Sonnet 130 Line Summary My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun; Mistress = my love/my darling/someone he cares deeply about. Her eyes arent bright like the sun (playing on the use of metaphors about nature to criticize traditional sonnets of the day tone is opposite of sonnet 18) Dark eyes Her lips are faint and colorless not bright and red Coral is far more red than her lips' red; like coral She doesnt have beautiful white skin its more of a If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun; Brownish/gray color She has black, wiry, frizzy, untamed hair If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head. Q1 (Argument/main metaphor): Describes his mistress using comparisons to nature. I have seen roses damask'd, red and white, He has seen roses, striped red and white
But his mistress doesnt have rosy red cheeks
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
He finds more pleasure smelling nice perfume
And in some perfumes is there more delight
His mistress, she doesnt smell like perfume
Q2 (Example/Argument being built: Describes Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks. her average appearance by contradicting the typical tone of sonnets during the time. I love to hear her speak, yet well I know He likes to talk with her, but he knows
Music sounds better than her voice He finds her
That music hath a far more pleasing sound; voice to be unpleasant in some way Hes never seen a goddess walk on this earth I grant I never saw a goddess go; (Goddesses sway and flow in the heavens) She is no goddess shes a little clunky, walks heavily, without grace She walks on the ground like a human being My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground: Q3 (Twist): Shakespeare opens this quatrain with a compliment, but continues to describe his mistress in an unconventional way. And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare And yet, his views his love for her as rare/hard to find/special As rare as any other woman that the poets of the day exaggerate about he doesnt need to exaggerate his love for her he loves her for who she is, flaws and all. As any she belied with false compare. Couplet (Summary): Shakespeare refuses to exaggerate the love he has for his mistress by using over the top descriptions of her beauty. Instead, he simply loves her for who she is.