Documente Academic
Documente Profesional
Documente Cultură
Trait
Score
(see
rubrics)
Explanation
Comments to Student
Ideas
I like how you had one main idea in the story. This
follow your story. You also added in interesting
details like how you reacted when you started to
get scared.
Organization
Word Choice
Voice
Sentence
Fluency
3+
Conventions
and
Presentation
Courage (Rottweiler)
Trait
Ideas
Score
(see
rubrics)
Explanation
Comments to Student
Organization
Word Choice
Voice
Sentence
Fluency
Conventions
and
Presentation
Score
(see
rubrics)
Explanation
Comments to Student
Ideas
Organization
Word Choice
Voice
2+
Sentence
Fluency
Conventions
and
Presentation
3+
Ideas
Score
(see
rubrics)
Explanation
Comments to Student
Organization
Word Choice
The writer does not make choices about the words I noticed you used the words scared and
used, but rather writes the first word to come to
nervous a lot in your writing. What other words
mind. This is shown by the repetition of the words could you use to describe how you were feeling?
scared and nervous. The reader has to work
hard to visualize the story.
Voice
Sentence
Fluency
Conventions
and
Presentation