DIFFERENCE BETWEEN THE PERSONAL STATEMENT & STUDY OBJECTIVES FOR

THE FULBRIGHT SCHOLARSHIP PAKISTAN

: What is the difference between a Fulbright Personal Statement and the

Fulbright Study Objectives?
Well in Fulbrights and USEFPs own words, they tell you to follow these
instructions while writing a personal statement:
This personal statement should be a narrative statement describing how you
have achieved your current goals. It should not be a mere listing of facts. It
should include information about your education, practical experience, special
interests, and career plans. Describe any significant factors that have influenced
your educational or professional development. Comment on the number of years
of practical experience already completed in the field in which academic work
will be done in the U.S. Do not mention specific U.S. universities at which you
would like to study.
For the study objectives they say and I quote:
Write a clear and detailed description of your study objectives and give your
reasons for wanting to pursue them. Be specific about your major field and your
specialized interests within this field. Describe the kind of program you expect to
undertake, and explain how your study plan fits in with your previous training
and your future objectives. This statement is an essential part of your application.
Do not mention specific U.S. universities at which you would like to study.
I know you already know this and have read this so let me calm you down by
breaking the above statements for you.
A personal statement focuses on these 2 aspects:
1.
How
were
you
able
to
achieve
your
current
goals?
a. How your education played a role in achieving your goals?
b. How did your work and professional experience help you achieve these goals?
c. Did you or do you have any special interests that played a role in your
achievements?
2. Did any past events or factors influence your educational or professional
development?
Study Objectives focus on these 2 aspects:

1.
What
is
it
that
you
want
to
study?
a. be specific by telling about your majors and field of interest
b. tell exactly the kind of program you want to pursue
2.
Why
do
you
want
to
study
it?
a. explain how this degree is a natural fit with your previous experiences (as in
how
is
it
a
natural
outcome
of
your
past
experiences)
b. explain how this degree will help you achieve your future goals
Whether youre feeling stuck or feeling overwhelmed by all the ideas bouncing
around in your head and you still being confused, just know one thing a
personal statement focuses on the past experiences and the present conditions,
whereas study objectives focus on the future plan.
In order to clarify the confusion I will analyze the study objectives and personal
statements of a successful Fulbright scholar from Pakistan:
Sample Personal Statement:
Jinnah once said, Failure is a word unknown to me. His successful struggle for
a separate homeland was a testament to this statement. Yet sixty years down the
road, we have managed to prove our founding fathers wrong as our nation is
poised to become a failed state. Since inception, Pakistan has witnessed anything
but failures. Despite having vast potential for renewable energy, one of the
biggest coal reserves, millions of hectors of cultivated land and an enormous
labor pool; Pakistans survival continues to depend on massive inflow of foreign
aid and loans. Its a pity that Pakistans economy continues to be the sick man of
the sub-continent even after 60 years of independence. In the face of such
economic upheaval, we, as citizens of this embattled nation, can either stand on
the side lines and pass judgment or take a stand and fight for our nations
progress.
I,
for
one,
have
chosen
the
latter!
[This is a nice way to start the personal statement. It does not explicitly answer
any of the personal statement questions above but it does lay solid ground for
what has to come later. It also tells the reader, that the applicant has been working
against the economic upheaval in Pakistan. One can also positively infer from this
paragraph that the applicants area of interest is economics.]
Belonging to a social setting where typically most young women voluntarily or
involuntarily rest their case to marriage at an early age, I, nonetheless,
immediately after high school sought admission in a top ranking university in the
country. Owing to the booming banking industry and fruitful career prospects in
the sector, I was faced with immense pressure from my family to opt for a degree
in finance; however, having great empathy for issues of economic backwardness
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and an ardent passion to be a change agent, I chose to major in Economics

instead.
[This part covers two key elements; for one the applicant clearly tells that she
chose to major in economics and secondly she has depicted her positive traits
through vivid examples. For example one gets an impression that she is resolute
and not motivated by financial gains despite the lucrative banking industry,
social and cultural pressures she chose to pursue what she believed in and worked
to
improve
the
economic
backwardness
of
Pakistan.]
Answer

to

Question

Number

My college days however were not just about earning an internationally reputed
degree it was education in all dimensions. My most rewarding experiences, in
fact, were outside of the classroom walls. Though the initial separation from the
direct support of my family was challenging, yet, it provided me with an
opportunity to discover my capabilities in making and living with my decisions. It
made me recognize that survival in a competitive freelance environment depends
not only on how well you do, but also on how well you relate to people.
Fortunately, I was able to accomplish results and develop lasting working
relationships, not only with my friends and instructors, but with people from
derelict circumstances through the LUMS Community Service. My association
with such services did not end here; rather it further catapulted me to help those in
need. Subsequently, I took up a job as a Teaching Assistant whereby my
colleagues and I worked to retain students on academic difficulty through
conducting
tutorials
and
peer
counseling.
[This keeps the reader interested because it introduces two new elements: an
obstacle (separation of family), a special interest (LUMS community service
work). You know by now that this applicant is not materialistic, is determined and
strong headed. Moreover now you know that she is someone who is humane who
takes actions and helps those in adverse circumstances (by teaching them) and has
empathy
for
those
in
need.]
Answer

to

Question

Number

1(a),

1(b),

1(c)

My introduction to the energy sector was a coincidence at best. Having only an

undergraduate degree in economics, I was academically ill-equipped for my first
job as an integral member of the corporate finance team of Uch Power. The
technical jargons used at work eluded me and I had to put considerable efforts
into tasks that others performed with complete ease. I soon realized that In order
to survive in the fast paced life Uch and with no time to learn the ropes, I had to
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make a run for it or risk myself being caught behind. With time, what first started
out as a struggle to survive slowly took the form of a passion: a desire to
understand and to decode whatever complexities my work entailed. Today, I am
working not only with the corporate finance team of Uch itself, but am also a
valuable part of the Uch-II team the expansion project adding another 4040MW
to
the
existing
grid.
[This paragraph shifts focus to the work and professional experiences of the
applicant. Again, through work related examples the applicant has shed light on
her positive traits she is someone who likes to learn new things and accept new
challenges (even if it requires her to take the extra leap). By working hard
enough, she was soon promoted to become a part of another expansion project.
This proves that she is a high impact applicant for the energy (a preferred field for
Fulbright)
and
economy
sector
of
Pakistan.]
Answer

to

Question

Number

1(b)

However, this is merely the beginning, for I aspire to achieve much more. Despite
such a productive work experience, I continue to I have a thirst for the knowledge
needed to give back to my community, to help others, and most importantly to
prove that what really matters is not where one comes from, but where ones
heading! Ive worked hard to make the most of this chosen career path in the
most derelict sector of the economy, and I intend to continue doing so in the
future.
[This paragraph gives a little summary of why and where is she headed in the
near future. She does not share much detail about her future plans over here since
that has to be done in the study objectives and not in personal statement.]
Hopefully this gives you a good start on thinking about your personal statement
and what it entails. It is clear enough now that a personal statement only focuses
on the past and the present and talks about what has inspired you to become what
you are today. A personal statement is all about killer openings, stakes involved,
obstacles in path, and traits and how to use them in your essays.
Sample Study Objectives:
Pakistan, a nation created as the first home for the British-India Muslims almost
six decades ago today represents one of the worlds most troubling states on the
brink of an economic catastrophe. Record levels of unemployment,
unprecedented inflation rates, ever increasing fiscal deficit and looming energy
crises; are just a few of the vices which have crippled my country at a macro
level. Having nearly averted a balance of payments crisis back in 2008, with help
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from the International Monetary Fund, my country is once again headed on a path
of self annihilation. Despite being rich in natural resources and self sufficient in
food production, Pakistans economic infrastructure is falling apart day by day.
One is forced to ponder; but why? What makes us fail where others have succeed,
what makes us weak while other grow strong, but more importantly, how do we
make things right.
[Great introduction to the study objectives first the applicant gives a grim
picture of Pakistan in terms of economy. Then it gives a clear message that the
applicant is aspiring to apply to the field of economics and improve the economic
condition of the country.]
Answer to Question Number 1 and 2
A childhood inquisition into finding an answer to these questions is what
introduced me to the world of economics. My first degree in the chosen subject
provided me with a well-rounded coverage of the discipline. It helped in the
development of an open-minded and scientific approach towards problemsolving, including mathematical and statistical abilities, and imparted the
necessary training required to analyze and develop solutions for a range of micro
and macro economic problems. With time, what first started out as mere curiosity,
slowly took the form of a passion: a desire to understand and to decode and to
learn how all the dots connect together to form a complete picture.
[This whole paragraph does a better job of summarizing the initial decisions that
led to the applicant into the field of economics. Then she explains the kind of
skills she gained there. She is laying the basis for how this degree will be a
natural fit with her prior experiences.]
Answer to Question Number 2(a) Post graduation, my induction into the
Corporate Finance & Planning division at UCH Power, Pakistans second largest
independent power producer with a gross capacity of 586MW, allowed me to
make the transition into the practical world. However, this in no way diminished
my resolve to understand and evolve solutions for the problems plaguing my
country. As a matter of fact, my move to UCH was a culmination of my desire to
under the grass root reality of the key issues plaguing the most wrecked sector of
the Pakistani economy; The Energy Sector. Electricity shortages have crippled the
economy and have often led to violent protests in recent years. Thousands of
industrial units have been forced to shut down operations thereby affecting
industrial output and the livelihoods of thousands of families. Furthermore, the
countrys primary reliance on imported oil for power generation makes it
vulnerable to volatility in international prices. To make matters worse, the
electricity supply gap is projected to increase in coming years thereby imposing
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the need for significant investments in the power sector on a priority basis.
As an integral part of the Corporate Finance and Planning team at UCH, I have
been primarily responsible for invoicing, research, reporting and treasury
functions. This affiliation has given me the opportunity to interact with notable
industry leaders, key government representatives and distinguished members of
the finance community. As part of a larger team, I have undertaken several
projects aimed at spreading knowledge about the ills of Pakistans energy sector
and have learnt and grown immensely in the process. For instance, while working
on numerous presentations and formulating economic reviews for our CEO; I
have had the opportunity to educate myself on the lapses in our economic and
energy planning system which has marred our country brutally. Furthermore,
participation in the recently held Annual Energy Conference, the biggest energy
convention of the year, provided me with a formal platform to meet local and
international stakeholders and policy makers to discuss and analyze key energy
issues and their possible solutions. This has gone a long way in boosting my sense
of self-confidence while at the same time providing me with the unique
opportunity to hear the viewpoints of notable personalities within the energy
sector in Pakistan. Therefore, despite being part of the corporate world, I have
continued on my quest to seek answers to the questions that have plagued my
inquisitive mind since my freshman days at college.
[These 2 paragraphs details that why the author wants to study economics and
how the degree is a natural fit with her last experiences. She mentions about her
past academic and work related activities that portray her interests in the chosen
field. By mentioning her achievements she clearly states that she has the ability to
achieve great feats.]
Answer to Question Number 1
Having spent the last two years as part of Pakistans worst hit sector, I have come
to the grim conclusion that our problem is not one of resource shortage but one of
grave resource mismanagement. Policy makers in my country have failed to
foresee and plan ahead of the countrys growing demand for energy. Despite
being blessed with numerous geographical locations ideally suited for the
construction of hydroelectric dams, our countrys reliance on imported oil for
power generation grows by the year. Renewable energy remains a relatively
unexplored concept and to make matters worse, even in the face of certain
disaster, our policy makers have failed to come up with a viable plan to put our
country back on the path to recovery. Having said so, my choices are now clear,
either to be a silent observer and see my country tear itself apart or to become part
of the system and change it from within. I choose the later.
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[Here the applicant lays the foundation for what is it that she wants to study by
stating that she chooses not to be a silent observer she clearly emphasizes that she
is going to do more work in improving things. Having previously given ample
proof of the traits and qualities to be successful, she has made herself a strong
candidate.]
Answer to Question Number 2
However, despite such a productive work experience, I recognize the need of an
advanced degree in the discipline if I seek to be truly effective in achieving my
future goals. A masters degree which can equip me with the skills required to
effectively design and implement economic policy with a strong emphasis on the
economic problems of developing and transition economies will go far in helping
me achieve my career goals upon my return to Pakistan. I firmly believe that by
pursuing a masters degree in economic/public policy from a reputable graduate
school, I will have the opportunity to truly understand and appreciate the
competing interests and views surrounding a variety of complex issues pertaining
to the sectors policy framework, investment regime, institutions and energy
security.
[This paragraph is a mix bag here the applicant answers what she wants to
study and why she feels she wants to study it. She exactly tells what program she
wants to pursue and her majors as well. She also explains how this degree will
help her learn new things and achieve he future goals.]
Answer to Question Number 1Upon my return, I would like to seek employment
with USAID, ADB, World Bank or any of the other international development
aid organization operating in Pakistan as part of their project planning and
mobilization team. Having previously been part of the team responsible for the
planning and development of UCH II, a 404MW capacity expansion project for
UCH Power, I will be uniquely placed to take advantage of the previously gained
insight into the energy sector to ensure proper planning and utilization of
development grants and loans. This will also allow me to put my newly acquired
knowledge to practical use by working with national and international policy
makers in an attempt to correct the inherent flaws in our nations planning process.
[Here she explains her future goals and how will she contribute after returning to
Pakistan. She also explains why she is a good fit for this program and why she
should be given preference over other applicants.]
Answer to Question Number 2(b)
Needless to state that the personal statement and study objectives are critical
parts of the Fulbright application. What do you want to study and why are
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questions that MUST be answered in your study objectives you need to give the
Fulbright panel your vision.
Personal statement on the contrary tells the committee about your past
achievements and decisions and gives them proof of your potential and
seriousness to pursue your particular field.
The USEFP committee will always read the personal statement first and then your
study objectives. With a personal statement they will get confidence in your
abilities and from the study objective your vision of future.
Remember, graduate studies entail dedication and hard work its a big
investment of time and energy you must work hard on these essays to make it
through the Fulbright scholarship