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James Ryan LO5 Feedback.

10/2/17

Current Grade for LO5: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You
You have may have missing items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please
elements improve this. If you require help with any of this work, or need to show me
of Merit work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.
and some
Distinction
in this Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.
Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are
clearly labelled with the words Re-Submission.
advertisement James. However, you need to show you have used the client
feedback to make changed to the advertisement to meet this criteria. I would
also advise that you take my feedback on board and re-film some of the advert.
To improve to a Distinction grade you will need to do this and of course, tighten
up the edit. There are a few redundant shots in here. Finally, make your own
screen at the end using video as discussed (shot of the person holding the can,
or it being in a gym setting. Some good work here James, you have just missed a
few details for that higher grade.

The resubmission deadline is: 31/03/2017

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