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AnalysethecausesofMacbethstragicdownfall.
Thisisatypedformalessay.
Itisdueinatthestartofperiod1,Tuesdayweek9
Introduction
Twoorthreeparagraphsinthebody
Conclusion
Useatleastfivequotationsaspartofyourevidence.
Howtoquote
WhenquotinglinesofShakespeareanverse,keeptheoriginalformatforquotations
whicharetwoormorelineslong.Indentthequotation.Exampleextractfromanessay:
Thefirstreasonforthisthemesimportanceisthatitrevealscharacter.Ithelpsustoseethecharacters
forwhattheyreallyare.EarlyevidenceofMacbethsambitioniswhenhesays:
Ifgood,whydoIyieldtothatsuggestion
Whosehorridimagedothunfixmyhair?
HereheisreferringtothethoughtofmurderingDuncanbuthewouldnotbeconsideringthisheinous
deedwereitnotforhislatentambition.
Whenquotingfewerthantwofulllinesofversewithinaparagraph,useadiagonalslash
toindicatewherethenextlinewillstart.Exampleextractfromanessay:
Clearly,theideaofkingshipisappealing,ascanbeseenwhenMacbethsays:why,chancemay
crownme/Withoutmystir.Obviously,MacbethwouldprefertotakepowerwithouthavingtokillDuncan.
Thethreedotsindicatethatyouhavedeliberatelyonlyquotedpartoftheline.
Chooseyourevidencewisely.Donotusequotationswhicharetrivial.Makesure
yourevidenceconfirmsyourassertions.
4.Someusefulquotations:
...IamThaneofCawdor.IfgoodwhydoIyieldtothatsuggestionWhosehorrid
imagedothunfixmyhair...
(Act1/3/133135)
Mythought,whosemurderisyetfantastical,Shakessomysinglestateofman
(Act1/3/139140)
Starshideyourfires!Letnotlightseemyblackanddeepdesires.
(Act1/4/5051)
IfchancewillhavemeKingwhy,chancemaycrownme
Withoutmystir
(Act1/3/162163)
Hietheehither
ThatImaypourmyspiritsinthineear
Andchastisewiththevalourofmytongue
Allthatimpedestheefromthegoldenround
(ActIScenevi)
YetIdofearthynature:Itistoofullothemilkofhumankindness
Tocatchthenearestway.
(Act1/4/1213)
Beinnocentoftheknowledge,dearestchuck,Tillthouapplaudthedeed...
(Act3/2/4546)
Ihavenospur
Toprickthesidesofmyintent,butonly
Vaultingambition,whichoerleapsitself
Andfallsontheother.
(Act1/7/2831)
Youressaymusthavetheseingredients:
1.anintroduction,withathesis.Yourthesisisyourmainlineofargument.Yourmainlineof
argumentrelatestowhichfactormakesthemostimportantcontributiontothedownfallof
Macbeth
2.Twoorthreeparagraphsinthebodyoftheessay.Eachparagraphmuststartwithatopic
sentence
3.aconclusion
4.supportingevidence.Thisconsistsofreferencestoincidentsintheplayanda
tleastfive
quotations(seenoteonhowtoquote).Remembertocommentonthemeaningandsignificance
ofquotations(StatementExampleExplanation/Elaboration)
5.accurate,fluentwriting,withgooduseoflinkingwordsandphrasessuchas:HoweverThus
InadditiontoAswellasNeverthelessFurthermoreAnotherAscanbeseen
Markingschedule:asforfilmessays
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Helpfulmaterial
1.Thinkaboutsequenceofeventsintheplayandevidence
2.Structure
3.Howtousequotations
4.Usefulquotations
1.Macbeth getitright.Readtheplaycarefullyandproduceevidence.
IfyouarguethatLadyM.issolelyresponsibleforMacbethstragedy,youwillbefallingintoa
sexisttrapforbeginners.Thinkaboutthesepoints,insequence,andtheevidence(usually
quotations)whichsupportsthem:
Point
Evidence
1.ThewitcheschoosetomeetMacbeth.Why?
2.Macbethisalreadythinkingofmurderevenbeforehewritestohiswife.
3.Macbethhasblackanddeepdesires.
4.LadyMacbethsaysthatherhusbandisambitious.
5.LadyMacbethhastocallonoutsidepowerstogiveherevilstrength.
6.Macbethacknowledgeshisambitionbutneedsaspur.
7.LadyMacbethwantstoknowwhyM.toldherofthesituationinthefirstplace.
8.Macbethiseasilyconvinced.
9.LadyMacbethwasnotabletodothedeedherself.
10.M.plansthemurderofBanquoandkeepstheplanfromhiswife.
11.Macbethdominatestheplayfromnowonwelearnlittleabouthiswife.
12.Macbethseeksoutthewitches.
13.MacbethplansthemurderofMacduffsfamily
14.LadyM.goesmadguiltbutM.remainsdefiant
Essaystructure
Donotallowtheplot(whathappens)todriveyourargument.Instead,youmustcreatea
thesis(mainlineofargument)andsupportingarguments.Thesesupportingarguments
shouldbeyourtopicsentencesatthestartofeachparagraph.
Example:
Thesis:ThewitchesandLadyMacbethplayaroleinMacbethstragicdownfallbutheis
chieflyresponsibleforhisowndemise.
Topicsentence1:ThewitchescontributetoMacbethsdownfallbytemptinghimwith
prophecies.
Topicsentence2:LadyMacbethplaysherroleaswellbygoadingMacbethintokilling
Duncan.
Topicsentence3:However,Macbethultimatelyisthemasterofhisowndestinyandis
chieflyresponsibleforhisowndownfall.
Therefore,donotstartyourparagraphswithplotdetails.Startthemwithatopicsentence
andthenuseplotdetailsandquotationstoproveyourpoints.
TherewerevariouscausestoMacbethstragicdownfall,ofthesecauseshislustfor
power,thewitchesandLadyMacbethwerethefactorswhichcontributedthemosttohis
downfall.ledhimtodowhatwasunthinkabletohimpriortogreedovertakinghim.
Thesefactorsultimatelyovertookhisdecisionmaking.
Macbethslustforpowerplayedabigroleintakinghimtohistragicdownfall.He
realizedhewouldhavetodokillothersinordertohavethecrowntobetheking.Stars
hideyourfires!Letnotlightseemyblackanddeepdesires.Hewassuccumbingtothe
greedforpowerthathewasbeginningtohaveevildesiresthatwouldseeminhuman.
Heasksthestarstohidetheirfiresashedoesnotwantanyonetoseethedesiresthat
hesecretlyhas.TheprinceofCumberland!ThatisastepOnwhichImustfalldown,or
elseo'erleap,Forinmywayitlies.InthisquoteMacbethexpressesthatinorderto
becomekinghimself,hewillhavetostepoverMalcomorgiveupbecauseheisinhis
pathofpower.InthisquoteMacbethrevealsthatheiswillingtoridofMalcominorder
togainhisownpower.Hislustforpowerfillshishatredforotherswhohavemorepower
thanhimandthisultimatelymotivateshimtoattempttoridofMalcolm.Macbethslust
forpowercauseshimtodounthinkableactssuchasmurderwhichbeginto
dehumanizehimandslowlycauseshisdownfallfromwhoheusedtobe.
ThewitchesthatMacbethencountersshowedhimwhatwassupposedlythefuturefor
himandshowedhimpropheciestobefulfilled.ThesepropheciesfillMacbethwiththe
thoughtthattheymustcometrueandthatMacbethwillendupasking.Thewitches
makeatotalof3prophecies,thefirsttworegardingMacbethandBanquo.Itisstated
thatMacbethwillbenamedThaneofCawdorandlateron,king.Allhail,Macbeth,that
shaltbekinghereafter!.BanquowillnotruleScotlandbutwillbethefathertofuture
generationofkings.MacbeththenlaterisnamedThaneofCawdorbutaproblemarises
whenhebeginstowonderwhenhewillbeking.ThisactsasacausetoMacbeths
downfallbecauseheisnamedThaneofCawdorandhiscuriosityandangerfornot
beingnamedheirtothethronefillshimwithhislustforpower.HethenmurdersDuncan
afterLadyMacbethscoldshimforbeingacowardandnotdoingthejob.
LadyMacbethwasmanipulativeandcontrollingtowardsMacbethwhichledhimto
murderDuncanandeventuallytohisdownfall.Throughouttheirwholerelationshipin
theplay,LadymacbethisoftentellingMacbethoffortellinghimwhattodoandhowto
act.SheherselfcouldnotkillDuncanandtellsMacbethtodoitevenafterheresists.
Whenyoudurstdoit,thenyouwereaman.LadyMacbethsaysthatwhenMacbeth
daredtodoitthatwaswhenhewasaman.ThiswasallsaidafterMacbethwhoclearly
wantsnopartinthisatthestartsaysPlease,stop!Idaretodoonlywhatisproperfora
mantodo.Hewhodarestodomoreisnotamanatall.LadyMacbethcommonly
scoldsMacbethfornotactinghimselforbraveenoughtodothejobhimself.HadLady
MacbethnotbeensomanipulativetowardsMacbeththroughouttheplayitislikelythat
themurderplotwouldneverhavetakenplaceatall.LadyMacbethpressuredMacbeth
totheevildeedssuchasthemurderofDuncanwhichledhimtohistragicdownfall.
Bytheendoftheplay,Macbethslustforpower,thewitchesandtheirprophecies
alongsideLadyMacbethwerethemaincausestoMacbethstragicdownfall.Their
manipulativelanguageandpropheciesledMacbethtobepressuredintocommittingevil
acts.