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Y2/3: Autumn Term Fiction Plan 1B: Fantasy stories Main texts: The Swallows Journey; The Lion

Main texts: The Swallows Journey; The Lion and the Bird; The Flat Rabbit
Wk 1 teachingWhole class Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday
Ask chn if they Using maps in the animated Swallows Tale, look You will need a few Read The Lion and the Bird up to Look again at The Lion and The Bird.
have ever seen again at Swallows journey northwards from examples of childrens middle of the book, where the bird Today, were going to talk about Lion
swallows. Look at South Africa. Where does he go, and who does he comics for todays flies off and leaves Lion alone in the as a character, and write a profile of
the pictures on meet along the way? Can we remember the lesson. Remind chn of Spring. Discuss links chn can make him. Discuss the Character Profile
the Swallow Facts order? What if Swallow stopped somewhere else conversations they acted with The Swallows Journey. Take Categories (plan resource) chn need to
Objectives Dimension Resources
languageSpoken

Y2/3 Participate in 1. Tuesday: Swallows New Friend See Comprehension 2 World Animals Map
discussions, Most chn in ability-matched pairs. Chn decide on a new animal and its location, using the Animals of the World Map or class World wildlife
presentations, reference books to help to make choices. They then role-play a conversation between the two, using the Conversation Prompt reference books
performances, role sheet to help structure their dialogue. Chn take turns to be Swallow/the new animal. Conversation Prompt
More able extend conversation to include two new topics: Swallows promise of a souvenir from England, and the animals sheets, simpler and
play, improvisations
warning about a hazard to watch out for. They record notes on their Prompt sheet. more complex
and debates
Y2 Discuss the sequencePlenary:
of Hear
1. a variety
Monday: of conversations.
Read Discuss characterful
and retell The Swallows Journey dialogue and good ideas. Record some Seenew
Wordideas for your
reading 1 own. The Swallows Journey
events in books Split class into ability-related groups so that each group has a copy of The Swallows Journey. group readers
Check that the text makes Most chn re-read the story in their group (plan resource) and work together to record the storys correct sequence on a The Swallows Journey
sense to them as they read paper strip. They use the jumbled story pegs sheet to test recall. Rehearse retelling the tale when correctly sequenced. story pegs (ordered)
Less confident reading groups do as above but have story pegs in the correct order. The Swallows Journey
Comprehension

and correct inaccurate


More confident reading groups try to sequence Swallows journey without prompts. They check against the story and story pegs (out of
reading record it before rehearsing their retelling. order)
Y3 Read books that are Plenary: Ask different groups to retell the story, event by event. Ask questions: Swallow meets Snake - what animal did Recording strips
structured in different ways he meet next? End with a riddle: Why do swallows fly south in winter? Because its too far to walk!
Check text makes sense,
discussing their
understanding
Y3 Discuss and record ideas 2. Tuesday: Write notes to aid retelling The Swallows Journey See Spoken language 1 Conversation Planner
Y3 and more able chn use note-taking to record key phrases for Swallows conversation with their new animal friend.
Y2 Re-read to check that 1. Friday: Write a character profile of Lion Character
Composition

their writing makes sense Using the Lets Look at Lion page, most chn write a sentence profiling Lion that uses and to combine linked observations. They profile
Proof-read to check for reread their sentence to check for errors and make improvements before continuing with further sentences. They make sure that Categories
errors in spelling, grammar they have addressed all the Character Profile Categories somewhere in their lines. When finished, they draw Lion in the box. sheet
Less confident writers produce single sentences, ensuring they have written one for each category. They use and in at least one. Lets Look at
and punctuation
More confident writers use a wider range of connectives (plan resource) to produce longer sentences that combine observations. Lion page
Y3 Assess the effectiveness
Y2 Learn to use familiar and 1. Wednesday: Speech bubbles and speech Dialogue
Grammar

new punctuation correctly Less able Y2 writers work independently. Using the Dialogue Speech Bubble sheet they write out an exchange from their Speech
Y3 Use and punctuate direct conversations role-played yesterday. If finished, they write a second exchange on an additional page and draw in their characters. Bubbles
speech correctly Y3 and more able writers remain with you. Demonstrate changing the speech in the Dennis and Gnasher page into properly sheet
punctuated dialogue, modelling correct use of inverted commas and a simple said Dennis sentence structure. Chn rehearse. Dennis and
Use correct terms for

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Y2/3: Autumn Term Fiction Plan 1B: Fantasy stories Main texts: The Swallows Journey; The Lion and the Bird; The Flat Rabbit
Transcription Word reading Y2 Continue to apply phonic knowledge and skills as the route to 1. Monday: Read The Swallows Journey See Comprehension 1
decode words Chn use phonic and other word attach skills to read unfamiliar words.
Y3 Apply their growing knowledge of root words, prefixes and suffixes
Y2 Form lower-case letters of 2. Thursday: Dear Bird Lions
correct size relative to others Most chn use the Lions Postcard template (plan resource) to write a message from Lion to Bird. On their card they write an Postcard
Use spacing between words opening greeting to Bird, at least two tempting ideas to woo him back, and a farewell. template
that reflects size of the More confident writers should describe each of at least two temptations in detail, using good descriptive language. Challenge
them to introduce at least one temptation as a question.
letters
Plenary: Read The Lion and The Bird to the end of the story. Who predicted that Bird would come back? Do you think he will every
Y3 Spell words that are often year?
misspelt

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Y2/3: Autumn Term Fiction Plan 1B: Fantasy stories Main texts: The Swallows Journey; The Lion and the Bird; The Flat Rabbit
Wk 2 Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday
You will a need a soft toy rabbit for this lesson. If you Write a simple sentence on Explain that today chn will Keep this input short! Keep this section of the
dont have a rabbit, adjust the whole class teaching the board: The lion met the be planning a new version of Tell chn its writing day. Read lesson short so that those
to fit your soft animal. Ask chn to show each other bird. Discuss how, as in The Lion and The Bird, again the story notes needing to finish stories
the toy animals they have brought in. Prompt a few yesterdays lesson, we can starring chns own soft toy generated in yesterdays from yesterday have plenty
chn to talk about their animals, saying why they are add to (expand) the sentence: animals in the Lion role. lesson for your Rabbit tale. of time to do so.
special. Help them to be as articulate as possible, The friendly lion met the Look at the basic five-peg Model using your notes to Read and enjoy The Flat
using a clear speaking voice to explain their response bird. Underline friendly and structure of the storys plot compose full sentences for Rabbit. Revisit the first few
and keeping their talk focused and interesting for the ask chn what type of word (plan resource) and explore the first section. Stress pages. What on earth might
rest of the group. Explain that later in the week they this is. Is it a noun or an how chn can use this to plan composing sentences orally have happened to Rabbit?!
will be writing a new version of The Lion and The adjective? Check definitions their own tale. Focus on the before you write them. I Have fun coming up with
Whole class teaching

Bird, but starring their toy animal instead of Lion. and agree that it is an skill of note-taking, urging always reread my work to possible answers: he
Show your own toy animal, Rabbit. Today we are adjective and that it gives us chn to use single words and check I havent made any jumped from a hot air
going to write really good descriptions of our more information about the short phrases rather than mistakes, and to make sure balloon; he fell off a tall
animals. First I want you to read a definition for me. noun (lion). Expand the whole sentences as they get that Ive included all the buildings; a cook with a
Show and shared-read the noun definition (plan sentence further: The friendly their thoughts down on things I wanted to. With rolling pin squeezed him
resource). I am going to write a sentence about lion, who was quite lonely, paper. Ideas are a bit like chns help, read back over flat; he tumbled into a
Rabbit and I want you to see if you can spot the met the bird. Point out that Rabbit in my story - they your sentences. Have I used photocopier and got
nouns. Write, My rabbit has ears. Chn identify and we have added some more hop away very quickly, so good, clear handwriting? squashed by the rollers; he
underline the nouns, rabbit and ears. Hhmm. Its a description of the lion. we need to capture them And have I remembered to got ironed by accident; he
bit simple though, isnt it? I need more detail. Explore Expand it yet further by before they scuttle off and include punctuation? Make didnt eat any breakfast and
two ways that we can do this. First we can expand adding some description for get lost! Urge chn to be changes where they are got very thin. Look at
the noun into a bigger phrase: Its like enlarging a the bird. Take suggestions e.g. imaginative and bold in their needed and continue problems with our
noun by adding other words to it. Write: My rabbit The friendly lion, who was thinking. Remember: we writing, referring back to scenarios: But wouldnt
has ears with white tips. Highlight the expanded quite lonely, met the hurt want to include the your notes from yesterday. there be boot marks on him
noun phrase, with white tips. We can also add bird. What part of speech is adjectives and adverbs we Have I included a good if hed been trodden on?
adjectives to our sentence. Read the adjectives hurt in this sentence? Again, practised earlier in the week adjective in this sentence? Wouldnt he be singed if
definition (plan resource). Can you think of an check definitions and ensure in our writing. Model Who can suggest an hed been ironed?
adjective I Objectives
could use for rabbit? Velvety, soft, cuddly, chn can identify hurt as an beginning
Dimensionyour own planner adjective I could use? Chn finish their stories first
Resources
Y2/3 Use relevant strategies 2. Monday: Animal Adjectives See Grammar 2 Soft Toys
nsionComprehe Spoken language

to build their vocabulary Split chn into ability-matched pairs or small groups. Most chn take turns to describe their toys to one another, helping My Toy Animal Record
Give well-structured partners to verbalise really good descriptions. After discussion, each writes down their descriptions on the Toy Animals sheet
descriptions, explanations Record sheet (plan resource), making sure they include powerful adjectives. Large bag to hide soft
More confident writers do the same but also use expanded noun phrases to extend their writing. toys in
and narratives for different
Plenary: Play Guess the Animal. Place a soft toy in a bag. My animal has a long, bony neck. Where are the nouns in
purposes, including for my sentence? And the adjectives? Take suggestions and reveal a giraffe of course! Rpt for a different animal.
Y2 Predict what might happen on the 3. Friday: How Rabbit Got Flattened After Composition 3 How Flat Rabbit
basis of what has been read so far Once their stories from yesterday are completed, all chn work in mixed ability pairs or small groups. They use the Got Flattened
Y3 Predict what might happen from How Flat Rabbit Got Flattened sheet (plan resource) to record ideas. sheets
details stated and implied More able writers offer qualifications to their ideas (But, Equally I think, However).
Plenary: Who came up with another suggestion about poor Flat Rabbits demise? Whats our favourite suggestion?
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Y2/3: Autumn Term Fiction Plan 1B: Fantasy stories Main texts: The Swallows Journey; The Lion and the Bird; The Flat Rabbit
Y2 Plan or say out loud what they are 2. Wednesday: Plan a new version of The Lion and the Bird 4-, 5- and 6-peg
going to write about All chn work in ability related pairs. Most use the 5-peg Soft Toy Story Planner (plan resource) to develop ideas and Soft Toy Story
Write down ideas and/or key words, make notes for their own stories. More and Less confident writers use the 6- and 4-peg Soft Toy Story Planners Planners
including new vocabulary respectively to support and extend planning.
Plenary: Who would like to share some of their story ideas? Look at plans from across the class, praising particularly
Y3 Discuss writing similar to that
examples of plans that make good use of short, single word- or short phrase notes. Pick up on a particularly good
which they plan to write in order to idea from a child, and model editing your notes to include a similarly strong idea. Tomorrow we are going to be
understand and learn from its turning our ideas into finished stories!
Composition

structure, vocabulary, grammar;


Discuss and record ideas
Y2 Write narratives about personal 3. Thursday and Friday: Write a new version of The Lion and the Bird See Thurs: Word reading 3/Fri: Comprehension 3 Lined paper
experiences and those of others (real Drawing on the notes generated in yesterdays lesson, all chn write their new versions of The Lion and The Bird on Sugar paper for
and fictional) lined paper. Dont forget - you will need to give your story a new title. When completed, these can be set inside book jackets
Encapsulate what they want to say, titled and decorated sugar paper covers.
Plenary: Ask to hear finished stories or sections of stories. Help readers to spot errors in punctuation, grammar or
sentence by sentence
vocabulary, encouraging chn to continue to make changes and improvements to their work. Would The Lion and
Y3 Compose/rehearse sentences orally The Bird be as good without pictures do you think? Look at some of the illustrations in the book that chn particularly
In narratives, create settings, like. You will be able to add a picture to the cover of your book later.
characters and plot
Y2 Use expanded noun phrases 2. Monday: Write a description of a soft toy using adjectives and expanded noun phrases See Spoken Language 2 Toy Animals
Y3 Begin to understand and name the Chn write descriptions on Toy Animals Record sheet (plan resource), making sure they include powerful adjectives. Record sheet
different parts of speech More confident writers do the same but also use expanded noun phrases to extend their writing. (plan resource)
Y2 Use and understand the 3. Tuesday: Extending sentences by adding adjectives, expanded noun phrases and adverbs (Y3) Starter
Y2 work independently on extending sentences using the Starter Sentences 1 provided (plan resource). Beginning Sentences 1 and
Grammar

grammatical terminology noun and


adjective with a simple sentence, they add two adjectives and a further bit of description. 2
Use expanded noun phrases to Keep Y3 with you and return to the sentence used in the whole class teaching: The friendly lion, who was quite
lonely, met the hurt bird. Now we can add an adverb, e.g. The friendly lion, who was quite lonely, suddenly met the
describe and specify
hurt bird. Point out that suddenly describes how the Lion met the birdit tells us more about the verb met. Write
Y3 Use and understand grammatical verb and adverb on the RHS of the board and show the definitions (plan resource). Using the Sentence Starters 2,
terminology (noun and adjective) Y3 then practise adding two adjectives, some extra description and an adverb to their sentences.
accurately and appropriately when Plenary: share sentences generated by Y2 and Y3. What do we like most about our new improved sentences?
discussing their writing
TranscriptionWord reading

Y2 Form lower-case letters of the 3. Thursday: Write a new version of The Lion and the Bird. See Composition 3
correct size relative to one another All chn use best handwriting and spelling when producing a finished piece of writing. Encourage chn to leave spaces
Use spacing between words that between words, to check their spelling as they go and to form letters correctly. Our stories need to be legible!
reflects the size of the letters
Y3 Spell words that are often misspelt

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Y2/3: Autumn Term Fiction Plan 1B: Fantasy stories Main texts: The Swallows Journey; The Lion and the Bird; The Flat Rabbit
Wk 3 Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday
Re-read The Flat Rabbit. Return to Chn will need to have drawn or Look at the kite-launching page in The Go back for last time to The Flat Keep input short so
the part where Dog and Rat consider painted pictures of Dog, Rat and Flat Flat Rabbit. The Dog tried to imagine Rabbit and stop at the page that there is plenty
taking Flat Rabbit back to number 34 Rabbits owner ready for todays what the world would look like from up with Dog and Rat in the of time for writing
and knocking on the door. How lesson. These should be on a piece of there If Dog or Rat had tried out the doghouse making their plans. and for reading
would Rat and Dog feel when they paper large enough to have speech kite to see if it worked what might they We know what they came up aloud.
banged on the door? Would they be bubbles added to it later. Review have seen as they floated along on the with to send Rabbit on her final Taking your ideas as
Whole class teaching

nervous do you think, or really sorry yesterdays ideas for the possible breeze? Look at footage of hang gliders journeybut what else could to Rabbits possible
for Rabbits owner? What might Dog doorstep conversation between Flat filming the world below them they have decided to do? last journey from
say at the door? Take suggestions Rabbits owner and Dog. Using the https://www.youtube.com/watch? Explain that today and yesterday, model
(Excuse me, but is this your rabbit?/ picture of Dog and Rabbits owner v=tX55GL2wWgw. Model writing a tomorrow everyone is going to selecting one and
I am really sorry but your rabbit has (plan resource), sketch in speech descriptive passage. Dog was flying be writing a new ending to the writing it up in a
been flattened by a rock!). Act these bubbles and record Dogs speech to above the countryside. Which is the story, which they will read out series of full
out with chns help. And what about the owner: Excuse me, but is this your verb in my sentence? Identify flying. to the others. Today well share sentences. Lay
the owners response? Would he be rabbit? I think he might have been Could I improve my sentence by good ideas and plan our stress on using your
sad? Or maybe hed have an idea fired out of a circus cannon. Stress the changing flying for another verb? writing. Take and/or propose best handwriting.
how to save Rabbit? Perhaps he need as always for a capital letter and (soaring, floating, swooping and some suggestions for other last This is extra
might even be happy! Take ideas for for a question mark at the sentence wheeling, etc.) Or perhaps I could add journeys Rabbit might make: important today as
the owners response (Oh no my end. Now model converting the bubble an adverb to flying? (gently, swiftly, Dog and Rat glue Rabbit to a we are going to be
poor Floppy!/Good riddancethat to a line of properly punctuated calmly, etc.) Below him Dog could yacht sail or post her in an reading our work
Objectives Dimension Resources
Y2/3 Participate in discussions, 3. Monday: Knock knock!
presentations, performances, All chn work in ability-related pairs or trios. They role play possible conversations between Dog and/or Rat and Flat
Rabbits owner, incorporating some of the ideas about Flat Rabbits demise from last Friday, and taking turns to play
Spoken language

role play, improvisations and


debates the different roles. Once they have settled on a scenario, they rehearse their conversation, improving expression and
characterful delivery. More able chn ensure that they incorporate Rat in the conversation too.
Y2/3 Use spoken language to 4. Thursday: New endings to The Flat Rabbit. Endings sheets
develop understanding All chn work in mixed ability pairs or small groups. They discuss alternative endings to The Flat Rabbit and, using the
through speculating, Endings sheet, record their ideas in brief notes with diagrams. They must select one idea from those discussed before
hypothesising, imagining and the end of the session, ready for tomorrows writing.
exploring ideas
Composition

Y2 Write down ideas and/or key 4. Wednesday: Kite Flight Lined paper
words, including new vocabulary On lined paper most chn write descriptions of what Dog or Rat might experience as they floated along on Sugar paper to create
Encapsulate what they want to say, their kite. They concentrate on using powerful verbs and adjectives. kite shaped mounts for
sentence by sentence Less confident writers do the same but concentrate only on using good adjectives. writing
More confident writers incorporate evocative adverbs as well as adjectives and verbs.
Y3 Compose and rehearse sentences
Display finished work on kite-shaped sugar paper mounts.
orallyprogressively building a varied
and rich vocabulary

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Y2/3: Autumn Term Fiction Plan 1B: Fantasy stories Main texts: The Swallows Journey; The Lion and the Bird; The Flat Rabbit
Y2 Read aloud what they have written 5. Friday: Write and read aloud new endings to The Flat Rabbit See Word Reading 4
with appropriate intonation to make Chn write their new endings to Flat Rabbit. They should draw on the idea they chose yesterday as their
the meaning clear favourite, and write it today, making sure that they rehearse what they want to say before writing it.
Y3 Read aloud their own writing, to a Plenary: All chn read their story endings aloud to class. This will need to be done over time so that all chn
have had an opportunity to read aloud without the class sitting for a very prolonged period while this is
group or the whole class, using
done! Encourage speakers to consider their audiences as they speak, changing their voices to reflect mood,
appropriate intonation and controlling and adjusting volume and pace for clarity and comprehensibility. Involve listeners by asking them to be ready
the tone and volume so that the to feedback favourite ideas heard.
meaning is clear
Y2 Learn how to use both familiar and 4. Tuesday: Write Dog and Rabbits owners conversations Chns own Dog, Rat
TranscriptionWord reading Grammar

new punctuation correctly Most chn use the pictures they have drawn of Dog, Rat and the Rabbits owner or the one provided (plan and owner pictures
Y3 Use and punctuate direct speech resource) to record the conversation they role-played yesterday. They should use correct dialogue Speech bubble
punctuation. Challenge them to use words other than said. templates
Less able writers can write speech bubbles on their drawing of dog, rat and the owner. Lined paper
Y2 Form lower-case letters of the 4. Friday: New endings to The Flat Rabbit See Composition 5
correct size relative to one another All chn use best handwriting and spelling when writing the endings to The Flat Rabbit.
Use spacing between words that (The focus of todays lesson is on developing chns confidence in reading aloud their own compositions. If
reflects the size of the letters. you have chn in class who have very poor handwriting they should where possible use word processors or a
scribe so that they can participate fully in the reading aloud.)
Y3 Spell words that are often misspelt

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Y2/3: Autumn Term Fiction Plan 1B: Fantasy stories Main texts: The Swallows Journey; The Lion and the Bird; The Flat Rabbit

Books:
Swallows Journey, Animated Tale Hamilton Trust (https://player.hamilton-trust.org.uk/animated_tales_display.php?cid=142)
Swallows Journey, Hamilton Group Reader, available from (http://www.hamiltoneducation.org.uk/collections/group-readers-1/3-ks1-harder )
The Lion and the Bird, Marianne Dubuc, Enchanted Lion Books ISBN 978-1-59270-151-3
The Flat Rabbit, Brur Oskarsson, Owl Kids ISBN 978-1-77147-059-9

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tX55GL2wWgw Week 3 Wednesday Whole class teaching; hang glider flight film

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Y2/3: Autumn Term Fiction Plan 1B: Fantasy stories Main texts: The Swallows Journey; The Lion and the Bird; The Flat Rabbit
Outcomes
Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday
1. Shared read a set of fiction and 1. Recall and sequence events 1. Transcribe imagined dialogue for 1. Make predictions as to the 1. Create a profile for a well-known
non-fiction texts from a story shared in class familiar characters outcome of an unfamiliar tale, character
2. Retell a story read in class, using 2. Imagine new dialogue for 2. Correctly punctuate direct basing conclusions on what has 2. Extend sentences with a range
story pegs familiar characters speech happened so far of conjunctions
2. Use a simple opening-middle-
ending structure for a short
composition

1. Understand and apply the 1. Understand and apply the 1. Imitate the structure of a 1. Write a new version of a familiar 1. Refine skills of predictions of
terminology of noun, noun phrase terminology of adverb when familiar story to plan own story, incorporating innovations of outcome of stories shared in class
and adjective when studying texts studying texts in class compositions ones own based on what has been read so
in class 2. (Y3) Begin to employ adverbs in 2. Use single-word or short-phrase 2. Develop the habit of rereading far
2. Make use of noun phrases and own compositions notes to capture ideas when work to check for errors and sense 2. (Y3) Use a range of qualifying
adjectives to enhance planning stories connectives when writing
compositions

1. Use knowledge of texts shared 1. Rehearse correct punctuation of 1. Revise the meaning and roles of 1. Plan a new ending to a familiar 1. Write a new ending to a familiar
in class to imagine new scenes direct speech adjectives and adverbs in writing story story
2. Contribute to role play and re- 2. Explore different ways to lay out 2. Make use of strong adjectives, 2. Edit down a range of possible 2. Read own work aloud in class
enactments speech on the page verbs and adverbs in own writing options and make a final selection
3 Consider synonyms forsaid
when writing dialogue

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