her body is
a commodity she can trade on many questionable pretexts. She is sexually frustrated (p48). In fact,

westernized education had taught her a unique form of fidelity [Wafa] which is engraved in her spirit
[Roh]. She did not mind about bodily relations (p112). She is belligerent, scantily dressed, and a
fashionable woman who can deliver speeches at student union elections and wave flags (p 120).
Sometimes, modern girls like Seemi do not even realize that they are cursing themselves [by becoming
a mans keep]. Modern girl does not know how to control her emotional life [jazbati zindgi] (p 179).
The educated girls can destroy themselves in the pursuit of their zid [belligerency] (p 183). Highly
educated women are liars (p59). Educated girls, once out [of the four walls] prove very cruel [zalim] (p
187). And to deal with such women, nature has a solution. The vulture kings sorts them out (p191). The
entire text is studded with such feminist gems.

Is there any redemption? Yes, it lies in mysticism as personified by Sain Jee. To lend an aura of
spirituality, the entire text is laced with characters such as the divine Baba Jis, instances of visions, djins,
and the power of dua [prayers]. To lend authenticity, she presses crackpot science in the service of her
phony theory. But science is soon cast aside. There are certain exceptions to scientific rule she
painstakingly elaborates. For instance, prophets and martyrs are exceptions to her theory of Halal and
Haram because their food reaches them in some divine way which as human beings we cannot
understand (p281).

What lessons should we draw? First: Do not protest as Aftab tells Qayyum, I oppose agitation. Agitators
spoil the milieu for every one. Seemi is the agitator, self-destructive and spoiler (p 66).

Secondly, do not challenge the status-quo. Everything [Zias dictatorship to Bhuttos judicial murder,
poverty to happiness, insanity to knowledge] is predetermined. It is in our genes. We cannot escape the
sins of our forefathers. Those [Marxists] questioning the status-quo are mere hypocrites. In fact, true
communists such as Professor Sohail seek truth through mysticism.

Thirdly, Westernized women constitute a threat not merely to the society but to themselves too. By
sheer coincidence, it was a bunch of Westernized, highly educated women organized in the Women
Action Forum, as well as journalists, who challenged the Zia dictatorship in its initial years.

Fourthly, evil is reduced to the notion of sin. Moreover, sin [corruption and adultery remain the main
focus] is presented as an individuals act. While her theory can be invoked to advocate General Zias
Hadood Ordinance [and the timing of her novels publication coincides with the promulgation of
notorious Hudood Law], her understanding/conceptualization of corruption very much precedes
PTIs/AAPs notion of corruption. It is an individual act. There is no institutional/structural corruption,
the military dictatorship, class system, gender oppression etc, do not count in this Theory. While she
takes into account martyrs and prophets to rescue her Theory, she does not talk about rape. If the
victim of rape is a sinner? Ironically, if one goes by her Theory, LGBT relations will constitute the safest
form of sex.

Finally, it is an attack on reason, enlightenment values, science and rationalism. She invokes crackpot
science to discredit science. Moreover, she massages Islamified-Pakistani narcissism by showing that
western science is no match for mysticism [reduced to spirits, djins, divine Babas capable of
communicating with metaphysical powers]. Thus, in the garb of mysticism, it is an attack on the
humanist and non-conformist Sufi tradition symbolized by dissidents such as Baba Bulleh Shah, Sarmad
Shaheed and Shah Hussain. In fact, the Sufi in Raja Gidh, as is the case with the disciples of Qudratullah
Shahab, is a mullah in the service of the Zia dictatorship.

If anything, if Jihadi outfits and media mujahideen constitute the political and intellectual remnants of
the Zia dictatorship, Raja Gidh, like other works from the 1980s by the disciples of Qudratullah Shahab,
should be counted as literary remnants of the Zia period.