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BUSINESS WRITING
POCKETBOOK
By Clive Bonny
Drawings by Alan Roe
PLANNING 5 PRESENTING 65
Choosing channels, 4 Is, costing, Charts, graphs and diagrams,
3 Rs, 5 Ws, 7 Cs, starting up putting ideas on paper, mind-mapping,
handwriting
INTERNAL 15 MARKETING COMMUNICATIONS 89
CORRESPONDENCE Stationery, strategy, direct mail,
Memos, reports, minutes, e-mail, advertising, press releases
desk messages, faxes
CHECKING 105
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EXTERNAL 31
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Speed reading, jargon, clarity,
CORRESPONDENCE redundancy, grammar, clichs, spelling
Letters (layout, structure, examples,
courtesy, complaining, selling),
proposals (drafting, structure, format),
web sites
PERSONALISING 49
Language, style, tone, sexism,
personalities, VHF
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INTRODUCTION
QUOTATIONS
WE ARE WHAT WE WRITE
The art of writing is the art of applying the seat of the pants to the seat of the
chair.
Mary Vorse 1880
There are three difficulties in authorship: to write anything worth the publishing, to
find honest men to publish it and get sensible men to read it.
Charles Cotton 1780-1832
THE 90 : 90 RULE
90% OF LASTING IMPRESSIONS ARE MADE IN THE FIRST 90 SECONDS
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PLANNING
COSTING
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PLANNING
GETTING STARTED
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I NTERNAL CORRESPONDENCE
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INTERNAL CORRESPONDENCE
MEMORANDA
Memos are similar to letters and similar guidelines will apply to both. The main
differences are that memos are internal within organisations and are less formal.
Less formality means memos can be shorter (ideally one page, but avoid being curt)
and even handwritten.
Example Format:
MEMORANDUM
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G Put your most important points first, in TO:
logical sequence, especially who it is for, FROM:
why you are writing and what are the DATE:
SUBJECT:
outcomes.
MESSAGE:
G Use headings, lists and pictures when
possible.
SIGNED:
G Check it carefully afterwards for clarity.
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INTERNAL CORRESPONDENCE
E-MAIL
POLICY ISSUES
Publish guidelines on using e-mail and have a clear e-mail policy that states:
G When employees can/cannot use the internet
G That offensive materials breach discipline
G What limits there are regarding private use
G Any monitoring procedures and why theyre in place
G Penalties for breaching policy
G Procedures for revising policy
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E-MAIL
DONT WASTE TIME
If 10 people in a team each sends the other team members a weekly report for
information purposes only, then each week the team members spend a combined 900
minutes reading reports. Over a year, this amounts to more than 100 working days!
Action:
G Screen-dump your inbox
G Count the time wasted on unnecessary info
G Tell the time-wasters!
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E-MAIL
HOW TO PRIORITISE E-MAIL
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INTERNAL CORRESPONDENCE
DESK MESSAGES
HOW NOT TO
ORGANISING FAXES
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E XTERNAL CORRESPONDENCE
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EXTERNAL CORRESPONDENCE
LETTERS
IMAGE
Your letters represent your personal and your organisations image to the world
outside - set high standards.
Keep your image consistent: where House Rules exist, follow them by applying the
Seven Cs (page 12).
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LETTERS
LAYOUT
G Use letterhead stationery showing your location details. Quote your fax, phone
and extension.
G Set a one inch margin. Double space between paragraphs.
Start all text on the left margin. Put Day Month Year (no punctuation)
eg: 13 May 1994 (Americans put Month Day Year).
G Use their name, title (if known) and full address (always spell-check carefully).
Your Reference (for file purposes). Their Reference (from their prior letter).
G Salutation eg: Dear Ms Jones (where less formal).
Dear Madam (where name is unknown).
G Subject heading: CENTRED IN BLOCK CAPITALS.
G Subscription or sign off: Yours sincerely (after named addressee).
Yours faithfully (after Dear Sir or Madam).
G Sign it.
G Writers name and title.
G Enclosure reference: Encl(s).
G Copies to: cc(s).
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EXTERNAL CORRESPONDENCE
LETTERS
STRUCTURE
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LETTERS
BEGINNING
eg:
G Your correspondence dated ..... is hereby acknowledged
G We are in receipt of your letter dated .....
G We hereby acknowledge
G This letter is written by way of responding to yours dated .....
G We are confirming your letter of
Why not simply say - Thank you for your letter dated .....
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1 September 2008
Mr C Dickens
Bleak House
London WC1
Dear Mr Dickens
Thank you for your fax about the standardised layout of letters. This is to confirm
some common mistakes by writers.
The cardinal error is to spell the addressee incorrectly, either in title, company or personal
name. This shows a lack of care.
Another problem is the failure to state the writers purpose early. This frustrates busy
readers.
Finally, enclosures are often not numbered. This can lead to confusion when there are a
number of enclosures.
Yours sincerely
Clive W Bonny
Proprietor
LETTERS
GIVING BAD NEWS
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1 September 2008
Mrs R Jones
East Street
Twickenham
Middlesex
JOB APPLICATION
Thank you for your letter dated 25 August and your enclosed C.V. Your
qualifications are impressive.
We are intending to increase our staff numbers in the future, although not right now.
Regrettably, therefore, we are unable to offer you a position. However, we will keep
your details on file for future reference. Thank you for your interest in our company.
Yours sincerely
Clive W Bonny
Proprietor
LETTERS
COMPLAINTS
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1 September 2008
Dear Mr Gasket
I am writing to complain about the condition of my company car following its service. The
rear wiper blade was missing.
As I need to reverse into a main road from my driveway, this could result in a major
accident.
Can you please fit a new wiper blade when I visit you on Tuesday 6 September? I would
expect this free of charge because of the inconvenience. Please phone me on Monday 5
September, 9 - 11am if this is not possible.
Thank you for other work in servicing the car which was of your usual high standard.
Yours sincerely
Mrs V Annoyed
Senior Accountant
LETTERS
INFLUENCING TO WIN A SALES APPOINTMENT
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1 September 2008
Mrs S Brown
NewPro Limited
The Innovation Centre
Bracknell
Berkshire
Your press release in The Times last week caught my eye. You announced that your new
products will catapult you into market leadership within 2 years.
I believe that you can achieve this earlier than forecast, and I would like to meet you to
show how this may be accomplished.
Other companies like your own have found my information has helped them achieve their
strategic goals and increase market share. Bill Smith of AB & Co suggested I contacted
you directly. I am not sure at this stage how helpful I can be to you and a brief meeting
would establish this quickly.
Yours sincerely
Clive W Bonny
Proprietor
LETTERS TO CUSTOMERS
EXERCISE
G How quickly should I reply? Is this achieved? When I cannot answer queries
quickly am I sending interim acknowledgements?
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PROPOSALS
DRAFTING
COVERING LETTERS
G Personalise for each recipient
G Thank them for any help given
G Put a deadline on any quotation
G Confirm next action (NOT we await your reply)
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PROPOSALS
STRUCTURE
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EXTERNAL CORRESPONDENCE
PROPOSALS
FORMAT
SAY YOU
USE HEADINGS
CREATE WHITE SPACE
SHORTEN PARAGRAPHS
DOUBLE SPACE LINES
INSERT GRAPHICS
PUT CAPTIONS ON GRAPHICS
EMPHASISE WITH UNDERLINING, ITALICS, BOLDFACE
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P ERSONALISING
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P RESENTING
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PRESENTING
MIND MAPPING
EXERCISE
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M ARKETING
C O M M U N I C AT I O N S
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MARKETING COMMUNICATIONS
STATIONERY
BUSINESS STATIONERY can promote our services with the help of:
G a LOGO - people remember pictures (frank your envelopes with a logo)
G a MOTTO - people remember rhymes
G a SLOGAN - people remember catchphrases
G a BUSINESS NAME describing your offer
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MARKETING COMMUNICATIONS
PRESS RELEASES
DONT:
G Start sentences with numbers
G Use italics, upper case, very large or small type faces
G Underline or abbreviate
G Be humorous!
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12 November 2008
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MARKETING COMMUNICATIONS
DO:
G Be courteous - netiquette
G Respect intellectual property
G Consider cultural differences
DONT:
G Share your password
G Copy everyone
G Violate libel law
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In an office:
ELEPHANTS
In an office WC:
PLEASE STAY
WOULD THE PERSON WHO
IN YOUR CAR TOOK THE STEP LADDER TOILET OUT
YESTERDAY PLEASE BRING OF ORDER -
IT BACK OR FURTHER PLEASE USE
STEPS WILL BE TAKEN FLOOR BELOW
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About the Author
Clive Bonny
Clives career began in voluntary service overseas, progressing into accounts,
marketing, customer service and sales management with British, German and
American employers. As a General Manager he improved net profits from 6.8% to
18.2% whilst increasing the customer base tenfold within two years. He has been
owner-manager of Strategic Management Partners since 1989, providing interim
management support and advising organisations on best practice across diverse supply
chains. Clive is professionally qualified as a management consultant, and is a trained assessor
using the Business Excellence Model for human resource development, corporate responsibility,
innovation and alliance partnering. He is a Fellow of the Royal Society of Arts, Manufactures and
Commerce and projects have taken him to Africa, Middle East, Asia and across Europe. Outside work,
he enjoys inline roller-blading and orienteering.
Contact
Clive can be contacted at Strategic Management Partners www.consult-smp.com
Clive@consult-smp.com Tel: + 44 0 79 73 79 91 53
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