LO1 FEEDBACK

Storm Smith LO1 Feedback. 5/12/16

Current Grade for LO1: Pass

LO1 Part
A. The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You
may have missing items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please
improve this. If you require help with any of this work, or need to show me
work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning

outcome is a Merit Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are
any minor corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are
made.
Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.
Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are
clearly labelled with the words Re-Submission.
Advertising Types & Styles
Some good work here. Some of your explanations lack depth at times.

LO1 Part B. What is advertising?

This is a good start, but you require more detail. Can you please ensure that you
quote / footnote any research that you find. The job roles section requires this.
Be more specific on the advertising agency and job roles and what they do.

Lo1 Part C. Regulation

A fair summary of the regulatory body here.
LO1 part D. Analysis.
This work provides a basic analysis of an advertisement Storm. To improve, tou
need to explain how the advert targets specific audiences (you have just listed
the audience). You also need to make it very clear what connotations and
messages the Mise en scene creates. You are also missing the ASA / BCAP
section, for this advert it is quite easy to find, its one of the most complained
about adverts. Id revisit this.

The resubmission deadline is: January 13th 2017