Documente Academic
Documente Profesional
Documente Cultură
CRITERIA SCORE
Opener (first 30 seconds): Grabs audiences attention with a story, question, etc. (topic is not clear) 2 /5
You made your topic clear immediatelytake more time to catch the audience
before that
ELI5: Speakers speech is easy to understand, speaking slowly, small pauses between phrases 2 /5
Too complicated! Simplify!
Memorized: Speaker doesn't use notes, speaks with confidence and memorization is complete 7 /10
If you spend a bit more time practicing, your engagement with the audience
would be more intenseyour energy was spent on trying to remember a lot of
difficult sentences, so the audience couldn't understand so clearly
Notes:
You chose a rich and interesting topic, but your speech sounded too much like an
essaylong sentences, complex grammar, and in depth explanation. With essays, we
can reread to understand fully. In a speech, you need more simplicity, and more
stories and examples to keep your audience engaged. In your next speech, truly
consider the ELI5 concept and don't try to be too academic. Your ideas are good and
worth hearing. Don't alienate your audience by speaking about too complicated
things!