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Sample Question
You recently stayed at one of a chain of large hotels and encountered a number of problems during your stay
which you feel were the fault of the company. Write a letter to the companys head office, detailing the problems
that you had, describing what happened when you complained to the hotel staff about them. Suggest ways in
which the hotel group could improve its service to customers.
Write your letter. Do not write any postal addresses.
Sample Essay
Assessment
Content
Q. Are all the main points mentioned in the question covered? Where are these points covered? If any are not
covered, which are missing? Are any additional points included? If so, what are they, and are they relevant?
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A. Most of the main points mentioned in the question are covered in the letter, since it describes what
happened to the writer in the hotel and the results of this for the writer, and it also includes suggestions to the
manager. There is no mention of complaints made to the staff at the time, but this is not a major disadvantage
and does not reduce the effectiveness of the letter.
Range
Q. Is there a wide range of vocabulary and grammatical structures? If so, give examples. If there are
occasions when the vocabulary is too simple, suggest alternatives.
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A. There is some very good use of vocabulary and structure, for example, made my stay rather complicated
and unnecessarily unpleasant and of high standard (first paragraph), most (meaning extremely) unpleasant
(second paragraph), knew nothing about and starving (third paragraph), omitted (fourth paragraph), and I
strongly advise you to appalling, endure, steps that have been taken, to avoid such a situation and
awaited in the final paragraph, which is excellent. The language used is certainly not too simple, with excellent
linking producing some longer sentences that make complex points very well, particularly in the final
paragraph. The shorter sentences are used for brief, clear descriptions of what went wrong and are therefore
entirely appropriate.
Accuracy
Q. Are there any mistakes in the use of vocabulary or grammar? Correct any that you find.
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A. There are a few mistakes. In the first paragraph Despite of is incorrect (of should not be there). In the third
paragraph will be delivered should be would be delivered as it refers to a past hope not a future one, and the
word order of the final sentence is wrong it should be wait for another 45 minutes for my dinner to be ready.
Target reader
Q. Do you feel that someone reading this letter would be clear what the writers point of view is throughout it?
If so, summarize the writers point of view briefly. If not, say what you feel is unclear in the letter.
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A. The reader would be absolutely clear about what happened, the writers feelings about it and what the
writer expects to happen as a result of the letter. At the beginning, the writer says that three problems will be
detailed and each of them is explained very clearly. The fact that the writer does not want money in return, but
wants to be informed that action on service has been taken, is very clear at the end.