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Wilderpeople, Ricky Baker and his foster uncle, Hec, find the true meaning of family as they
take an amazing journey through the New Zealand bush. Ricky is a dynamic character because
Ricky Baker is a dynamic character because of the events in the hunt for the wilder
people. The first is when ricky did not want to be at the farm, For example. Ricky looks around
the house and gets back in the car. This shows that ricky does not want to be with a foster
family. And then he burns down the barn fakes his own death and then runs away. These actions
show that ricky does not want to live with Hec and Bella, And then he really hates Hec so much
that he feels like he needs to fake his own death so he doesnt have to live with them. Ricky
really does not want to live with hec and bella and wants to go back to the street.
Ricky is a dynamic character because he stands up for other people. In the first case of
him standing up for other people is when he saved Hec from the boar, as shown here. Ricky was
standing there while hec was being attacked, then ricky shot the boar and it ran away. He also
stands up for hec when Hec is being blamed for being a pervert and shoots the gun in the air.
Another example is when they see the people again and they get beat up and shot by ricky. This
shows ricky is starting to like hec. This evidence shows that ricky is a dynamic character
Ricky Baker is a dynamic character because ricky wants to live with hec after the events
of hunt for the wilder people shown here. This happens when ricky says, when this is all over I
want to live with you, and Hec said I want you to live with me. This means that they have grown
from hating each other to loving each other. This also happens when the movie is almost over,
when Ricky goes to the institute where Hec is after being deemed unfit to be a foster parent by
Child Welfare Services. Now Ricky really wants to live with hec, even though he is living with
the people he met in the forest this show ricky loves Hec more than anybody else.
Rickys journey was a hard one but he made it, Ricky Baker is a dynamic character
because he went from burning down the barn and running away to loving his foster uncle hec.
Introduction The essay begins The essay begins The essay begins The essay simply
Paragraph with a strong with an introduction with an introduction begins with only a
Your score: 4 introduction paragraph that paragraph but is thesis statement and
paragraph and contains the missing either the not a fully
contains the required elements: attention-grabber or developed
following parts: attention-grabber, the bridge and/or the introduction
attention-grabber, bridge, and thesis attention-grabber is paragraph OR the
bridge, and thesis statement. clich or the introduction
statement. The However, the transition does not paragraph is missing
thesis statement attention-grabber actually lead into entirely.
appears as the last may not be as the thesis statement.
sentence of the effective and/or the The introduction
introduction. transition may not paragraph contains a
be as smooth. The thesis statement that
thesis statement is located at the end
appears as the last of the introduction
sentence of the paragraph.
introduction.
Supporting Details All supporting Supporting details One supporting Supporting details
(x2) details are logical are mostly logical detail may be may not be present
Your score: 2.5 and connect to the but might exhibit missing and/or may or logical.
thesis . Supporting weak connectors to contain a direct
details are broad the thesis . quotation or specific Supporting details
enough to Supporting details evidence that should may be random or
effectively summarize the appear in the body off topic.
summarize the content of the body paragraph.
content of the body paragraphs and do Supporting details
paragraphs and do not contain specific may not connect to
not contain specific evidence. the thesis statement
evidence. or effectively
summarize the
paragraph.
Analysis/ Body paragraphs Body paragraphs The writer has Body paragraphs
Commentary contain effective contain explanation included plot lack analysis and
(x2) explanation of of evidence in your summary in some contain mostly plot
Your score: 3 evidence in your own words, and places instead of summary.
own words. Each each piece of analysis/
piece of evidence is evidence is explanations, OR, There is little
explained in at least explained in at least the writer has not evidence of logic
two sentences that two sentences. explained each piece and/or reasoning.
analyze how the However, the of evidence with at
piece of evidence analysis may be least two sentences
proves the thesis and more obvious and consistently. OR,
supporting details lack depth, the writers analysis/
Analysis shows therefore, not fully explanations may
depth and goes proving the claim only state the
beyond the obvious. presented in the obvious.
thesis or topic
sentences.
Conclusion The essay ends with The essay ends with The essay ends with The essay simply
Paragraph a strong and a conclusion a conclusion ends with only a
Your score: 4 memorable paragraph that paragraph but is rephrased thesis
conclusion contains the missing either the statement and not a
paragraph and required elements: link back to hook, fully developed
contains the link back to hook, rephrased thesis conclusion
following parts: link rephrasing of thesis statement or the so- paragraph OR the
back to thesis, statement and key what statement is conclusion
rephrasing of thesis points, transition, weak paragraph is missing
statement and key and so-what entirely.
points, and so-what statement.
statement However, the so-
what statement may
not be as effective
or logical
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