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In Tanzania, people are using explosives to fish. There Slide: Human Activities
aren't very many countries that currently have a problem
Clarify and elaborate on the human activities in this
with dynamite fishing, and blast fishing is severe along ecosystem. Describe what they do and why they do it, not
what it does.
most of Tanzania. Near the coast of Tanzania in the Indian
Topic sentence
Ocean, there are lots of fish, and many people rely on
Describe human activities (what and why)
fishing economically. Because of this, fishermen are using Determine which human activity is the key focus
Thesis
explosives so that they can kill hundreds of fish in
seconds, and then they are scooping these fish up with The _____________ (ecosystem or species), when
subjected to _____________ (human activity you are
nets. They can make up to $1800 off of one blast. This focusing on), results in ___________, __________, and
action is also dangerous for people since they are using __________ (primary, secondary, and tertiary impacts).
explosives. People are using homemade explosives made
from fertilizer and kerosene, and people are using When/Because of _______________ (human activity) in
_________________ (ecosystem), it
dynamite. People started blast fishing during the 1960s, _________________ (is impacted how) three
but it is a lot easier for people to get dynamite because of interrelated ways: _____________, ______________,
and ______________ (primary, secondary, and
more construction and mining lately in Tanzania. The coral tertiary).
reefs in Tanzania, when subjected to blast fishing,results
in coral reef destruction, habitat loss, and decreased fish
population.
The primary impact of this blast fishing is the killing of coral Slide: Primary Impact
and fish. When the explosion goes off, it has the chance to
For each of the 3 impact slides, each paragraph should:
rupture the swim bladder of the fish while also killing it. If
Introduce the impact (topic sentence), perhaps
the fish's swim bladder is ruptured, it can't be buoyant and including a transition word (although primary or
will sink. On top of that, the explosions are ruining the coral secondary would also make it pretty clear)
Elaborate!
on the coast. Coral are an animal, and they create a Explanation
Evidence
skeleton to protect them, but the blasts destroy the
Quote
skeletons and kill the coral. It can take up to 10,000 years Only use a quote in 1-2 slides
Quotes should not be longer than 12
for a coral reef to form. This impact is destroying coral words, so use the most powerful or
reefs and is ruining important shoreline habitat. convincing part without changing the
meaning
Quotes work best to emphasize a
point already made and therefore go
toward the end of the paragraph
Make it clear who said it, why they are
a credible source, and an in-text
citation (parenthetical)
Concluding sentence: So What?
For the first two impacts, the So
What sets up the resulting impact on
the next slide
In Tanzania, loss of habitat from blast fishing is decreasing Slide: Tertiary Impact
the population of fish. The Society for Environmental
For each of the 3 impact slides, each paragraph should:
Exploration (SEE) leads activities including assessments
Introduce the impact (topic sentence), perhaps
of reefs and management plans for marine parks. The SEE including a transition word (although primary or
says that marine life was severely threatened by secondary would also make it pretty clear)
Elaborate!
indiscriminate use of destructive fishing techniques. (SEE, Explanation
2011) This shows that blast fishing is leading to a Evidence
Quote
decrease in fish populations in Tanzania. If blast fishing Only use a quote in 1-2 slides
does not stop, it will continue to cause an increased Quotes should not be longer than 12
words, so use the most powerful or
destruction to the wildlife on the coast of Tanzania. convincing part without changing the
meaning
Quotes work best to emphasize a
point already made and therefore go
toward the end of the paragraph
Make it clear who said it, why they are
a credible source, and an in-text
citation (parenthetical)
Concluding sentence: So What?
For the first two impacts, the So
What sets up the resulting impact on
the next slide