Progress Reflection/Activity 1
Module Title and Writing
Assignment:
First Semester
Personal Statement
Racial Profiling
Good Food/Bad Food (Partner)
Into the Wild
Module Title and Writing
Assignment:
Second Semester
Bullying Research Paper
Juvenile Justice
Grade and Teacher Strengths - explain Weaknesses- explain
Comments
B-Dont use slang, short My strengths in this Problems in this essay
not 500 words, need to essay were the use of included having a
develop your anecdote good commas and run-on problem and not
using show not tell transitions along with using the show
good transitions technique
D-Awkward, where is My strengths in this Problems in this essay
the show?, commentary essay were the use of included having a
needs to support topic, transitions and run-on problem and
call to action? punctuation unsupportive
commentary
C-Turned into the My strengths in this Problems in this project
classroom late, back to project was reading included turning the
audience and deciphering assignment in late and
graphs used for using too many words
evidence
B-Use focus words in My strengths in this Problems in this essay
thesis, yes but explain, essay were the use of included having a
how is this an idealist? placement, passive run-on problem and
voice, and evidence using focus words
relevant to the thesis
Grade and Teacher Strengths-explain Weaknesses-explain
Comments
C-need more My strengths in this My weaknesses in this
commentary, off topic, essay were essay included having a
you have good information, transitions, run-on problem, and
information and comma use having a small amount
of commentary
D-Need better topic My strengths in this My weaknesses in this
sentence, awkward, essay were essay included not
concluding paragraph, punctuation, and having enough
 need commentary commentary that evidence, small amount
between evidence relates to evidence of commentary

Brave New World Predict your grade on What do you think What do you think were
the essay assignment were your strengths your weaknesses and
and why? why?
I think my grade on this My strengths were the My weaknesses in this
essay assignment will amount of commentary essay were probably
be a C or B I had for my evidence having a run-on problem
because that's what I and using weak
focused on during the evidence
essay