Mentor Sentence Sept 19-23

Name

Monday: My ears rang with crickets, and my eyes stung from staring too
long.
What do you notice about this sentence?

Tuesday: Label the parts of speech.

Sentence: My ears rang with crickets, and my eyes stung from staring too
long.
VerbsPossessive PronounsAdjectivesAdverbPrepositionConjunctionPlural nounsComplete subjectComplete predicate-

Wednesday: Invitation to revise. Your job today is to revise the sentence to

make it even more descriptive and exciting. Rewrite the sentence and try adding
or changing adjectives, specific nouns, and vivid verbs. Stretch it out to make
your new sentence a brand new mentor sentence!

Sentence: My ears rang with crickets, and my eyes stung from staring too

long.
My revised mentor sentence:

Thursday: Invitation to imitate. Today, you are invited to imitate the mentor
sentence. Use the structure of the sentence to create a brand-new
sentences that no one has ever seen before. Try to use the style and order
used. use the authors style, but with your own words.
Example: My mouth watered with hunger, and my stomach growled from
the delicious smell.
New Sentence: