Documente Academic
Documente Profesional
Documente Cultură
by Marisol Davila
FILE
T IME SUBMIT T ED
12-NOV-2016 05:02PM
WORD COUNT
4637
SUBMISSION ID
736213989
CHARACT ER COUNT
22097
impressive!
mine? :)
specify "issues"
good design
sounds great!
OK, great
som
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time
ineq
uity
here
complex!
Great initiative in
asking this Q of the
experts.
GENERAL COMMENTS
95
Instructor
Guide Review f or Dell Droids
Device page:
Device page looks complete and detailed: good.
/250
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impressive!
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mine? :)
Text Comment.
specif y "issues"
Text Comment.
good design
S/V Agreement
Subject-verb agreement:
Subjects and verbs should match in number and person. Singular subjects require singular
verbs; plural subjects require plural verbs.
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Text Comment.
sounds great!
Text Comment.
OK, great
Text Comment.
so, rather than the "model" guides on iFixit, use guides written by my
students? I could try that. Peer review f or which parts, would you recommend? Please email and
let me know. I like this idea.
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complex!
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RHET FOCUS
Advanced
ABSENT OR BELOW Verbal and visual text in all texts does not conf orm to intended purpose (e.g.,
BASIC
instruct, inf orm, persuade). Language, graphics, and tone are inaccessible to intended
Verbal and visual text in all texts may not consistently conf orm to intended purpose
(e.g., instruct, inf orm, persuade). Pages may use language, graphics, and tone that
are inappropriate f or the intended audience (iFixit's staf f or users, Dr. Bruce)
PROFICIENT
Verbal and visual text in all documents usually achieves intended purpose (e.g.,
instruct, inf orm, persuade, etc.) using language, graphics, and tone appropriate to the
intended audience (iFixit's staf f or users, Dr. Bruce).
ADVANCED
Verbal and visual text in all documents achieve intended purpose (e.g., instruct,
inf orm, persuade, etc.) using language, graphics, and tone appropriate to the
intended audience (iFixit's staf f or users, Dr. Bruce).
ORGANIZ AT ION
Advanced
ABSENT OR BELOW T exts are not organized clearly and coherently; headings, sequence, paragraphs,
BASIC
bullets, and chunking are inef f ective or conf using.
DEVELOPING
T exts are f requently not organized clearly and coherently; headings, sequence,
paragraphs, bullets, and chunking are of ten inef f ective or conf using.
PROFICIENT
All texts are usually organized clearly and coherently, using precise headings, unif ied
paragraphs, logical sequence, appropriate bullets, and ef f ective chunking.
ADVANCED
All texts are organized clearly and coherently, using precise headings, unif ied
paragraphs, logical sequence, appropriate bullets, and ef f ective chunking.
ACAD. LANG.
Prof icient
ABSENT OR BELOW Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability. Conventions of
BASIC
ef f ective step writing are not conf ormed to.
DEVELOPING
PROFICIENT
Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors are f ew and do not distract f rom
meaning. Usually conf orms to conventions of ef f ective step writing.
ADVANCED
ACAD. DESIGN
Advanced
ABSENT OR BELOW Design distracts f rom the text's message. iFixit conventions are not f ollowed.
BASIC
DEVELOPING
PROFICIENT
Consistent design usually enriches the text's message. iFixit conventions are usually
f ollowed.
ADVANCED
Sophisticated, consistent design enriches the text's message. iFixit conventions are
f ollowed.
COLLABORAT ION
Advanced
ABSENT OR BELOW No ef f ort appears to have been made to unif y the project's style and substance. It
BASIC
looks like multiple writers pasted their work together. Fails to respond to client's and
Some ef f ort to unif y the project's style and substance is evident, although it is clear
that multiple people composed it. Attempts to respond to client's and instructor's
critique during revision.
PROFICIENT
Project's style and substance are usually unif ied. It usually appears as though one
writer composed it. Usually responds thoughtf ully to client's and instructor's critique
during revision.
ADVANCED
Project's style and substance are unif ied. It appears as though one writer composed
it. Responds thoughtf ully to client's and instructor's critique during revision.
COMPLET ION
T he f older and website contain everything required on the course and iFixit instructions and website; this
content f ollows these instructions. .
ABSENT OR BELOW T he f older and website are missing enough of the content required on the course
BASIC
and iFixit instructions and website that the f older and/or website are not quite usef ul.
DEVELOPING
T he f older and website are missing a signif icant proportion of the requirements listed
on the course and iFixit instructions and website; this content may f requently stray
f rom these instructions. .
PROFICIENT
T he f older and website contain almost everything required on the course and iFixit
instructions and website; this content usually f ollows these instructions. .
ADVANCED
T he f older and website contain everything required on the course and iFixit
instructions and website; this content f ollows these instructions. .