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Emma Julius
Ms. Jizi
UWRT 1104
2/14/17
Reflection
The feedback I received from my peers was all positive. The feedback
included information about areas that I could include more details about or
remove completely where changes were needed. I used almost all of the
were conflicting where one peer said yes and the other said no about adding
certain details. The feedback that I received was very useful and it really
helped me to know what the readers thought and what they wanted more
and less of as well. Also by asking the readers questions I got direct answers
The feedback I gave my peers answered their questions and concerns as well
as pointing out in their essays what areas were confusing and needed work. I
was able to comment on the different areas of their work by not only
answering their questions but also asking them questions about what
something means and how this information relates to the overall essay.
quickly from your father might die to now he's not, tell what help he got and
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why he lived., and How long did the friendship last and when did you two
start drifting apart?. These examples show where I had tried to answer my
peers questions by questioning their reasonings for their choices and what I