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ENGLISH 1119
MODULE INSTRUCTIONS
& ANSWERS
PREPARED BY:
AIZAR BINTI MOHAMAD NOOR
SEKOLAH BERASRAMA PENUH INTEGRASI KUANTAN
SAIFUL ISLAM BIN AHMAD SUKRI
SEKOLAH MENENGAH SAINS HULU TERENGGANU
MOHD AZMI BIN ZAKARIA
SEKOLAH BERASRAMA PENUH INTEGRASI SELANDAR
IDA RUHIDIBA BINTI BAKHTIAR
SEKOLAH MENENGAH SAINS KEPALA BATAS
ANA SHIRIN BINTI RAZI RABI
SEKOLAH MENENGAH AGAMA PERSEKUTUAN KAJANG
WAN YUSNITA BT WAN JUSOH @ WAN YUSOFF
SEKOLAH MENENGAH SAINS KUALA TERENGGANU
MODULE 1 DIRECTED WRITING
British food abroad, the foreigner who takes a little trouble and compares the
restaurants carefully, can eat well in Britain.
C
1.but
2. nevertheless
3. despite
4. when
5. because
6.yet
7..however
8.as
9. while
10. as soon as
PASSIVE
1. Healthy eating habits should be practised in our daily lives
2. The students are recommended to eat more fruits and vegetables
3. Drinking plenty of water is important as our body temperature will be
regulated and our skin will be moisturised
4. Gastritis is caused by skipping breakfast
5. A healthy lifestyle is contributed by having regular physical exercises
6. Dangerous toxins and sweat in our bodies will be excreted by exercising 2o
minutes a day
7. Our stress can be released by brisk walking.
8. Ascending and descending a flight of stairs is preferredas their daily
physical exercise
9. Bad habits should be refrained to lead a healthy lifestyle
10.Ones immune system is deteriorated by smoking.
4. For some of the notes, teacher can just go through them briefly as students
should have already learnt them in the previous lessons. This is to recall what
they have learnt before.
5. As for the notes that students might not be familiar with, for example
Compound-Complex Sentences, different types of introduction and others,
teacher can explain them in detail. Teacher can introduce more examples to
enhance students understanding.
6. As the final exercise, students need to write a descriptive essay after having
completed all the steps.
7. Please be reminded that this module is not stressing on grammar. It is focusing
on writing skill.
1. Task Requirement
Instruction: Teachers are required to go through the notes with the students.
Explain to them what is required from them in SPM.
2. A good quality essay notes.
Instruction: Teachers need to briefly explain to the students the notes. It is
important to go through them as students are going to use them in the following
exercises.
3. Practice 1
Instruction: For this activity, teachers are encouraged to do this in groups.
Students are required to choose a topic from the list given. But, teacher can
come up with other topic if deemed necessary.
Suggestion: The groups can be mixed abilities students so that the good ones can
assist the weak ones OR divide the students into groups of same ability so that
teacher can easily monitor their progress.
Students are required to brainstorm all the possible ideas related to the chosen
topic. At this stage it is not necessary to categorise the ideas into introduction,
body and closure. This will be done later.
This is individual work but they can sit in groups. It is advisable to use mind map
or i-think map. What we want is for the students to generate ideas.
4. Practice 2
Instruction: In this exercise, students are to use what they have written in
Practice 1 and arrange them in the correct manner i.e. Introduction, Body and
Closure. Students need to write down in the diagram provided so that the
students can see the flow of ideas. At this stage, students can arrange the points
for the Body accordingly. There will be notes on arranging the ideas for the body.
But if the students can properly arrange them at this stage, that would be better.
The suggestion is to list down the points in 5 paragraphs: 1 for introduction, 3 for
body and 1 for closure. But teachers can make changes if necessary.
Do not change all but leave behind a few Simple Sentences. This is to show that
students need to have a variety of sentences in writing an essay. That is why it is
important to complete the previous task before attempting this exercise.
Teachers need to monitor students grammar. In the end, take a few examples to
show to the rest of the students. Weak students might find this exercise quite
difficult. So, good students and teacher should assist them.
10.
Practice 4c (Advance)
Instruction: This exercise is suitable for good students. The weak ones would find
this out of their league. But do encourage them to try. It is okay if they make
mistakes. We just want them to know that in order to get high mark in CW (Band
C and above), they need to have a variety of sentences. As for the good one
students, they might find this difficult but if they can master this, they can aim to
get more than C band in CW. They have to know that having a good command of
grammar alone does not help them to get band C and above. They need to have
a good command of vocabulary, a good mixture of sentence type and
sophisticated vocabulary. So teachers have to make sure that the good students
manage to do this exercise. Students need to add or modify a few of the
sentences in Practice 4b to be Compound-Complex sentences.
11.
Closure (notes)
Practice 5
Instruction: Students need to write a closure for the topic that they have chosen.
They should write based on the topic chosen and Practice 2.
13.
Sample essay
Instruction: Teacher can go through the sample essay and show to the students
what a good descriptive essay looks like. Highlight to the students the elements
that they have learnt in the previous notes. Students need to make sure that they
have to include them in their descriptive essay. This can prevent them from
writing a monotonous essay which will cause them low mark. If students can
write all the elements learnt in their essay, theres a high chance they would get
high mark, given their command grammar is also good.
14.
Final Project
This exercise is for the students to practise expanding the sentences using the
steps in playing dress-up. Students must follow the steps given. For Advanced
level students, teachers may tell the students to come up with another step after
step 4. Students may include an adverb or another adjective to further expand
the sentence.
PRACTICE
SCHOOL OF ROCK
In this exercise, teachers ask the students to come up with short notes and to
write the notes in the boxes provided. Here, teachers can relate to the first
exercise where students think of adjectives using their 5 senses. Teachers may
guide the students by explaining to them on what they should focus on in the
introduction, body and closure of the essay.
QUICK TIPS IN IMPROVING NARRATIVE ESSAY
A. PUT TIRED WORDS TO REST
Teachers go over the list of common adjectives and nouns with the
students and may point out how these common words affect a readers
interest. Teachers may also come up with your own list according to the
level of the students.
B. DIALOGUE
Teachers go over the sample dialogue and explain to the students the
impact a dialogue has on the characters enthusiasm and how we, the
readers are able to capture the excitement just by reading the dialogue.
Teachers may also point out the use of punctuation marks to make the
dialogue more lively and real.
C. STEREO-TYPICAL
In this section, teachers need to go over the clich ideas that students
tend to write for their narrative essay. Teachers need to encourage the
students to think of a more interesting plot other than the ones mentioned.
The sample essay can be used as a guideline to see how dialogues and adjectives
are used to deliver the story. In WRITE IT!, students write out the whole essay
based on the notes that they had come up with in the practice section SCHOOL
OF ROCK.
SUGGESTED ANSWERS
In The Midst of Hardship
Meaning Behind The Lines
Stanza 1
No
Meaning
1
early
2
ripped
3
hands
4
determined
Stanza 2
No
1
2
3
4
Stanza 3
No
1
2
Meaning
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terrible
suffer
rare
Meaning
poverty
worries
Meaning in Context
No
Word
1
Soaky
2
Despair
3
Bloated
4
Carcasses
5
Sigh
SPM Level Questions- Lower Order Thinking Skills
1. despair
2. animals are killed/trees are destroyed/destruction/death
NOTE: tiny chips of tree barks and bloated carcasses may not be accepted as
answers because it does not fully capture the idea of destruction. Students need
to be reminded that certain answers need to be rephrased. One of the clues
would be when the question begins with- Based on Stanza 2 instead of In
Stanza 2
3. they were born amidst hardship
NOTE: ALWAYS ENSURE THAT STUDENTS WRITE THE LINES INSTEAD OF WRITING
THE STANZA AND LINE NUMBERS
4. approached the stove/making jokes/rolling cigarettes/went to the kitchen
NOTE: the phrase in the kitchen may not be accepted because it is lacking a
verb to demonstrate an action. Students need to be reminded that certain
answer may require them to add their own words.
5. looked for his buffalo (direct lifting is allowed: desperately looking for his sons
albino buffalo)
SPM Level Questions- Higher Order Thinking Skills
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5.
Attitude
Grateful
Reason
They do not complain about their
hardships
They do not try to improve their lives
Complacent
(Accept any reasonable answers)
6. Report the loss to police/Seek help from other villagers/use a boat in the
flood/wait until the flood has subsided/take rests or breaks in between
search/take turns to search for the buffalo
(accept any reasonable answer)
7.
Lesson
Application
We must be grateful
I will not complain when I do not get
what I want
We must be determined
I will not give up whenever I face any
problem
8. died/drowned/went to safety at higher ground/lost/stolen by another villager
(accept any reasonable answers)
9.
Reaction
Reason
Pray to God (action)
God Almighty gives us all the help we
need
Move to a higher ground (action)
To ensure safety of family
Be patient (feeling)
To ensure that I can face any challenges
that may arise
Note: Answers can be in actions or in terms of feelings
10.
Feeling
Reason
Loved
My parents really care for my feelings
Grateful
Because my parents really care for my
lost pet
HE HAD SUCH QUIET EYES
Meaning Behind The Lines
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Stanza 1
No
1
2
3
4
Word
Blinded
Lies
Harmless
pleading
Stanza 2
No
1
2
3
Listened
Enjoy
Regretting
Stanza 3
No
1
2
3
Background
Risky
heart
Word
Word
Meaning In Context
No
Word
Meaning
1
Render
Surrender, give in, submit
2
Pleasure-seeking
Always wants fun
3
Hows and whys
Regretful
4
Losing at dice
Become broken hearted
5
Lose heart
Fall in love
NOTE: For pleasure-seeking: do not accept playboy or casanova as it does not
reflect the intended meaning. Playboy and Casanova are acceptable only when
the question is on pleasure-seeking guys
Themes & Issues
No Theme
Evidence
1
Deceit
She did not realise
They were two pools of lies
2
Dignity
Never to compromise
With pleasure-seeking guys
3
Listening To
If only shed been wise
Advice
And had listened to the advice
NOTE: ALWAYS ENSURE THAT STUDENTS WRITE THE LINES INSTEAD OF WRITING
THE STANZA AND LINE NUMBERS
SPM Level Questions- Lower Order Thinking Skills
1. He had such quiet eyes
2. pleading
3. never to compromise with pleasure-seeking guys
4. Then youll never be losing at dice
NOTE: ALWAYS ENSURE THAT STUDENTS WRITE THE LINES INSTEAD OF WRITING
THE STANZA AND LINE NUMBERS
5. fall in love a few times
SPM Level Questions- Higher Order Thinking
1. We must listen to this advice when we must check the background of a person
before we befriend them
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NOTE: Award one mark for listening to the advice and one mark for checking the
background
2. to check the background of a new friend/to be guarded against strangers/to
always maintain ones chastity/to not spend time alone with the opposite gender
(accept any reasonable answer)
3. the girl might be depressed/the girl might stop befriending guys/the girl might
have a low self-esteem/the girl might become stronger/the girl will not
compromise with any guys anymore
(accept any reasonable answer)
4. carry out a research/google any new friends/interview the friends family
members and(or) friends/ask their family members
NOTE: stalking might be a popular answer, do highlight that this is an inapt
word to be used and is not accepted.
5. family institution might be disrupted/girls may not want to get married/there
might be children born out of wedlock/the society might face a moral decline/premarital sex/baby dumping
NOTE: illegal sex is an unacceptable answer because the meaning is
ambiguous and unclear.
(accept any reasonable answer)
6.
Action
Reason
Advise him
Because he deserves a second chance
Question him
Because I want to know why he
cheated that girl
Avoid him
Because I do not want to see his face
NOTE: ALWAYS ENCOURAGE STUDENTS TO CHOOSE A POSITIVE VALUE
(accept reasonable answers)
7.
Person
Reason
The Girl
Because she did not listen to the advice given
The Man (with quiet eyes)
Because he took advantage of the girls
weakness/Because he cheated the girl
The persona
Because she/he did not try harder to stop the
girl from falling victim to the man
The girls family
Because the girl was not instilled with moral
values
(accept any reasonable answer)
8. find her another boyfriend/give her advice/hug her when she needs it/be her
crying shoulder/refer her to a counsellor (accept any reasonable answer)
9.
Action
Reason
Report to the police
He would not be cheating other girls
Search for him everywhere
He must be brought to justice
(accept any reasonable answer)
10. she feels she knows the man better/she feels people are jealous of her/she is
confident she will not be cheated/she trusts the man completely/the man does
not seem able to cheat her/she was madly in love/she was stubborn. (accept
reasonable answers)
Nature
Themes
No
Theme
Elaboration
1
Celebrating Nature
The vibrant colours and fragrant smell described in
the poem enable me to celebrate the beauty of
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nature.
Each country is unique in its own regards and its
citizens should appreciate all the wonderful (and
bad) things about the country. Patriotism can be
instilled and the economy can be boosted when we
can promote our countrys uniqueness
3
Cycle of life
There will always be change in our life as the
ferocious weather may become calm on other days
as well as the blossoming of flower will eventually
result in fading of leaves and flower
NOTE: Teacher should check the students answers to gauge their understanding
of the themes. The students may or may not use the suggested answers to write
their elaboration. The suggested answers may be given to students after they
have completed the task.
Meaning of Words
1. sway
2. gone
3. lie
4. shivers
5. struggling
6. comes
7. beats
8. paved
9. fade
10. shines
NOTE: This exercise may be carried out outside of the classroom (pre-class work)
as it may take up more time.
2
Appreciating Ones
Country
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Weather
Reason
Winter
Because we can play with snow
Rainy
Because we can stay in the house and read books
6. write a blog/share pictures with friends/use social networks/through word of
mouth/through radio stations (accept reasonable answer)
7. go to karaoke centres/read books/sleep/listening to the radio (accept
reasonable answer)
8. writing a poem/not littering everywhere/controlling carbon
emission/reduce,reuse,recycle/organizing an awareness campaign (accept any
reasonable answer)
9.
Place
Reason
My House
Korea
Cameron
Highland
10.
Attraction
People
Food
Reason
Because there are many ethnics/Because they are friendly
Because they are delicious
Elaboration
Are you still playing your flute
when there is hardly time for our love
2
Love the Arts
The melody concealed in the slim hollow of the
bamboo
Uncovered by the breath of an artist
Composed by his fingers
NOTE: ALWAYS ENSURE THAT STUDENTS WRITE THE LINES INSTEAD OF WRITING
THE STANZA AND LINE NUMBERS
Meaning In Context
#longing: missing
#concealed: hidden
#depth: the deepest part
#deserted: empty, languid
#gazing: staring, deep look
#fragrance: sweet, pleasant smell
#conscience: inner feelings, heart
#hazard: danger, risk
#disunited: divided
#slaughtered: being killed, sacrificed
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Meaning
Are you still enjoying yourself with the arts?
my younger brothers
unemployed and desperate
Reason
There are a lot of facilities/there are vast developments
There is serenity and calmness/ I can work at farms
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5. we must adapt to changes/we must find time to relax/we must find a balance
in life (accept reasonable answer)
6.
Word
Contented
Selfish
Reason
Because he is very satisfied living in the village
Because he does not want to contribute to the development
of country
Complacent
Because he does not do much at the village
(accept any reasonable answer)
7. go back to the village/look at photos of the village/write about village in diary
or blog (accept reasonable answers)
8. establish more factories in the village, build more shopping complexes, create
more public amenities, build more facilities, provide training to develop the
village
9.
Luxury
Smartphones
Time
Reason
Because it is very expensive
Because I have limited time to study
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