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Thank you lor your prompt atienlon to th s mater
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- Remember, every letter you send. no matter how basic, is always an
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into details that may expand it considerably. In the 3 years he has been employed by Jones pubtishing he has shown a grasp of his
3. Informal should not belaken to mean unimportant. They arc informal posilion lhat s lar above the norm.
onlv inthe sense that they do away with som-e of the formllities of lefter He has. on more than one occasion, inittaled or imp emented procedures that have
_ writing such as internal address, formal openings/closings. etc. saved the company many thousands ot dol ars
B. Purposes of Memos
l. Urgency
Moreover, he has always shown great team sp r t and wi I ngness to pad c pale n
endeavors that go far beyond the routine requtrements of his position.
a. Memos contain important or time-sensitive material that cannot u,ait for
regular channels. We al Jones Publish ng wil sore y m ss hrm and wtsh him all the besl in his future
b. They contain material that will be diluted in formai letter format. en0eavors.
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To Whom it A/ay Concern
Arnold Gale has been employed by Jones publ shing for the past six months
Aithough lhis s a re alively short time. I rea zed qu te ear y the qualt es and job
periormance we cou d expect from Mr. Gale and he has tved up to or exceeded every
lamconfdentthat. ntheproperpostion.[/r.Gaewoudproveanasseltoanycompany,
be linear (as above) or may be "Squared" (as below): and that, rn any position he w I make his ski ls and abrl ties known qu ck y.
B One doesn't want to mislead future employers, nor anger the employee.
To Whom it May Concern:
Arn^old Gale has been employed by Jones publishing for the past six months.
Re:
L Simple statement of fact.
Although this is a relatively short time, t realized quite earlv the qualities
and job performance we could expect from Mr. Gaie, and h6 has iived up
to or exceeded every expectation.
2. This sounds posrtive. But it never states what was expected from Mr. Gale after they got
to know him.
3. C-ante.read.by the discerning eye as: "we knew early on we had made a mistake, and
CC Mr. Gale did nothing to disprove our opinion."
I am confident th-at, in the propei position, Mr. Gale would prove an asset
to any company,
4. Note "in the proper position..." (This one u'asn't it!)
and that, inany position he will make his skills and abilities known quickly.
5. If you make the same mistake we di{ you'll know it soon enoush.
PLAINT LETTERS
A. Cor er letters inlroduce the material lhe\ cover' A. Ihere are ser eral different tvpes of complaint letters.
B. Material mav be resumes, sales brbchures, manuscripts, products, B. Unlike most letters in this guide. complaint letters may contain
nictures. etc. considerable emotion; usually anger.
C. the important point to remember is that the material the cover letter 1. The writer has the right to be angry at poor pertormance.
accomdanies is'lhe imporlanl part of the mailing. 2. However, keep angeiin check. oi ii may turn a possibility for redress into a
D. Thereftjre, the cover letter should be as brief as possible. tirade that causes the recipient to stonewall.
1. Resumes, sales brochures, etc., are documents lhat have been designed to C. We will examine the following:
Dresenl lhe bert possible piclure. The:e are what you want the recipient lo 1. Faultv product/service complaints from one company to another.
iead. lfvou sDend lime in vour cover letter itemizing the contenls ol that 2. Faultv broduct/service comflaints from individual to company.
resume dr sale's brochure, you will not do it as well' an-d you negate the need 3. Job peiformance complaint's to employees.
to read the piece itself. 4. Job iomplaints from employees to management.
2. Ifthe matehals sent are extensive, or not selfevident, (a large catalogue, Companv to Company Letter
information/material on a CD rom, etc ) you can highlight key points. 'Notle: Alwavs bn cbnpanv letterhead, as there is a chance that this may
Eirample (l) beconiT-lesal docuneit if the complaint goes uncorrccted and/or has
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ramificationi that ntay impact upon youl' company.
I am extemely p eased to send you the enclosed resume, wh ch I know you w ll iind meeis Iam wril ng 10 yo! on behali of o!r Produclon Manager Bill Spear in fegard to the problem
a I your requrrements. of defective wdgels recerved from Vourcompanv on oec Sth oi lhs year
Iwould be most interested in working w th one of ihe pre-eminent companies n the tield, as yo! have been iniarmed on sevefal occasons. lhey arrived at our plant over a weeK lale
and I know my exper ence and expertise wou d be a great asset to you and nadamagedcondton
Unless we receive rep acemenls ior this shipment wthir 5 (i ve) work ng davs ol receipl 01
'As you wil see ffom the enc osed...l h s leter we w i be iorced lo take iudher aclon
"l feit you were more than desetu ng of the Ffallner Award in 1 9981
Since th s de ay comb ned w th lh condil on oi the wdgels calsed us to lose an m
portanl
I ook foeard io hearing lrom you in the near fulure so that we may gel logether and sale. lee resl tulion most be made by yolr company I expecl 10 hear iiom vou w lh n
5 (five) wok ng days oi rece p1 oi this ener so thal we mav d sclss a ia r resolllon 'r]h s
d scuss the mater in greater detail.
mafter.
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I am extremely pleased to send you the en-closed resume'
1. Alwavs open wilh a statement of what the cover letter is covering. I am writing to you on behalf of our Production Manager. Bill
Ilansweriig an ad. open \ ilh a \arianl on: Spear in relard-to the problem of-.defective widgets received
"ln reqards to voirr ad in today's paper for an (repeat exact frbm your company on Dec. 8th of this year'
wording of adt. Then "l am eitreinely.."' 1. Comoinie: have liieraichies. Departments hare certain rerponsibilities. The
.... whic.-h I kndw you will find meets all your requirements. will. often. be differ'ent lrom Lhe person who suffered fie problem
persoh t,t,ritinq
2. Aside "think,
lrom addine flow ro the opening senlence. rhe ke1 word is knon.' 2. i\eedless rolav, il
the writer is the one directly impacted. lea\e out the
or 'hope.
'lf yoiarent sure. why should the reader be"'
Nerer beliere ohrase "... on behalf of...," etc.
I would be most inteiested in working with one of the 3. State immediatelv the specific problem. Whereas with individual complaints
preeminent companies in the field, and I know my experience (be1ow) it is nicessaiy to establish one's position' in- cross-company
and expertise would be a great asset to you.. complaints, your position vis-a-vis the other coinpany should be in place'
3. In the eiample we are general.In the letter you would, of course, name the As you ha've b'een informed on several obcasions, they arrived
comoanv and the area of your experience and expertise at our plant over a week late and in a damaged condition.
4. Do riot go into the details of the experience/expeitise. Let the resume do it' 4. Nor,r qo'into greater detail as lo lhe specif ics of the problem.
A goodiule of thumb: If you f ind yriurself writing s-omething like: 5. As v"ou have"been...'The formal letier is almost always a last resort. Tt is
"A! you will see from the enblosed...." STOP! lf they're going to incoiceivable that Bill Spear hasn't complained about the problem pre''riousl1. .
see it, let them! 6. In any event, assume this to be the case and, unless this becomes a tull legal
5. You ran embellish \ou may have of the company
on anv knouledge -l proceedinq. 1ou need not document 5uch prior conlact.
a. F.g. after "...pre-emineni .ompany.l felt 5ou were mote than deserving ol Unless rrile receive replacements foi this shipment within 5 (five)
the Faffner Award in 998.' 1
working days of rec6ipt of this letter, we will be lorced to take
b. Companies, like people. lo\e to hear praise
further action.
I lookiorward tci hdaring from you in the near future so that we
may get together and dlscuss ihe matter in qreater detail.
Since this delay, combined with the condition of the widgets,
YoutvE saidl.vhat you needed to say. You've enClosed your strength (the
caused us to lose an important sale, I feel restitution must be
6. made by your company. I expect to hear from you within 5 (five)
res-ume:.etc. ). c lose pol irely.
workind days ol receipt of this letter so that we may dlscuss a
Example (2) fair resolution of this matter.
7. This is the "action" statement.
a. What rou rav here depends on the resulls )ou \4anl.
We are exteme y p eased to send you the enc osed Barohads 2001 catalogue containing U. nma* statda specifit time frame in whic-h to receive those results
a complete listng of a I our study guides.
c. Alwa{s state the iesults you r.lant in dre affirmative, and ur the form of a statement.
Whileweknowyouwilliindmucholinterestthroughout,wespecficallywanttocal your not a'question. Never in"terms such as \A4lat do you plan to do about this?"
anention to pages 31-35, our Science Series, which we ieel wi I be of padicu ar help n Yours iruly,
meetng the needs you have described
8. Brief, succinct, to the Point.
We ookioeard 10 hearing lrom you soon, and to workng wth you in the fuiure 9. This iype of letter is riot the piace for "chit-chat" or mending fences, etc.
s"----------- lndividual Complaint to Company Letter
To Whom ft May Concerri: oiDear Customer Service Manager or
We are extremely pleased to send you the enclosed BarCharts 2001
catalogue, contdining a complete listing of all our study guides. f- Dear Cuslomef Service Manaaer:
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l. Similairo the opening ol Example (l) have been a cuslomer oi Neversur Atr nes ior manv vears (Do we arrv on tme"
While we kn<iw ydu will firid much of interest throu^ghout' we
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Wele Nevefsure! )
soecificallv wani to call your attention to pages 31-35, our 'd\edwd/ bee pr66 eo4 /oute (eDr0'6 'e'
p d d-' e p o'-e_ded ou
S'cience S-eries. which w6 feel will be of particular help in to manv oi mY irends and co leagles
meetino the needs vou have described. Therefore Vou can imag ne how angrv and dismaved I was atlh appall ng evenls I
2 This tvri of phrase is ihe only relevant change from (1) You either know enco!ntered on i ght 101 7 on Janlary I glh. from Los Ange es lo New York
or have'reason to believe, thaione part ofan extensire mailing is ofmore lh-0"-e{d' eo-'oloeo''A'd O-r' o5- rdonotederr'-:!- A
We look foiward to hearing from you soon, and to working with which did nol atrive lor more lhan 35 min ules aner mv arr va al baggage c arm When my
baa I nallv came down, il was in a r pped and iillhy condition mmedialey comp a rd
vou in the future. an; was acclsed oi kv ns 10 file a rase damage caim Your emplovees made il cearlh't
they thought had boarded the pane wilh uggage n lhls sotry slate, and was merery
3. Aeain, don't overload the cover letter. Let the enclosure speak tryngto mrk thecompanvlor new uggage
I have subm ned a cam lorlhe damaqe don to my uggage, and expecl t to be honored
completely and quickly Lj have not heard irom yo!r company regardiig ths wilh n 30
davs ofth s maling, I shal be iorcd 10 take i!ilher approprale measures
COMPLAINT LETTERS
E( a. Mention of the name of the company. along with its slogan, reinforces what
will follow.
7. This could be softened by, for example, use of the employee s name (Marv;
_Recentlyanumberof...),indbythep'ersonal I,"insteadofihecorporare"we."
b. Unlike the company letter (see: pterious page). the individual is not known
'T to the companv, so'identificatiori as a lone-tFrm customer adds weisht.
They aie as follows:
1. You have on more than one occasion arrived more than 10
,;ll|, I have alwayd been pleased with your exceptional servi6e, and minutes late for work.
have recommended you to many of my friends and colleagues. 2. You have taken well over your allotted hour for lunch on
'iI 4. Further "identification" of the writer.
5. Explanation of why he/she has used service (product).
numerous occasions.
3. Your work has, on one or more occasions, been late, incomplete,
6. Hii/her displeasure has ramifications ("... frii'nds and colleagues.") and sloppy.
.i,0 Therefore you can imagine how angry and dismay6d I was at 4. You have been rude to fellow employees and customers.
the appalling events I encountered on flight 1017 on January 5. You have kept others from their assigned tasks through
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19th, from Los Angeles to New York.
Gets to the reason for the letter in stronq terms conveving one's emotions.
disruptive or counterproductive behavior.
8. The body of the memo should, and must, cover all of the problems to
8. Set: up the specifics surrounding, comp-lainr. document the toralitr of lour complainr. wirhour going into such:pecific
The plane ivas scheduled to leave LAX at 10 a.m. (PST). lt did detail as to make the memo unwieidy or seem eithler dore importairt than
l, not leave until 12:45. At no time were passengers offered any it is ( excessive length adds import), or less so (too general a statement;
explanation for the delay. Indeed, on several obcasions when-l lou haren-t been pirlorming up ro par. makes it seeh less imponanlJ.
asked for one, I was rudely rebuffed and told to "be patient." Note: You ;hould mainrain. in your files. a full accounting ofeaih charge.
The plane did, finally, take off. Upon arrival in New York, I went includinp as mdny nanps, dires, ctc., a\ possible. I fris is for ofliiial
ia to claim my baggage, which did not arrive for more than 35 records," for use" in discussion with the enplovee. and/or to iustifv
minutes after my arrival at baggage claim. When my bag finally subsequent actions.
I came down, it was in a ripped and filthy condition. I immediately lf these matters aren't addressed and corrected immediately,
complained and was accused of trying to file a false damag6 we will have to take further action.
claim! Your employees made it clear ihat they thought I hed 9. This is the penultimate conclusion to the memo which, in the above, is left vague.
boarded the plane with luggage in this sorry state, and was l0.Thiscanvarytothestronger "lfthesematters...immediately.itcan(will)
merely trying to "milk" the company for new luggage. result in yciur dismissal-(reassignment)." or "If these matters aren't
9. Do not hold back on anv aspect of the complaint that is valid. resolved by the end of work on Friday, Aug. 19th we will be forced to ask
laric l 10.Key descriptive words, stich as (in theii appropriate place) "rudely for your resignation. etc.
To: rebuffed," "immediately,' 'made it clear," heiqfiien the situation. 1 1 . It can also be weaker, e.g. " Please try to see what you can do about this."
However, do not go offon tanqents such as "I hive never been treated this Ithink we should meet and disiuss this in-depth. Call me to set
way," or "l am an upstanding citizen who has never had so much as a up an appointment at your earliest convenience.
12. You must offer the emplovee an opportunitv to both hear the details of the
parking ticket." This self-justification is both time-consuming and complaint(s), and respbnd ro lheni.'
irrelevant. If one feels a companv is at fault, it does not matter if the fault 13 Thisis true even ifyou both know they are valid.
befalis the Pope or Jack the Ripp"er. There is no mitigation of responsibility I 4. fhis tan also be strenpthened to:
(or enhanced responsibility) based on the character of the customer. I will meet with you on Thursday, August 18th at 4 P.M. to
I have submitted d claim for the damage done to my luggage, discuss this.
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and lexpect it to be honored completely and quickly. lf I have not
heard from your company regarding this within 30 days of this
mailing, I shall be forced to take further appropriate measures.
This is the action statement:
15.If you have already met with the employee on these same matters, this step
cair be isnored. Bitt that must be addrissed in the memo.
We have discussed this on numerous occasions and see no
reason to rehash it ( No signature),
E. Since you will probably be unaware ofall company procedures regarding such a 16.But, again in keeping with the tone you wish to set, you can lighten that
matter, it is unwise to Dirt too restrictive a burden ori thern for full sa'iisfacti"on. You tone wlth a personal ?arker." or strensthen it with a foimal "ParkEr Plaise."
u can, however, give thdm a deadline for some appropriate response. Employee Complaint Letter
1 2. Enclose copibs of any materials vou feel arb relevant such as ticket stubs.
A. This may be the trickiest letter of all to write.
.[ claim check:. erc.
B. You wait to express vourself in the stronsest terms to achieve the result
In short, the bulk of the letter (statement of complaint, expectations of desired.
0 results) is similar lo lhe company lerter. The major difference is in rhe C.Yors do notwant to ruffle feathers to make an enemy within the company.
E.
looking to leave, if this is not"the case.
If
direc-ting a complaint to immediate supervisors or within your own
peneral oificerdistiict area. a memo is oreierable.
laric l locat10n.
F. IT, however, you are employed within, say, a branch of a large
B. Copied to appropriate personnel, but kept confidential from all others.
C. Cohtain all ieiev'ant coinplaints, but only those for which you have a firm
national/multinational corpoiation, and feel the need to direct"a
basls of knowledge. Foi example, a phrase such as: 'You spend far too
complaint to a CEO or other(s) at an office outside your own, a formal
letter should be used.
much lime rhinkiig about non'iob reiated business is rneak. You cannot
know what someoie else is thinking. However "You appear to spend too
1. Always a last resort, after all other avenues ofredress are closed.
G. Memo/Formal Letter Opening.
much time..." is o.k.. if based on o6servations.
Dear Ms Antropi
Contdenlial I have been an office manager wilh MercuUo Inc for over three years and va ue thal
exper ence high y. I have grown with lhe company, and s ncere y hope to conlinue to do
Recently a number of matters have come lo our attention that we feel have a serious mpaci so rcr many years ro come
on your job performance and the performance of the company.
In a I that trme. I have been proud ol the organ zat on and ol the pail have played in its
They are as fo lows: success. However, in recent weeks I have seen certain fends and polic es developing
LYou have on more than one occasion arrived more than 10 minutes late for work. wh ch I feel are detrimental both to my own posilion, and the tuture of the company. as
2 You have taken wel over your a lolled hour lor lunch on numeTous occas ons we L As you are aware, it has been the pol cy ol our company to promote managers
3.Yourwork has on one oT moTe occasons, been ale, incomp ele, and sloppy. lrom within. Personally, I began as a c erk was promoled io secretary, then assisiant
4.You hav been r!de to fellow emp oyees and cusiomers. manager, and then to my clrenl posit on of otlice manageT. I did so due to my own
5.You have kept others lrom their assigned tasks through disruptve or counleF abi it es and hard work and, especially, thanks to the company's recogn tion ol same.
produclrve behavior. ndeed, t js thal recogn tion thal has been the mainslay ol both my own oyalty and that
ol many oi my tel ow emp oyees.
ll these maners aren't addressed and cotrected mmediate y, we w I have io take
luilher aclion. Recenl y. however, was passed over ior a promot on, when my d str ci manager hired
someone Irom oulside ol our organizalion lo i I thls post. Of course, fell persona ly
Ithink we should meet and discuss th s in-depth Ca I me to sel up an appointment at betayed because believe I had proven myself wodhy of the posilion due to
your eail esi conven ence my job periormance and because had be6n ed to believe lhat the posiiion would be
mine by lhat very same distict manager. L4oreover, I have reason to belleve that othefs
{ feel th s to be a reversal of company pol cy and a threat to lheir own securily and
advancement ootent a.
7 Confidential I hasten to add. that I have absolutely no quesllon about the abi ity or pfofessional sm of
''g 1. The memo (or mailing) is confidential . State this for the record.
Recently, a numbel of matters have come to our attention that
we feel have a serious impact on your job performance and the
the person h red lor the posilion. A though I know very I tt e about him al this t me, am
sure he meels the h ghest slandards. Nor, do I be ieve, as others have suggested, thal
he was hired because he is lhe son oi a long time fr end of the district manager
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result you want.
The severity of the infractions and (tentative) conclusions drawn from
the near future 10 discuss a reso ulron 10 the problem. belore it is too late to make th nos
righlforalconcerned.
ggmpany u''ho may agree/disagree with your position. This is your problem.
z I haste,n to add, that I have absolutely no question about the ability
or professionalism of the person hired for the position. Although-l Written Signature /A/"Dl M",---_
ru know very little about him at this time, I am sure he meets the Typed Signiture
highest standards.
II . This is a moral, and montle, complaint. Keep it above personalities. Writer / actual typist
12. You may have to work with this person after all. Encl. . CC
13.I1^howeveryoufeelthatyour/ohavesufficientlysuperiorskillstomake this
an lssue. use ltl
"... highest standards, even though he has just graduated from Semi-Blocked Letter (Modified Block w/ indented paragraphs)
i( college; has never worked in our field; or, indeed, held any position As above, except each paragraph is set offnot only by double-spacing, but
of responsibility in the past." indentation of5 or 10 snaces.
This is known as the positive-negative. By listing the deficiencies or negative A. This was tfte standard for a// writing when handwritten materral was preval,
attributes of your rival as things you I'ould never consider. you put yourself above
the fiay. u'hile getting the information out, anyn'ay.
and typing was, by current standards. primitive.
Nor, do I believe, as others have suggested, that he was hired B. Today, when computers are the norm. and typewriters are state of the afi..
because he is the son of a longtime friend of the district manager. differentiation between paragraphs can be made clear without t
I More of the same
4. contrivance. Nevertheless, many people still adhere to it for comfort
l'm sure he was hired on his merit, and in a different situation would tradition.
prove a valued employee to this, or any other, company.
15. But... (" ...in a cliftbrent situation...") Square Letter
However, in this instance, I cannot help but feel that this matter, if A. Used onlr, to conserve snace.
not addressed immediately, will have a detrimental effect on the B. Same as'Full-Blocked except: Date appears on same line as start of ins
company as a whole, and possibly on my performance in particular. address (Flush right). and Reflinit., encl. appear on same line(s) as tyg
16. Remember, unless you are committed to the idea that you will leave unless the signature/ tit1e.
rnatrer i. re\ol\ed in lour favor. keep lour options open.
As I said at the outset, I love this company. I love working for it. I
would hate to see anything weaken that feeling, as I know you Return Address
would. I hope to be able to talk with you in the near future to discuss hside Address
a resolution of the problem, before it is too late to make things right
for all concerned. ATTENTION \ i;:;!iii;'
17. Keep the options open. Make the "threat" real. SrlutarionL ......
Sincerely
RF L
I 8. Better than:
''Yours trulv." becarrse vou are sincere.
Closine ^A \ /
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CREDITSI
Author; Steven l\,4. Berner convey sense ofspee4 ugency. etc.
Layout & Design: Andre D. Brisson B. Uses Fu1l-B1ock style but:
l. No Salutation.
0 ISBN-11 : 3?8-1,5?Pd-518-l i.rnt
2. Requires a "Regarding" line (ALL CAPS). but does not state "Re."
ISBN-1,[ : ],5?EEE5l,B-1, 3. No Closing t"Sincerely"tor urinen .ignarure.
,+. PRINTED SIGNATURE, TITLE (Al1 Caps) required.
{ Note: In all o/ the nbrne. uny direct qnotations, lists, or.similar material should
inclented to set thent opert. Typing this muterial in .fill-blocked Jbrn u,ill hishliCht it b,
,lllJ|lt|!illUU|||lli|]ll rfrrirrirfiilr However, in the case of quototions, one cun al.\o enter them us ther appear in the origir