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Michael Coccaro
Dr. Miss
UWRT 1104
6 February 2017
This analysis will be focusing on a poem called The Devilish Acts Done
tragic events that happened during the Holocaust. With this analysis, I will
strengthen the language, discussing textual support and how it affects the
tone and mood of the poem, and lastly discussing the theme and imagery of
This poem was written back in 2014. The assignment was to choose a
person from the Holocaust and write a story depicting how their life likely
was. The person that I chose was named Wolf Himmelfarb. I decided to
write a poem for the assignment. I researched a lot about Wolf and
considered many things when writing this. I considered his 2 siblings, his
dads grocery store, and his time working on machinery he was not familiar
with. All of this was done to make the writing more relatable to what really
happened during this time. In the story, he survives the Holocaust and
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Writing this piece greatly surprised me. It was the first thing for school that I
feel confident that it was very precise. It is a piece I am proud of and still
In the past two weeks, I have started to think about my writing and
how it affects who I am. I had never even thought about the primary
know how to speak and write. I know that writing an academic paper
requires different word choice than texting a friend or talking on the phone
community, and the weight training discourse community. The poem uses
techniques.
There are questions posed throughout the narrative that are examples
of the rhetorical device called hypophora. Were they coming for me? What
did we have left? (Coccaro 4-5). This keeps the reader engaged because
more than likely the audience is also thinking these questions. These
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questions are answered within lines of asking them. The poem as a whole is
meant to be very realistic and depict events that likely happened during the
the historical context of this camp helps strengthen the imagery in this text.
Of course, there are some dramatic moments but these only help to depict
of the pronoun we describes how extreme the situation was. The stanza
repeatedly uses the word we, but this is only to emphasize the union of the
people that were enduring hardships. The poem also uses quoted dialect
which helps personalize the speaker and create a more interactive story.
Tone and mood are a big part of this poem. The tone changes abruptly
The poem begins with a beautiful setting It was such a nice day, the
wind blowing through my hair, the smell of the freshly cut grass (2-4). This
line creates a very optimistic mood for the reader, however within 2 lines of
the poem the tone begins to change drastically. Suddenly, I lost feeling in
my feet, petrified, were they coming for me? (7-9) creates a more
concerned and anxious tone. This effect of quickly changing the mood draws
scared in the beginning of this reading because he is scared that the Nazis
will be coming to take him and his family to a concentration camp. Sadly, he
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was right to be scared because the Nazis came to his village soon after. We
watched the Nazis with desperation and hope as they took us away (28).
The use of descriptor words including desperation and hope can give the
reader a sense of sympathy towards the narrator. Wolf had been dreading
that moment for weeks so when it finally happened he didnt even know
what to do. What he didnt know was that his family would be the only one
in the village to leave for the concentration camp. He tries to enlighten the
The audience can almost hear the sarcasm in the narrators voice when he
says this. It creates a sense of humor which helps to lighten the somber
tone. After getting to the concentration camp Wolf had made a friend and
just as he was beginning to accept his life and make the best of it his friend
Thomas was being taken from him just like the rest of his family was. We
stood petrified in the cold winter morning watching Thomas die, I would have
cried but I had no tears left (249-251), is very graphic. The audience can
empathize with the narrator and feel his pain. He has been crying so much
and dehumanized with all the graphic scenes he is suddenly forced to see.
One quote that helps transition to the next topic is when Wolf is in his bunk
and is too stressed to eat. He looks in the mirror and can see a drastic
change in his body. My emaciated body couldnt handle much more (216),
clearly depicts his health at this point. His ribcage is very noticeable here
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strengthens the language of the poem. There are many other dark images in
The dark descriptive imagery throughout the poem seems very harsh
but also tries to depict the severity of the situation. Being descriptive also
symbolizes a dark time that I was going through. At the time I wrote the
poem I was feeling depressed and not in a good place. Being descriptive
shot and killed my brother and sister, he threw them out of the car to be left
for dead (58-59), conveys a dark tone and a very graphic image for the
reader. There are also times where I also reference God. God was becoming
more and more distant lately, what God would let these events happen
(173-174), represents how during the time I was writing the poem I was
struggling with the idea that God might not even be watching over me.
understand. At age 16, I didnt understand why God would tear my family
guess God had been there for me (147,150), this symbolizes that during the
time I was writing this I was also needing some reassurance that God really
A main theme that is evident in this poem. The narrators father and
he did not have such a close relationship until they were forced to go through
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happen until after they do I am now stronger than ever, I now know I can
overcome anything that comes down my path (277) is very inspirational and
gives a sense of reassurance that the narrator after going through such a
was shot on the spot, he didnt even get to finish his last word. (124-126).
Throughout the poem even right before the narrators father dies the
audience can see that in a short time they had gotten a lot closer, the
narrator even used his fathers death as his motivation to persevere in the
situation.
how brutal the Holocaust likely was by using descriptive language and taking
a very realistic approach when writing it. This analysis discussed rhetorical
devices, imagery, theme, tone, and the audience giving a lot of textual
support. The narrators character changes a lot by the end and the audience
gets to see him grow spiritually and physically. Writing this poem helped me
can write very effectively. After writing this poem if I ever find myself
struggling to write well I look back at this and think about how inspired I was
writing. I now understand more about discourse and literacy and how they
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