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By temperament, the essayist doesnt favor the final word but prefers to remain in an
exploratory frame of mind. Essayists like to examineor to use an essayists favorite term,
considertopics from various perspectives. To consider is not necessarily to conclude; the
essayist delights in a suspension of judgment. . .So the essayists take on a topic is neither
conclusive nor exhaustive; nor is it systematic. David Brooks
For reasons that are obscure to me, those qualities we cherish in our artists we condemn in our
politicians. In our artists we look for the many-colored voice, the multiple sensibility. Zadie
Smith
For some people, the public intellectual is a dissident figure who speaks truth to power and
opposes the tyranny of mass culture: mile Zola, Theodor Adorno, Susan Sontag. For others, the
public intellectual is a consummate popularizer, able to translate ideas and research into
best-selling books or widely viewed television series: Will and Ariel Durant, Carl Sagan, Henry
Louis Gates, Jr., Simon Schama, Amanda Vickery. (What does it mean that we could plausibly
put George Orwell and Ayn Rand in both the dissident and the popularizer categories?) Still
others see the public intellectual as defiantly opposing academia, taking aim at its elitist, arcane
obfuscations. In all three models, public scholarship is valuable because it radically alters either
the public or scholarship. Sharon Marcus
Course Description
University Writing is designed to help undergraduates read and write essays in order to
participate in the academic conversations that form our intellectual community. We will give
special attention to the practices of close reading, rhetorical analysis, research, collaboration, and
revision. Students will learn that writing is a process of continual refinement of ideas and their
expression. Rather than approaching writing as an innate talent, this course will teach writing as
a unique, learned skill that can be practiced and developed. Over the course of the semester, you
will read and discuss texts from a number of fields, complete regular informal reading and
writing exercises, write several longer essays, and prepare an editorial for a public audience.
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This course is a place for uncovering questions and seeking answers, for mastering voice and
attaining clarity, for broadening your range and depth, and for finding your feet in the world of
the academic essay. Imagine a bulletin board covered in notes and observations from the writers
and thinkers whove come beforetogether we will examine the work they have done and begin
to craft the the writing you will leave for those who follow. This semester we will consider issues
of empathy, authenticity and expertisevia the works of Ta-Nehisi Coates, Sharon Marcus,
Edward Said, Elaine Scarry, Claudia Rankine, Jonathan Letham, and othersand contribute our
own voices to the important intellectual conversations already in progress.
Note: Your syllabus is a reference document to be frequently consulted. In it you will find
course policies, all major due dates, and a schedule of readings. This syllabus is also available on
the Courseworks site. To get started, log in to [http://Courseworks.columbia.edu].
Requirements
Complete four revised essays ranging from 750-3000 words, each accompanied by at
least one draft. Students must submit all four final essays in order to pass the class.
Attend and participate in all classes and required conferences.
Prepare reading and writing exercises as assigned.
Submit all of your writing assignments on Courseworks and bring a copy you can refer to
class either in hard copy or electronically
Pending accessibility, we may also develop some group GoogleDocs tools.
Assignments
at least three types
You will do of writing in this course: exercises, drafts, and final essays. These
assignments will connect with one another in a developmental sequence called a progression.
Exercises: (100-400 words) Exercises will help you develop skills and ideas as you work toward
your essay draft. Some exercises will receive written feedback from me, others are design to
prompt in-class discussions or writing activities or spur you towards your next draft.
Drafts and proposals: (750+ words) You will write one or more drafts prior to submitting a final
version of your essay for a progression. The stronger the draft at any stage of composing, the
more useful will be the feedback you receive. At the formal draft stage of every assignment, you
will be required to participate in a small group workshop, which consists of submitting your
formal draft on time, reading the work of 2-3 classmates, providing in-text notes and a written
comment at the end, and contributing to an in-class discussion of each group members draft.
For Progression 1, you will complete an Exploratory Draft, a Formal Draft, and a Final Draft.
For Progression 2, you will complete an outline, a Formal Draft, and a Final Draft.
For Progression 3, you will complete a proposal, a Formal Draft, and a Final Draft.
For Progression 4, you will only turn in a Formal Draft and a Final Draftother prewriting
activities are at your own discretion.
Final essays: (750+ words; must have a title, word count, and a works cited page) A final essay is
the most public kind of writing you will produce for this course. Your essay should aim to
persuade astute, interested readers who are unfamiliar with the texts you engage; you need to
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present them with the necessary background and context for the discussion at hand, provide your
argument and supporting evidence clearly and cohesively, and above all, persuade them as to
why your argument is significant. Final essays should adhere to MLA style.
Optional Text:
Hacker, Diana. A Pocket Style Manual. 7 Edition. Available at the University Bookstore.
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As a student at Columbia, you can download bibliographic software to your PC or Mac (not yet
tablets or phones) that will archive and organize your textual references and generate formatted
citations in many formats. I strongly, strongly, recommend Zotero. You can download one of
those programs from CUIT: http://library.columbia.edu/research/citation-management.html
Formatting:
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be double-spaced, using 12-point Times New Roman font on a page with one-inch
margins
include a header on the first page only. This should include your name, the course title,
my name, a word count, and the date. Include a title on the first page. Include page
numbers.
be stapled. (You may want to invest in a small stapler to keep in your bag)
be posted to Courseworks. File name: [Your Last Name]_[Title of assignment i.e. P1
Exploratory Draft].doc or .docx
follow the MLA format for citations (consult the Purdue OWL)
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Course Policies
Attendance
The discussion and workshop elements that are at the center of this course cannot be made up, so
attendance is vital.
In accordance with Columbia University regulations, there will be distinctions made between
excused absences and unexcused absences. Excused absences due to religious observance,
athletic commitments (e.g. away games), and illness will not incur a grade penalty providing that
proper documentation is submitted correctly. In the first two weeks of class, students will also
not be penalized if they have been attending a different section of University Writing and elect to
change their section. Please see the specific requirements below for how you should document
absences you wish to be excused.
Religious observance: By the fourth class session, send an email to your instructorcopied to
your academic advisorin which you outline all of the dates you will be absent for the semester.
Create a plan with your instructor to make up work or reschedule deadlines.
Illness: For an absence due to illness to count as excused, please provide a signed doctors note.
You should bring the note to class on the day you are able to return. If you can, email your
instructor to indicate that you will be unable to attend class. Exchange emails with a
classmate to find out what you missed.
Section changes: If you change your section of University Writing in the first two weeks of class,
you must provide your new instructor a completed and signed University Writing Attendance
Confirmation form. Please see Mr. John Stobo in the Undergraduate Writing Program office,
310 Philosophy Hall, for a copy of the form.
All other absences, including those due to late registration, are considered unexcused. Unexcused
absences will affect your grade according to the chart below. Please also note the lateness policy
in the next section to understand how latenesses count toward your total number of absences.
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Lateness
Because lateness is disruptive to the entire class, if you arrive once class is underway or depart
before the class session has ended, you will be marked as late. Two latenesses count as one
absence in calculating your final course grade.
During the first three progressions, I will write marginal comments and typed end-comments to
one preliminary draft as well as your final draft. For your final progression, you will receive
end-comments on your final draft that respond to the essay as well as your development over the
course of the semester.
My comments are designed to help you assess your draft and prioritize goals for the next stage of
your writing. Just as important, my comments will offer you practical strategies designed to
further your ongoing development as a writer. If you have any questions about my comments,
please make an appointment with me to review them.
Essay Grading
A essays not only fulfill the goals of the progression, but push beyond those goals in surprising
ways. This is more likely to be possible when the writer has found something compelling to
write about and has taken great care to attend to his or her language and form. A essays reflect
excellence and artistrythey are free of typographic errors, awkward or unwieldy phrasing, and
reflect a level of thoughtful, intensive development or revision from previous drafts.
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B essays come in two basic varieties: the solid B (B-/B, B) and the striving B (B/B+, B+,
B+/A-). The solid B is a good, competent paper. The striving B may excel in certain areas, but it
is sufficiently uneven to preclude it from receiving an A. All B essays reflect superior
understanding of the progressions goals.
C essays reflect struggle in fulfilling the progressions goals. This kind of essay may show a
fair amount of work, either strong ideas or competent writing, but it does not come together well
enough to be a fully formed paper.
D essays may appear to have been hastily written, incomplete, or thrown together.
F essays fail to meet the minimum level of expectations for the progression.
Occasionally a student essay will fall in between two levels of grading, for example an A-/B+,
which indicates significant ambition hampered by flawed writing, or a B-/B, which indicates
adequate writing but underdeveloped ideas. At the end of the semester I convert each grade to a
number, weight it, and calculate the final grade accordingly.
Feedback and revision are critical components of this class. If you do not hand in a preliminary
draft at least 48 hours before the deadline of the final draft, your final essay grade will be
lowered by one whole grade (e.g. from a B to a C).
Your grade on the final essay will be lowered by 1/3 (e.g. from a B- to a C+) beginning the
minute after its deadline. The grade will continue to go down by a third every 24 hours until
the essay is submitted.
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Final Grades
Your course work for the semester will be weighted as follows:
Identify a crucial interpretive moment in one of the essays we have read (Celebrity Culture,
Identity, Freedom, and Authority, or My President Was Black) and introduce a claim that
explores or addresses the authors motive or achievement in creating that moment. Imagine a
reader unfamiliar with the source text, use close-reading of a particular passage to articulate the
interpretive moment, and then make your claim about why the author chose to make this
rhetorical move and what effect it has upon the text as a whole.
Find a textual or visual exhibit you would like to explore that would be a relevant centerpiece for
a discussion about empathy and compassion. Your exhibit can be a(n) essay, news article, image,
performance, or other piece of mediaavoid ads unless particularly groundbreaking or
provocative, because their purpose is usually fairly one-dimensional. Exhibits could be imagery
or works of art that encourage or solicit empathy, that put you in someone else's shoes, that push
you to consider people or experiences that would otherwise be outside your range of
understanding. Alternatively, you could identify images or media that display that lack of
empathy or compassion, that highlight a failure to consider other people. Then choose at least
two of the texts we have read for this progression (The Pain Scale, The Empathy Exams,
The Difficulty of Imagining Other People, The Condition of Black Life is One of Mourning,
or Who Gets to Be Human on the Evening News.) to identify and explain the exhibit. By
orchestrating this scholarly conversation and contributing to it, show the audience a new way to
interpret your exhibit.
In this essay, you will select a visual or textual exhibit (film, TV, visual art, literature, or
anything you can think of that is reviewed by critics and that I will sign off on) to review. The
exhibit should reflect significant influence of another source, and your analysis should
incorporate one of the seed texts (The Ecstasy of Influence or Copy Wrong) to assess how
the exhibit refers to or makes use of its inspiration. You will propose and undertake your own
independent research to investigate its context and make an argument for the exhibits
significance. The So What of your review is helping the reader understand what role the
inspiration plays and what the exhibit achieves as a result (or despite) that; your claim should
push beyond heres how this is derivative or heres how this is not derivative and into a
more meaningful assertion. Your essay must engage with one or more critics who have reviewed
your exhibit, whether you agree or disagree with their interpretation(s).
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Revisit one of your earlier essays and transform it into an Op-Ed for a publication that interests
you. Often this means introducing an earlier exhibit into a new conversation, or selecting some
highlights from your research and framing a new exhibit with them. Keep in mind this may mean
changing the tone or shape of your argument, but does not mean abandoning the structure of
introducing a problem and claim. You will be required to submit this Op-Ed to a publication,
and include proof of the submission with your final draft.
Total: 100%
Participation
As in all seminars, your participation will contribute to building a vibrant learning community.
While there is no separate grade for participation, I may adjust a final grade up or down by of
a letter grade to account for exceptionally productive or disruptive participation.
Academic Integrity
University Writing will provide you with strategies for working ethically and accurately with
sources and adhering to the Columbia Undergraduate Honor Code
[http://www.college.columbia.edu/ccschonorcode]. We will discuss source use practices that
prevent plagiarism, a serious academic offense that runs counter to our academic communitys
core values of honesty and respect for others. Here is a partial list from the Columbia University
Undergraduate Guide to Academic Integrity
[https://www.college.columbia.edu/academics/academicintegrity] of some of the forms
plagiarism can take:
Verbatim copying without acknowledgement copying a whole paragraph or larger
sections; in effect, claiming that the writing is your own.
Copying select phrases without acknowledgement using your own words to pad the
selectively copied words of others.
Paraphrasing text without acknowledgement rewriting text in your own words, but
using the idea or argument as your own.
Using data gathered by another, claiming it as your own even if you submit an
analysis of the data that is yours alone.
Your Progression 3 Final Essay must be accompanied by a source packet, with quoted
material highlighted.
Final drafts that contain plagiarism will receive a zero, may result in failure of the course, and
the case will be reported to the director of the Undergraduate Writing Program and the Office of
Student Conduct and Community Standards [http://studentconduct.columbia.edu/]. That office
initiates the deans discipline process and determines whether to apply sanctions, which range
from a warning to expulsion from the university.
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If you are an international student, a first generation college student, or an English Language
Learner, you may be eligible for 6 recurring sessions a semesterdrop by the Writing Center
program coordinators desk as early in the semester as you can to see if there are available
appointments.
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Course Calendar
# Date P In Class
HW:
Introduction Letter
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Ex 1.1B: One Sheet Note-Taking
My President Was Black Ta-Nehisi Coates
Eloquent Silences: Inaction as Invitation in No Mans Land, Amber
Officer-Narvasa
http://morningsidereview.org/essay/eloquent-silences-inaction-as-invitation-i
n-eula-bisss-no-mans-land/
Motive
HW:
Ex 1.2 3 Draft Claims
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4 Th In-class claim-workshopping
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Morningside Review examples
I.C.E: Selecting evidence
Summary vs Paraphrase
HW:
Ex 1.3 Exploratory Draft: Open Letter Due SUNDAY by 5 PM;
Schedule conferences for Tuesday/Wednesday
Read Writer Based Prose (see Files & Resources)
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P1 Formal Draft due SUNDAY 2/5 by 5 PM. Read classmates drafts, provide
line edits, write responses (turn in online & bring hard copies to class)
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P2 Craft Text: They Say/I Say
Exhibit Brainstorming
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HW:
2.1B One Sheet Note Taking:
Who Gets to Be Human on the Evening News Alisa Solomon
The Difficulty of Imagining Other People Elaine Scarry
10 Th Who Gets to Be Human on the Evening News: Key terms, Problems and
2/16 Claims
The Difficulty of Imagining Other People: Key terms, Problems and Claims
11 T 2/21 The Condition of Black Life is One of Mourning: Key terms, Problems and
Claims
Outline Overview
HW:
Ex 2.3 Progression 2 Outline, Introduction due before class on Thursday
Bring laptops to class
HW:
Formal Drafts due before class on Tuesday, online and in hard copy
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HW:
Read workshop groups drafts, write 2 paragraphs of feedback.
HW:
Revise draft
Ex 3.1 Read The Ecstasy of Influence, Jonathan Letham & Copy Wrong,
Laurie Stearns and write a 1 page response
HW:
P2 Final Draft Due in class on Thursday
HW:
Ex 3.2 Generate 3 questions for the research session
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17 T 3/21 P3 Examples
Groupwork: Reverse outline, present to classmates
HW:
Ex 3.5 Pick 2 Morningside Review Research Review essays; write the
comments/end notes youd give if these were your classmates.
HW:
Ex 3.7 Project Proposal due in class on Thursday (online and hard copy)
HW:
P3 Formal Draft due Sunday by 5 PM. (Online only)
Email drafts to group members; Read and respond to drafts
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HW:
Ex 4.2 Research Publications
HW: Op Ed Formal Draft (to courseworks before class, bring hard copies to
class)
HW:
Final Draft of Progression 4 Op Ed due Thursday, May 4 by 11:59 pm
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