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Doruk Korkmaz
Writing 39B
05.30.2017
As someone who studies computer science and develops IOS applications, I created an
because I thought that if I combine the knowledge I have acquired about rhetoric in Writing Commented [DK1]:
39B class and the knowledge I have gained from my previous application development
processes, I can create a successful project. My alarm clock application, Awakely, guarantees
you to get you out of your bed with its unique feature. You set up alarm by taking a photo in
your house. After you set your alarm, the only way to stop ringing is to get out of your bed
and take the same photo you used to set your alarm. In my advertisement, I tried to persuade
Instagram users, especially the ones who are looking for success, "If you want to be
successful, you should wake up early and if you want to wake up early, you should use
AWAKELY" by showing four successful people who wake up very early. To give this anti
carpe diem message, I also used similar strategies to Delta Airlines and Blinkist Apps
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First of all, I have to decide where to place my advertisement. After some research, I
decided to put my advertisement on Instagram because The older generation really isnt
active on the app. A majority of Instagram users are under 30 (Sproutsocial) I believe that
Instagram is very suitable for my purpose because according to Statistas statistics 20.6% of
Instagram users are between 18 to 24 years old and 25.2% of Instagram users are between 25
to 34 years old, which means 49% of Instagram is in the range of my target audience. More
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specifically, my target audience is people who wants to be successful in the future, who wants
to be CEO or founder of a big company or who wants to work at a big companies such as
Microsoft and Google. Therefore, my ad will be shown to people who follows Forbes, Ted
Talks, Entrepreneur, Elon Musk, Google or Mark Zuckerberg on Instagram. Another useful
source will be peoples website history. If someone makes a research about some secret
keywords related to success or successful people, then my advertisement will be on their main
feed.
Second, I tried to understand the general conventions of Instagram advertisement by Commented [DK3]: what s the general conventon?
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making research about Best Instagram Advertisements on Google and by scrolling down as
much as I can on Instagram. Although I have seen lots of different advertisements, Delta
Airlines and Blinkist App advertisements impressed me most. It was obvious that they did
something right so that they selected one of the best Instagram ads by Adespresso and
Hubspot.
tried to take the attention to the wake-up time of successful people. Therefore, I made the
wake-up times bigger than the rest just like in the first photo of Delta advertisement. I gave
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some information about the person in the background with a smaller text, which helped me
not to take the attention to the name or to the title. Moreover, I used logo and name placement
strategy of Delta. I placed the name of my application and my logo at the right corner of every
photo.
The second example I used was Blinkist App advertisement. Firstly, I was influenced
will do is to swipe right and learn more about it, just like in Blinkist advertisement. Secondly,
their caption was appealing. It was straight forward and mentions about the functionality of
the application. I used the same strategy by selecting my caption as This alarm app
guarantees to get you out of your bed! The only way to turn off your alarm is to get out of bed
Third, I made a mini survey with around 40 wake-up time of successful people to
decide the successful people in my advertisement. At the end of the survey, the top four was
Apple CEO, Michael Obama, Fiat Chrysler CEO and Twitter CEO but my target was to reach
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both women and men. Therefore, instead of using three men and only one woman. I removed
Twitter CEO, Jack Dorsey, who wakes up at 5:30am and put the second most voted woman,
General Motors CEO, Mary Marra. With this addition, all of the successful people were
Forth, I have to choose the best photo of the decided successful people. While I was
choosing photos, I made sure that they all have eye contact with the audience because
according to Wishpond, eye-contact, no matter the medium, denotes trust, friendliness and
Last thing is to come up with a strong message in the last photo. I come up with an
anti carpe diem message, "If you want to be successful, you should wake up early and if you
want to wake up early, you should use AWAKELY". This message is anti carpe diem because Commented [DK4]: why wake up early s ant carpe dem?
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it encourages you to wake up early and start studying or working before everyone else like
Tim Cook, Michael Obama, Sergio Marchionne and Mary Marra. Instead of seizing the
moment, it motivates you to make plans for the future because being successful cannot be Commented [DK5]: fnd someone famous who sad ths
gained only in one day or in one month. Success is accumulation of effort, accumulation of
overcome obstacles (Andrew Hansen). Thinking that you will be successful in the future is
also against carpe diems core idea of negative impression about future. In this advertisement,
I emphasize that waking up early is the first step to succeed. If you live like successful people
and wake up early like them, you will be successful and Awakely will help you to live like
Works Cited
https://adespresso.com/academy/blog/37-instagram-ads-examples/
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https://blog.hubspot.com/marketing/instagram-ads-we-
love#sm.000r9t9hx1119f05t5c28ob8kyhz2
https://designshack.net/articles/layouts/the-sometimes-hidden-meaning-of-shapes/
http://blog.wishpond.com/post/66384119774/the-psychology-behind-a-successful-facebook-
ad-part-2
https://sproutsocial.com/insights/instagram-vs-facebook/
http://andrewhansen.name/featured/success-is-accumulation/